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By : Xakana

From ANON - Kara on March 22, 2010
I am not worthy DEEP BOW WOW INTENSE CRY your eyes out.A horrifingly lovely bit of angst I thank you again yours in admiration KarenAnnLacey!!!!!
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From ANON - ashiya on December 30, 2006
That was well written and I see it must take a very brave person to write about that the way you did. I would just like to leave a word for everyone on the site though. It's just a story guys. I mean, I've been through something similar (but no I didn't feel love, only hatred) and I created a LOLI story. You know, lolicon? It EXISTS as much as people wish it didn't, but what I'm trying to say is, it's just FICTION. If pedos enjoy it or not, man don't let that stop you because then no one would be able to write about rape, because it would encourage rapists; no one would be able to write about drugs, because it would encourage using it; man NARUTO would be completely censored because it could encourage violence among kids!! Do you see what I'm trying to say? Just take a chill pill guys... it's fiction. Reality is so much different.
But anyway, I liked how you handled the subject, well done. Sorry if I ranted.
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From ANON - Sexycat on October 05, 2006
OMG, I started to cry when I read it. When I was 11 a stranger do terribal things to me. Lucky for me he was captur and got 3 years in jail. I wish he had got more years.
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From ANON - Anne on August 11, 2006
Okay I'd just Like to say that Back then it was normal for girls as young as 10 to be married to men 20 or so. In the times in Sess was a human it would be considered normal. So its not really rape.
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From ANON - kagome on January 29, 2006
I read your storyit sound like what somebady did to my.I m not going to say any names .
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From ANON - Zalphene on January 01, 2006
Very well written. It was dark and...creepy. Is Rin the normal age in this? Like 8 or so? Just curious. Anyway, it was extremely well done. :)
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From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2005
not disterving I was taken as a virgin at 8 with a 14 year old,
and now he's my husband,
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From ANON - ladyp on December 07, 2005
goodness.. i got a chance to read all the reviews after i submitted mine and hell.. it was almost as entertaining as the story itself =P i can't believe the stuff ppl got anal on!!! i mean.. really.. it's FICTION.. has any of them cracked a dictionary to see the meaning?? the most ridiculous thing is that they kept telling u that u were a great writer but that u should write on better things.. WTF? content half-makes the writer.. we can all learn the rules to language and express proficiently, but it's the stuff that we choose to express that makes us unique.. u were gracious enough to reply.. i woulda thrown them bones o.O i'm gonna go check the rest of your stuff now.. i hope no more reviewers ask for a lemon-version of this though.. that's just disturbing on every level.
huggles.. u deserve a toast! i will buy u a drink =)
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From ANON - ladyp on December 07, 2005
ahh.. i can definitely see why you'd be getting flamed up your ass.. well, in my opinion, you did your best with the disclaimer and you should have no further responsibility beyond that. manipulation is evil.. young minds just aren't strong enough to stand against clever lies and so-called "love". it's just disgusting that most child abuse cases DO take place between family members.. the world is ugly. you didn't make it ugly.. it's just ugly on its own. so i stand with you against the flame-throwers. i guess most ppl have just been sheltered from this type of shit so they are in denial. either that, or they just took it personal that u tainted their beloved sesshy =P
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From ANON - lalamoon on November 29, 2005
in some way i wish you would remove this. in another, maybe you should leave it. these things need to be addressed. could you write a fic about the kind of strength it takes to get over this? I would like that.
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From ANON - pheonix on November 19, 2005
I love thsi fic. Anon, Sesshomaru would never rape anyone, or hurt/degrade Rin in such a manner. (A part we never see of him? WTF?
Where did it show him going around acting like a rapist, plus I think Jaken would take Rin away if he did)

Again I think this is an awesome fic. To me it wasn't a dark fic, more of a semi-light fic. No one should bother you with, such things as why do you hate Sesshomaru/etc. This is what fanfics are about. (yours is very nicely done)

Please make a sec. Chapter. Also nice one about the Jakin thing. (When Rin asked if Sesshomaru should od it to him. Ha ha ha ha )
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From ANON - Anon on November 09, 2005
It's a shame that people are giving you a hard time about this. it's very well done and honestly, it doesn't seem OOC. It just seems more like a part of him that we never see.
Screw the ones that can't handle this and they're looking for a Rin as Mary Lou story.
Keep up the great work!
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From ANON - LediShae on November 06, 2005
I like the story thus far, and its well written. Very dark, lots of potential. I hope to read more.
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From ANON - H. S. Hines on November 03, 2005
Okay, responding to ^_^...

To answer the question, NO, I DO NOT THINK SESSHOMARU WOULD EVER RAPE ANYONE, child, adult, anyone. Every other part of your flames have been addressed elsewhere. Since I invited flames for this story, I didn't remove the one on this one, despite the advice of moderators to do so. However, next time you choose to review someone, I do hope that you offer something constructive and don't focus entirely on your sadistic desire to troll someone you've never met and who never would have done this to you or anyone else. The closest thing to a negative comment I've ever left for someone was that they should look into getting a beta reader and the only reason I even said it was because I thought their story was wonderful and wanted them to improve as a writer and betas help a lot of people do that.

~Xak
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From ANON - ^_^ on November 02, 2005
I read your fic, I read your reviews (including your response), and I read your author's note. I am a Sesshomaru+(Older)Rin couple supporter and that will always stick to me no matter how others feel about it. I have seen all the episodes and movies 1-3 of InuYasha and no where in them does Sesshomaru strike me as the raping or taking advantage of kid Rin sexually type. I haven't read the mangas yet, probably won't since I don't care for those, but a question I have for you is (if you read all the mangas) and I want an honest one: WHERE IN THE MANGA DOES IT HINT OR SPILL OUT THAT SESSHOMARU IS A RAPIST OR CHILD MOLESTER?

I'm not saying you said that, its just a question; please answer that. Seeing Sesshomaru's personality, I don't believe him to degrade himself to such things. Kid Rin and Sesshomaru in the beginning does have a father and daughter like relationship ^^ that is clear enough... she adores Sesshomaru and respects him. As she continues to follow Sesshomaru, she will grow up into a beautiful woman someday and when that happens Sesshomaru will more than likely not look at her as a daughter anymore and Rin's adoration will turn into love. Us supporters of this couple see Sesshomaru claiming Rin when she is a woman. Now whether what our laws say today of the age of being an adult, if the law back then said your a woman at age 13 then so be it. Its just like today, if the law was to say your an adult at age 11 then an 11 yr. old dating a 16 yr old wouldn't be looked upon as wrong. Although the thought is scary ^_^0. I understand and I totally agree, we all have different ways of looking at things. This is your story and you can do what you want, if others don't like it or find it disgusting then they shouldn't of read since you did warn them. I also agree that just because this is the rin and sesshomaru section doesn't mean you have to write about happy and lovey dovey things. You're a great writer, I don't like the idea of Sesshomaru doing that to kid Rin but that doesn't make you a bad writer. Just makes me wonder about what was REALLY going through your head when you wrote this then posted it up. I can see your the type that will use your review box to respond back to criticism/flamers and that is fine, ^^ I am saying my piece and after this I have nothing more to say because I don't engage in arguments or fights over the internet; its childish and lame in my eyes. I can waste my own time thank you. I will look to see if you answered my question, and that is it. I like how you dealt with Wow123's response and I also like how you sent out a message in your author's note at the end of the story to people who have been through sick stuff like that. You can write what you want because its YOUR story but I don't applaud you for portraying Sesshomaru like this. You have your way of seeing things and I have mine. Everyone IS entitled to THEIR opinion. Bye now, respond back in a LONG report if you wish.... I'll just be looking to see if you answered my question. You can look at this as offensive if you wish, doesn't matter to me. This is a review and I'm telling you what I think. Your a great writer, use your talents on what you decide.
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