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Reviews for Sesshomaru and Inuyasha's Romance

By : Inuyasha72187
  • From ANON - Zena McClain on August 21, 2016

    When ever you made this Inuyasha fanfiction, the year is now 2016, I want you to finish this fanfiction. Please:) ;) 


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  • From ANON - sma_orlando on December 26, 2014
    Please finish this story.
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  • From Inuyasha72187 on October 22, 2007
    Trying to see reviews...
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  • From ANON - gen on November 23, 2006
    hmmm.
    hard for me to make a review - of this.
    you have good chapter headings -
    but you dont write enough in each chapter for the title to make sense

    it also seems that you arent sure of your characterizations
    all of your characters "waffle"
    none of them are decisive.... enough
    one or two characters can be weak - but certainly not all of them

    however, i could be wrong
    what did you want your story to say?
    i dont mind if characters are OOC but
    you need them to stay in character for your fic
    even if they dont correspond to anyone else's perception of them
    for as long as they remain true within the fic

    they all seem to experiment without sense and purpose
    makes them look weak and purposeless
    if the scenes were more explosive i'd call this xxx - or porn
    but they arent explicit enough....
    so that wasnt your purpose
    (i mean i've read fics that were shamelessly PWP and i dont mind those
    they were labelled - as so)
    - so what was the purpose

    you have the makings of a good writer, but you need to define your characters better

    i'm just sharing with you what i dont like
    and i'm just one among many

    what kind of characters did you want them to be?
    they seem to be jumping in different beds without much discretion
    and all of them?

    of course you could have an explanation why they're doing this ...
    but you have to make this believable too....

    good luck!

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  • From ANON - Anon on November 11, 2006
    i have to agree with others. this story is a mess.
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  • From Inuyasha72187 on July 27, 2006
    I can't see my reviews, so I'm trying to see if this will work.
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  • From ANON - Stacy on January 10, 2006
    I don't get how you guys find it confusing...Inuyasha and Kagome are having fights like they always do....Ok so I'm not perfect at saying where they are or what they're doing, but whatever.
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  • From on November 24, 2005
    I agree with you all. I find it really confusing... o_o, i got to chapter 2 and gave up. I'm sure it is a nice story... but its just to confusing to read. I usually don't waste my time with them. I think some others would say the same.
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  • From ANON - The Seeker on October 01, 2005
    I don't mean to hurt your feelings....but i can't even read this....its a mess and i have no idea whats going on.
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  • From serialcabbit78 on September 29, 2005
    Ah... Anyway, you do have a good plotline, but just a little bit more expansion and it could be fantastic

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  • From Inuyasha72187 on September 29, 2005
    I wanted to be the first to review it....I love my story...hehe...Anyway, I know they seem like sluts, but I have to do something to keep me pulled in, otherwise I get bored of it....
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  • From ANON - TheMysticalDragon on September 29, 2005
    Hun, sometimes reviewin your story is okay, not to knock you for it, i do it myself, but hide it. Your story is decent, but confusing, you hop around too much. You make your charectors look like they just hop into the sack with anyone, a little more expance and experience should help you.
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  • From Inuyasha72187 on September 29, 2005
    This is a great story. Update soon please...
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