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Reviews for Betrayal's Gift

By : LdyMoon
  • From ANON - chnanda on October 14, 2006
    Oh, and the drama continues..lol..but that's what's so good with this story. All the little twists and turns. Yes, I live up north and yesterday it unfortunately snowed. Yuck!!!

    Well look, forward to you're next update.

    Chanda
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  • From ANON - trista on October 13, 2006
    I must say that this story is very interesting I'm only on chapter 11 so I can't wait to see what happens. I'll prolly get on later on and read again.
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  • From ANON - Angel on October 10, 2006
    *Pulls at hair* OOHHHH MYYYYY GAWDDDDD! SORI 4 THE KIDS REALLY BUT UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Cathy on October 10, 2006
    I've caught up on this story and I can't even begin to start. This is a great story I tell ya. So many twist and turns. Oh my word is she going to die? I don't know and I love it.


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  • From Sonyasha on October 09, 2006
    Hey there, great chapter. i like the new obsticle that you put in. i can't wait to read more. please update this soon. that is when your kids have calmed down ^^

    Ja-Ne =^_^=
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 08, 2006
    plz update good s tory
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  • From ANON - Hitomi cheerleader on October 08, 2006
    yeah let her die and bring out Hitomi!!!!
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  • From ANON - Miroku's Dream on October 08, 2006
    OOOOOHHHHH you just keep adding more twist is he going to change his mind and than regret it. Than he can use his third wish and she'll be fine becz he could wish her mind healthy without the Hitomi person in it.

    Just speculating keep up the good work thanks for the update.

    Carmen
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  • From ANON - The real Hotaru on October 08, 2006
    Okay, I know this has to have a happy ending so I'm not going to start freaking out just yet. But I'm warning you if he changes his mind and she goes mad and dies and I don't get my happy ending; I'm going to hunt you down and make you rewrite it. So you better do it right the first time :) Other then that this chappy was great. More please!
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  • From ANON - Sorceress on October 07, 2006
    Another great chapter, Hmm I am trying to remember but what happened to Rin, just wanted to asks because she was with Sesshoumaru and it is 18 years later which should make she about 24 or 26 base on her being either 6 or 8.
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  • From ANON - chanda on October 07, 2006
    Great update. Sesshomaru gave him an earful...rightfully so...lol. Hope to see your update soon. Good luck with your kids.

    Chanda
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on October 03, 2006
    I am sorry I have not reviewed in a bit. I have not been on the site that much.

    I loved the updates, all of the chapters was wonderfully written.--You really have a good story here.--You have thrown me a few times on what I thought was going to happen, and I love that.

    Hope to see more soon.

    ~Tainted~
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  • From ANON - The real Hotaru on October 03, 2006
    I feel bad for Kagome. I know she did him wrong but the fact that we all know how much she really did love him makes it hard for me to feel she got what she deserved. I don't even want to think about how Hotaru is going to react when she reads her mothers diary. I know she's going to feel betrayed. And poor Inuyasha and Miroku. I think I've spent about seven hours reading and the sad thing is now that I'm all up to date I wish I wasn't, So I could read more. To bad for me I guess. Well, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - The real Hotaru on October 03, 2006
    I am so happy Inuyasha finally admited his love and to make things even better, He is now my mate :)
    But the thing that sucks is that by doing so he got his revenge. Well, maybe that's good, he gets to have his cake and eat it too! I wonder how her parents are going to react.
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  • From ANON - The real Hotaru on October 03, 2006
    I'm hooked! it's three in the mourning and I can't stop reading. Hitomi is pure evil, but she kind of grows on you. oh and this one was also very sexy. Off to read more.
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