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Reviews for Betrayal's Gift

By : LdyMoon
  • From ANON - Because I can on November 12, 2006
    Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Kougas rival on November 11, 2006
    Yo I know I haven't been reviewing in a while but I had to attend to some personal shit. But I did read when I had the time. I have to say that I am impressed this story is the hottest shit right now. I can't believe that you are just now reaching the climax and all this time I've been so damn worried. There is too much for me to comment on but I am posting this story under my favorites.
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  • From ANON - I am on November 11, 2006
    Great chapters I loved that I had at least three to read. Everything is so well written and you made sure you covered up any loop holes. Kagome trying to drown Hotaru that was deep. I was blown away what will you give us next?
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  • From ANON - Miroku's Dream on November 11, 2006
    Oh that made more sence. I figured something happened to Shippo but now that I read it I was like "NO!" Than I reread the next chapter and everything fell into place. On the bright side missing that chapter didn't leave anybody or at least me all confused like some.

    chpt 41
    I can't believe that you finally told me what she wrote in that letter. It was so sad and I could understand now why Miroku was looking at her crazy. That's a suicide note good chapter as always. And the journal entry was something I could see her saying and doing. It was very realistic.

    Carmen
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  • From ANON - chubbers on November 11, 2006
    aaaah it makes so much more sense now! cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Tainted Dreams on November 10, 2006
    That was a very intense chapter. --I felt bad for Kagome and Miroku and what they are facing right now.

    Then onto what Shippo and Inuyasha was dealing with.

    Wonderful update! Thank you.

    ~Tainted~
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  • From ANON - joy on November 09, 2006
    HOLY SHIIT!!! HOLY SHIIT!!! OMG! AMAZING GODLY DIVINE PLZ CONTINUE
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  • From ANON - Miroku's Dream on November 08, 2006
    What can I say I was hurt for Miroku and Kagome. I was nearly in tears when Inu-Yasha was faced with the worst delimma in his life. I had to twirl around in my chair to get over it and keep reading. I know that makes no sense at all, but trust me I did just that. I loved it great chapter and I look forward to your update.

    Carmen
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  • From ANON - chubbers on November 05, 2006
    so you've been watching anime huh? whats that best? i want to watch something like inuyasha, but i havent found anything good... isnt bleach on adult swim? i love how the story is coming so far!
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  • From ANON - Alice with chains on November 05, 2006
    I felt so bad for Kagome you wrote it out sot htat I could see her scraemng hestiracally. I see Miroku getting old and I felt so sad for them and then Shyippo dying whyd you do that? I can' t wati to read the next chatper so hurry and post it kay lol.
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  • From ANON - Angel on November 05, 2006
    Holy mayo batman! Did you just do what I think you just did???? Did you...kill...him??? And Sesshomaru what is it with his "Do it it's honorable" If I were Inu Yasha I'd say shut the fuck up! I felt so heart broken for Inuyasha and than to end in an evil cliff hanger AAAARRRGGGG I'm a twizzler I'm a twizzler!!!!

    Update!!!!

    PS sounds like you had a great time wish I had anime to watch for hours at a time.
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  • From ANON - ldytrista on November 05, 2006
    Review for chapters 11-15
    As I keep reading these chpaters it makes me feel like I don't want to stop because I want to read it more. So I anxiously await for time to read the next chapters see what their lives reveal.
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  • From ANON - Tainted Dreams on November 02, 2006
    I loved the last 3 chapters. You have done such a amazing job with this story.--Lots of twists and turns. A wonderful read.

    Hope to see more soon!

    ~Tainted~

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  • From ANON - Kawaii Kirara on October 30, 2006
    I really luv this story, and hope that you continue soon! You are doing too well so I don't have any requests! And that is a first for me! Keep up the good work!

    TTFN;
    megan
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  • From ANON - Joy on October 26, 2006
    Hello, I've not reveiwed your story in a while, and I would like to say you are doing a great job! Please dont kill off Hotoru i love her
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