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Reviews for Betrayal's Gift

By : LdyMoon
  • From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2006
    Pwease up date this iz such a kool stry.
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  • From ANON - Eng101 on September 20, 2006
    This is outstanding. I've never met an original character that I thought about rooting for. I usually like to read just the characters, but, you threw in this Hotaru person and made her part of the story. I was totally kicked in the head from the beginning. Really I was blown away. This story is in so many words stupendo, magnifico, etc etc etc. I await your update eagerly. It gives me something to do when my teacher is just constantly listening to her own voice.
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  • From ANON - sunshyne on September 20, 2006
    I have really enjoyed this story, I hope to read more soon.
    Thanks for writing it!
    Sunshyne
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  • From ANON - ldytrista on September 18, 2006
    Wonderful, just wonderful. I've been reading but always forget to update because I'm still thinking about your story, seriously. I guess this is the point where the plot thickens. Is Inuyasha only using Hotaru or will he really learn to love again. And Hotaru is so brave to try and love once more and with a man who is secretely using her.
    I feel for everyone in this story. Are Miroku and Kagome going to pull through and realize that they are stuck with each other now? What else is going to happen? I'm so excited. You manage to take everyone on this roller coaster ride and the magic starts to happen we become the herione and feel everything that she feels and when the story is put away we are still left thinking about it and playing the role in our heads. That's real talent.
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  • From ANON - Angel on September 18, 2006
    This story ROCKS U got that!!!! I'm like this @ @ right now. Really I am.
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    Plz update soon.

    oh, and I know exactly what it feels like to be the bologna in that sandwhich. My car was gone, nothing but scrap when it was all done. I had to pat myself down when I got out just to make sure that I was still in my body.
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  • From ANON - Cathy on September 18, 2006
    I am so sorry to hear about your friend and her car. I hope that she is alright. I send her my prayers.

    Now this chapter oh my word, it was lovely. I am so happy that they finally made love and that he made her his mate. I wonder if he'll regret it. And what does his Jeanie mean htat his second wish was fulfilled? You left so many questions unanswered. Like what does Kagome feel now? I can't wait to read your next chapter.

    Wonderful work as usual. Please keep it up.
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  • From ANON - The real Hotaru on September 18, 2006
    Ok I'm still playing catch up in my reading. It's really late and this is the last chapter I'm going to read tonight. To bad for me this chapter ended on a sad note. At first I was all like "I'm so happy Inuyasha's going to see her grandma" then you tell me she's dead. Kay, I kinda new that was coming but still. Now I have to go to bed sad. Oh well, I'll have to read some more another time. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!
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  • From TheRealHotaru on September 18, 2006
    Just read another chapter and it was just as good. I melted in my seat at the thought of Inuyasha swimming in the hot spring. OH SO SEXY!!! And hey, if I was Hotaru I'd be willing to for get about all the bad things that happen to me and be willing give myself to Inuyasha. Oh wait I'm Hotaru. And I don't mind begging *evil smile*
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  • From TheRealHotaru on September 17, 2006
    Your so evil in so many ways. But I'm so hooked I don't think I can go on without knowing what happens next. Great chapter! I kind of felt bad for ken, but at the same time I don't. I just don't know how I feel. I kind of think that's what you were going for. If it was then it worked!
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  • From ANON - loserlost on September 17, 2006
    Hey I absolutley love your story its the best one i've read so far. You could be a rreal writer some day well catch ya on the flip side
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  • From ANON - Miroku's Dream on September 17, 2006
    OOOHHHH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    HE MARKED HER AND THAT WAS KAGOME HOW DOES SHE FEEL WHY DID YOU LEAVE THE EVIL CLIFF WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY???????????????????????

    CAN YOU UPDATE TOMORROW???????????

    no, ok, I'll wait Great chapter can he make me fly into the night with my hair all tangled up so gracefully? and *whistles* that is one powerful split personality miko there. keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Sorceress on September 16, 2006
    Wow he marked her as his mate, that in itself would piss off Kagome. :) I hope that he doesn't hurt her, she really doesn't need it. I love your story hon I can't wait to read the rest.
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  • From Sonyasha on September 16, 2006
    YAY!! another great chapter, i love this story. i can't wait to read the next one. please update soon.

    Ja-Ne =^_^=
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 16, 2006
    aww...yay for inuyasha and hotaru! well like they always say, the third times a charm..... wait... what was his second wish???
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  • From Sonyasha on September 13, 2006
    Hey there i read all of these chapters and i must WOW!!!!! i haven't read inuyasha like this before. i surprised, SO much. everything in this story is writen greatly, i love to read more of this. oh and cause of read this story i keep drawing the charcters more often then i used to and they coome out better then i used to draw. i'll send you a picture when i'm done with them. but in the mean time. Please update this story again i really can't wait to read another chapter.utill then.

    Ja-Ne =^_^=
    ~Sonyasha
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