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Reviews for A Short Cut

By : Silent Pluto
  • From ANON - Ms Anonymous on December 17, 2006
    If you had cut the entire 6 chapters out and left only the lemon, it would have been good. If I had wanted to read some crazy OC story I would have gone to fanfiction.net. Honestly I skimmed the first few chapters and basically knew the plot by just a few paragraphs.

    Also, girls don't squirt cum. I know the little Manga-hentai stories sometimes portray a woman's orgasm as some wonderful gusing thing, like a fountain of white goo, but in reality; no. Just..no.
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  • From ANON - yvonne on September 14, 2006
    ahhh.. poor miroku...i feel bad...he said i love you and then when sango found out about his plan they go back to fighting........

    i loved they ending though never saw it coming!!!
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  • From ANON - Trampled_Rose on August 14, 2006
    I loved it, especially the ending, it was like an episode..a lemony one lol.
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  • From ANON - bjonsie13 on June 19, 2006
    i liked how u kept the characters in character throughout the entire story. and i absolutely love the ending! it was hilarious! thanks for the great story. this is the best miroku/sango i've read yet.
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  • From ANON - Deep Serenity on April 30, 2006
    This was pretty good!, I love all the scenes with the other fox demons it was creative and well thought out. It was very good indeed. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Kopurui on February 09, 2006
    LOL I loved it, woot! The ending was awsome great job, keep up the good work awsomw job!!!


    Kourui
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  • From ANON - Kourui on February 09, 2006
    Wow great chapter the lemon was a litte dry lol but still good, awsome job ^_^ LOL Miroku was trying so hard to ^_~


    Kourui
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  • From ANON - Kourui on February 09, 2006
    LOL That was a funny chapter, LOL I loved the end were Miroku kept singing over and over I'm not dreamng ^_^ Awsome job!!!


    Kourui
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  • From ANON - Kourui on February 09, 2006
    LOL sangos mad now, ^_^ Yeah awsom job, Oh my god poor Sango I wonder if Miroku new or if it was only the foxs...hmmm? Anyway awsome job I loved it!!!


    Kourui
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  • From ANON - Kourui on February 09, 2006
    Hmm...Miroku is a bit OOC He would never actualy harm someone like that threaten them maybe but not harm, I'm just saying awsome job though keep it up!!!


    Koirui
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  • From ANON - Kourui on February 08, 2006
    LOL Ilove How Miroku seems jelous of Binx, LOL Awsome job on this chapter a little to shore for my liking but still good ^_^


    Kourui
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  • From ANON - Kourui on February 08, 2006
    Wow awsome second chapter...Hmm Binx seems alot like Shippou and inuasha out together ^_^ LOL I wonder what they would say if they met him ^_^ LOL ANyway awsome job I loved this Chapter WOOT@


    Kourui
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  • From ANON - Kourui on February 08, 2006
    WOW AWSOME JOB I LOVEDTHE FIRST CHAPTER! WOOT WOOT! Keep up the good work, I hope the next chapter is just as awsome!!!


    Kourui
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  • From ANON - Redlightspin on January 24, 2006
    That would be such a typical scenario for that couple it fits their romance to a key
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  • From ANON - Hideous Roots on November 21, 2005
    I really loved how you did the lemon!! It was so touching, I almost started crying! It's so rare that I see an adult fiction with a well thought out sex scene--one that isn't rushed or written for the author's own gratification. GREAT JOB!! Please write more Miroku/Sango fics like this!
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