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Reviews for Betrayal's Gift

By : LdyMoon
  • From YoukaiObsessed on December 21, 2006
    A wonderful ending to a well thought out-wonderful story.

    I have eminently enjoyed reading this one from the beginning to the end. Very well written, and very intense.--You took my emotions all over the place with this story.

    Wonderful--wonderful job on this!

    Thank you for the lovely reading experience. (I hope you have a magnificent Holiday, and a wonderful New Year!)-- I will be looking for more stories from you. Till then....

    ~Tainted
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  • From ANON - chubbers on December 20, 2006
    the perfect ending to the perfect story! i loooved this story you totally rocked my socks off (hehehe) i put off finishing my anne rice book (taltos)so i could read your story. feel loved cause practically NOTHING comes between me and anne rice (except a certin 1 1/2 year ols that is!) now i have to read your other stories. be looking for me cause "i'll be back"
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  • From TheRealHotaru on December 19, 2006
    I was so happy to see everybody had their happy endings. I love how you gave us each of their points of view.
    More so I LOVED this story in it's full. I said it once if not a thousand times, you are truely a gifted writer.

    I'm so happy that you shared with us all your great talent. You managed to do more then just entertain us, you allowed us to share in all the feelings of these charactors. We had happy moments as well as heart wrenching ones, but with each emotion we found something more, a connection. Not just to charactors but to the story in whole and more importantly a connection to a writer who shared this master piece with us. You Thank us for reading your story but we should be thanking you for sharing it with us, so...

    THANK YOU!

    And I look forward to sharing the next one with you ;)

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  • From TheRealHotaru on December 19, 2006
    :)

    SO HAPPY!!!!

    I'm even happier I waited until my husband was at work to read this, because I was screaming in happiness and dancing around the livingroom like a druged up fool! This is honestly the best story I ever read and the ending was PERFECT!!!
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  • From TheRealHotaru on December 19, 2006
    OMG! This is getting so darn good it's not funny. I need more, so I'm off to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Kikyo18 on December 19, 2006
    That was totally awesome update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Miroku's Dream on December 19, 2006
    Oh I can't believe that you put up the epilogue I came on just becasue I was bored and there it is of coarese I read it and I cried...I had to fan my face and lord woman did you have to make them have so many kids???!!!I'm glad that she's immortal and I luv the fact that she's a goddess she should be thank you for putting me on your list of thank yous you I didn't do much really just reviewed what I liked as any good person would do. And i look forward to reading that story can't wait til next year. happy holidays to you and yours.

    Carmen
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  • From ANON - Kougas Rival on December 18, 2006
    That was beautiful it was just I can't beleive that happy tears are coming out of my eyes. Everything was beautiful the ending for the story was perfect you couldn't ask for more and the epilogue...it was so happy everyone is just so stanking happy for the damn holidays this was the best gift that you couldn've given me.
    Thank you for putting me on that list of people you thanked. I don't know for some reason I felt happy seeing my name there that was nice and I was one of them who had a comment by my name I felt special *glomps*

    OBTW, that story your going to do next year does sound interesting I'd like to read it. Merry X-mas and happy new year to you and your family hope that this years brings you all the things you didn't get in this year.
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  • From ANON - joy on December 18, 2006
    omg ty for finishing i luv u!!!!!!!!! lol well meery christmas and have wealth and prosperity through 2007
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  • From ANON - Miroku's Dream on December 18, 2006
    Oh my god I can't sniffle believe its sniffle over...though it was a very exciting story I'm going to read it again from beginning to end. Do you have any new stories in mind?? I'd love to read them and when are you going to update on that funny one Sugar something??? But yeah, I'd like to see who she has sex with next. I will definately be here to read your epilogue.

    Carmen
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  • From ANON - Cathy on December 17, 2006
    This was such a good story a great story cant wait to read the epilogue please enjoy your holiday
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  • From ANON - Inu-Shinta on December 17, 2006
    I really like this story. I especially enjoyed how you brought Hotaru and Hitomi back together.
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  • From ANON - Kougas Rival on December 15, 2006
    Damn that was some intense moments right there. I could see InuYasha like totally loosing it. I...I was choked up for real too. I mean and than you say that there is one more chapter and that's it???? I'm like how can that be this isn't happy. I mean I pretty sure that Hotaru is going to kick some major ass right and than she and Inuyasha will be together but...what about Shippo, damn even Miroku and Kagome since you know they had to betray Inuyasha to get the jewel back so it's not there fault really???? So many questions and one more chapter to answer them in.
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  • From ANON - Angel on December 15, 2006
    I don't know what to say...I was crying when Miroku died everyone is dead...but I know that something will happen at the end of the story something good! I hope!


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  • From YoukaiObsessed on December 14, 2006
    Another very intense chapter from you. I heart the way you have pulled everything together.

    I cannot wait to see/read the fight between the two of them.

    Thank you!

    ~Tainted
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