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Reviews for Betrayal's Gift

By : LdyMoon
  • From TheRealHotaru on October 26, 2006
    *Jumps for joy* Inuyasha's going to stay with me!!! But then again why wouldn't he? We are hopelessly in love.

    Okay now that I got that out of my system. This chap totally rocked. so sexy just thinking of Sess growling with lust over Hitomi's dark purple arua. I can't wait to find out how their going to get rid of Hitomi's stupid evil ego. Trying saying that five times fast. Anyway I can't wait for your next chapter. Please update soon.
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  • From Rebeldedm on October 24, 2006
    luv it update soooooon! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 24, 2006
    I;ll kill you if you don't update this great story.
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  • From ANON - Angel on October 24, 2006
    You've got me pulling out my hair since I've no more nail to chew away. I've got broken flesh on my fingertips. She has got to be Midoriko's reincarnation!!!! UPdate or I'll I'll I'll I've got nothing update soon
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  • From ANON - Hitomi's cheerleader on October 24, 2006
    Great chpater I loved how Hitomi cupped Sesshomaru in her spiritual form. I could see just a cloud of Purple smoke traveling his body and fondeling him. I'd like to see her do mor to that guy, I guess she was getting him back for their earlier episode when he used his powers up againt (grrrrr) Hotaru I hate saying her weak name blah. I spit it from my mental mouth. Update.
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  • From ANON - Mirouk's Dream on October 24, 2006
    Inu Yasha is so mean and oohs on teh dairy entry. I so remember that episode and I think you hit her feelings right on teh nail like a lead hammer. It's what I thought she felt. Til next week then.

    ps. Yyeah your sister should come down. I have three kids all older now my youth went into raising them...and oh how I wished back than I cold have gotten a brake.

    Carmen
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  • From ANON - I am on October 24, 2006
    Hotaru reminded me of Kagome when she yelled at Sesshomaru. Sesshomaru is such an ass---ie a very cute one.
    Updatre soon.
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  • From ANON - chanda on October 22, 2006
    There I spelled my name right this time...lol. (Damn Typo's) Great update. I can't wait until she digs deeper into the journal...update soon.

    Chanda

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  • From ANON - Miroku's Dream on October 16, 2006
    Why would they make up that rule???? Damn possessive youkai they don't want her yet they don't want anyone else to have her either. You must have been feeling a bit angry with the power men have over women when you wrote it. That's what I got. But it makes for very interesting plot. ^_^ I love how she reacted to reading the journal it was like I was reading manga I actaually saw the pictuers in my head. Can't wait for the next read.

    Carmen
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  • From ANON - I am on October 16, 2006
    I just have to say that I had to make a review. See, I read stories according to the reviwes and your amount of reviews looked promising. I read for the past two days I've read and I love your story. Hotaru is such a strong character. I mean she is real she coud be part o f the show and I'd watch it. I totally forget that she is not one of the original characters on teh show and I ove reading stories like that. I'm hooked so I'll be back to read more.

    Your story is by far one of the best written and most original drama in a long time compared to most of this stuff beign uploaded now. Please keep pu the good wrok.
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  • From ANON - Angel on October 16, 2006
    Girl you just don't know when to quit! But don't stop update soon cuz I'm like @.@

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  • From ANON - Anon on October 16, 2006
    Pleeeeaaaazzzzz update! This story is awesome. And thank you for your concern for us northerners. I did get a lot of snow but thankfully, my electricity is still on.
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  • From ANON - Cathy on October 16, 2006
    The twist the turns, the on the edge of your seat story of the year. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next. I just love this story.
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  • From TheRealHotaru on October 15, 2006
    I'm totally teed off! Just I was getting into it the chapter ended. I need more, must have more.

    I thought this chap was writen really good. I loved the diary enteries and how Hotaru is finding out how Kagome came to know everyone. I sure soon she is going to get the shock of her life when she finds out her mother was in love with inuyasha and how she betrayed him.

    You have to update soon because I have to know what's going to happen when Sess has his meeting with Hotaru.
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  • From Sonyasha on October 15, 2006
    yay!!!! another awsome chapter. i can't wait to read more. please update the next chapter soon. i can't wait!!!! ^^

    Ja-Ne =^_^=
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