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Reviews for Betrayal's Gift

By : LdyMoon
  • From ANON - The realHotaru on October 03, 2006
    OH...MY...GOD! AAAAAGGGGGHHHHH. I almost died think he was going to just take Hotaru's body like that. This chap was pretty short but let me tell you, it had me heart beating fast.
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  • From ANON - The real Hotaru on October 03, 2006
    It one was SEXY, funny, it had some mistery, and drama. You couldn't have wrote it any better even if you tried. It was perfect!
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  • From ANON - The real Hotaru on October 03, 2006
    Ok. I love how your playing this out. Inuyasha wants his revenge but while he's trying to get it he falls in love with her. As for the owl lady I think she just killed the butterfly woman. Sorry I'm bad with names but I know you know what I mean.
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  • From ANON - Therealhotaru on October 02, 2006
    Loving it. Loving it. I need more. I'm happy there is more for me to read. Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - therealhotaru on October 02, 2006
    The battle scene was writen really good. I was totally into it. I like the way Inuyasha handaled Shippo's situation. However I'm not crazy about the Hitumi chick (or what ever her name is). She must go!!! You know as in DIE!!!

    :)
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  • From TheRealHotaru on October 02, 2006
    So much to say. where to start?

    Kuma is a B_ _ _h! how dare she scare Hotaru like that. She got what she deserved after all he could of just killed her. Another thing about your story that was so snikin cool was the bath scene. I don't believe Hotaru pleasured herself in front of Inuyasha. I laughed how he got upset that he broke eye contact first. Oh yeah, and that note Kagome wrote, she could have ended it with I love you, what's wrong with her?

    I'm off to read more.
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  • From TheRealHotaru on October 02, 2006
    I really enjoyedhapter 26. I know I'm still so far behind but I'm catching up. Anyway, this chap seems to be mainly about the starting plans of revange. I can't wait to see what it going to be. I guess I should go ahead and keep on reading.
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  • From ANON - Sorceress on October 01, 2006
    Kagome just needs to get over it let Inuyasha and her daughter be happy because it is looking that way I hope that all goes well for them all.
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  • From ANON - Hitomi's cheerleader on October 01, 2006
    Kuul storie -__- plz update and I want to see more Hitommi and InuYasha. Are you going to make a sex scene with them two in it. Plz do. They rock. Hotaru is a nice girl but she is to nice Inu needs a badass chick like Hitomi.
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  • From ANON - Miroku's dream on October 01, 2006
    OMG! What does this mean??? I can't wait to see what is written in the journals I am so excited rite now I don't know how to handle myself. I waited two whole weeks, two whole weeks and now I'm going to have to wait another one. This is such a good story. I swear. Kags is so distraught she had that dream for a reason and ooohs again my poor Miroku was just cut down to the quick! I need to go soothe him he needs my love now. And Inuyasha is so mean, he enjoyed it he really did, but I understand why he did. Keep up the good work ldymoonluvsinuyasha. Plz don't make me wait so long next time. =^__^=


    Carmen
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  • From ANON - chubbers on October 01, 2006
    its sbout time you updated! just kidding ;) too bad i wont be at home the next time you update :(.......if its not too much trouble would you ba able to email when when you finish the story? im going away till oct.24th and im afraid i wont be able to find the story by then. my email is kristin_sinha@yahoo.com thanks so much if you can keep me updated.
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  • From ANON - chanda on October 01, 2006
    Ld, you had me in tears...I can't help but feel bad for Kagome. I know she was wrong for cheating on him, but still.

    You wrote Kagome's emotions out so well. I tell you what if that was my daughter...with my ex...oh boy, and I saw them do that. Sorry I'm in shock...LMAO!

    I wonder how her daughter is going to find out in the journal, and how's she's going to react.


    Loved it can't wait until your next chapter.

    Chanda
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  • From ANON - Angel on September 30, 2006
    First off I'd like to say that I was checking this site all week long since you didn't post last week I was like AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRGGGG but now that I finally saw the update I'm no longer a green beasty.
    Now for Kags damn she got it up the ass that was something and I feel for poor Miroku she just keeps hurting him. And I'm like so wanting to know what is in the journals, hurry and tell me ok. Plz update soon!!!! ^__^
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  • From ANON - nightshadows on September 20, 2006
    I apologize I typed in my name all scrambled up. But, again great story.
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  • From ANON - nisghtshadws on September 20, 2006
    You have such a great imagination and a good sense of story telling. You capture your audience's mind and demand their attention so what I am saying is that you have my applaud.
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