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From ANON - reader00 on December 21, 2005
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From ANON - A Nobody on December 19, 2005
Wow, man! Great story! I hope you update when you have the time. See ya!
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From ANON - reader00 on December 18, 2005
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From ANON - Titaness on December 17, 2005
Woo!
Go Kagome.
Excellent chapter, as usual.
My favourite phrase is still skullfuck, though!
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From DLB on December 16, 2005
pretty good crossover fic. a few grammar errors, but overall, a very good
storyline with some pretty good ideas. Keep it up!
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From ANON - reader00 on December 14, 2005
when are you gonna update?????
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From ANON - Angelwings on November 28, 2005
Hi ^^ I LOVE THIS STORY ^^ I`m a really big Fan of Inuyasha and Kenshin and read all Mangas from them ^^ ( I Love Aoshi ^^ he is so sexy >.< .... drool )
so please update SOON !!!!! ^^
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From on November 24, 2005
I love this story so far. It isn't often that you see RK/IY crossovers which is a shame since they seem so close in era and feel. I like how you keep each person in character and manage to add your own touch to their personalities. Kagome and Aoshi's relationship is very well done; how you keep them wanting one another but also straying is a very well done touch. Also putting in Aoshi and Misao's association while keeping them friendly is admirable (since I seem to find a lot of people using her as a 'bitch'/'slut'/etc ^^;; ). I was surprised to see Shippo in there, it was interesting to see how you explained why the demons weren't there and how he had survived and what he had to do to survive. I cannot wait to see the next chapter *nodnod*
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From ANON - Kimmey on November 20, 2005
Oh heres a good word that fits you. How about Assclown!
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From ANON - Kimmey on November 20, 2005
For the last reviewer I wanted to point out a few things. First, in the anime and on the series that's what Aoshi's weapons are called. So thats what was used here. As far as killing her I don't think he'd remember. There's a lot of goodlooking people out there. What he considers beautiful now he might not have 12 or 13 years ago. Then the fact that he's killed too many people to count, after all that time it would be easy for him not to remember someone he saw for only a few minutes. She was of no importance to him at the time. I flip people off everyday from road rage, a bad habit of mine but I'm not going to remember who I gave the bird to last week much less over a decade ago. Not to mention even if he made a connection he wouldn't think Kagome was the same person. In his way of thinking she should have aged over a decade NOT look the same.

I'll also point out that Saito is spelled two ways depending on which way you go with. I've seen it spelled Saito and Saitoh in the jap version. I've seen it both ways, so does it really matter?

Now to Kagome's reaction. Lets point out the fact that Kagome is from an era where females where bikini's to the beach. Hello a bra isn't that much difference, covers the same amount of flesh. So NO, that wouldn't really bother her. As far as it not bothering her killing, she did travel with Inuyasha. Should we try to count how much shit they killed. If she got disturbed by it after all that, how realistic would that be???? As far as the kissing, that isn't something she's use to, so yeah it would unsettle her somewhat.

HELLO, highbeams is a slang term for when a woman's nipples get hard. How old are you? As far as jerkass, that was correct. It's slang for when a person combines two insults together. Let me give you a few examples, BitchBoy, Shitfucker, Assnutt, Shitterd, etc....

As far as Aoshi character is concerned it is in character. He is trying to make up for his past but he isn't Kenshin. Where he wants to save everyone that he meets. He found some peace when Kenshin defeated him but he didn't change that much. He still sees Kagome as a job at that point, not the woman he loves and has sworn to protect.

Churchs ,temples whats the difference. Okay there is some but I'll just point this out there was Houshi/Monks, people that were buhdists. Also in the anime they had other religions thrown in there, take a freaking pick.

Now for my personal opinion, what kind of person has to nitpick about everything in a fic? I see some other reviews where you left, I believe you complained about markings and such. If you want complete non fictional bullshit you are on the wrong site. Its fanfic try reading it for enjoyment, not so you can tear it apart and point things out that you might not agree with. Try having a valid complaint before opening your mouth.

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From ANON - Animefreak242 on November 20, 2005
It's really weird that Kagome keeps bumping into these people, especially in the middle of the forest. She must have some kind of censor on her. *laughs* But poor Sano. Boy did he get an eyefull. Can't imagine being from their time and seeing something like that. Oh, speaking of which, what are 'highbeams'? Are they like goosebumps? Just wondering.

You're making Kagome really nonchalant about things like being undressed in front of men and being attacked, but she blushes and stumbles when someone kisses her. I know Kagome has a backbone, but she has this 'fuck you' attitude now. It's a little strange.

Umm, how long have they been traveling? You said Aoshi's been back for two weeks? I wouldn't think that you'd make him go back to the village. Maybe stay away/head back for a few days then change his mind but... Didn't you say that Aoshi was trying to make up for all the bad deeds he'd committed? So why would he listen to and leave a woman (no matter how she could defend herslef), who was presumably new to the area, in the forest alone? That seems a little backwards.

WAI! Shippou's here! YAY! Maybe they can travel together? Then again, he's been killing/stealing from people. Is he bad now? I hope not. Poor thing, left alone all those years... *sigh*

They had churches in Japan back then? I thought they only had temples - especially since you're calling them houshi. What religion are they?

Oh, and Umm... the curse is jackass (as in donkey - there's no such thing as a 'jerkass').

~Animefreak242
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Kawaii Girl
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From ANON - Animefreak242 on November 20, 2005
How come Aoshi didn't notice Kagome when he saw her in town the previous day? She hasn't changed at all. I know it's been a while and it only a glimpse, but wouldn't he remembr her since Kagome's so 'beautiful'? Wait a minute... What ever happened to that woman that Makamachi had the affair with? It's obvious she didn't get to Misao, so where is she?

A few more questions: Is the priest related to Miroku in any way? And who wrote the scriptures about her, Midoriko and Kikyo? I hope you get to all this stuff and not just jump into the romance. *crosses fingers*

Lots of questions. Sorry if I asked too many. I'll keep reading now. Ja mata!!

--Oh, one more thing, you spelled Fujita Goro's name wrong. It's Saito Hajime, not Saitoh.

~Animefreak242
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Kawaii Girl
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From ANON - Animefreak242 on November 20, 2005
Ch. 3 - Wait... I thought you said Aoshi 'killed' Kagome with his kodachi? Aren't kodachi throwing stars, not a sword?

Well, other than that, great chapter. This story is going along pretty well. I like it. ^_^ NOt much to say, but I'll continue reading now. Please update soon.

~Animefreak242
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Kawaii Girl
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From ANON - Ravi on November 20, 2005
This is the first crossover of Inuyasha and Kenshin I've ever read and actually liked. I can't wait until the next chapter. Hope you update soon!
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From ANON - cock_roach_elle on November 08, 2005
Oh!!! I hope Kouga going to show up soon. I can't wait, what going to happen if he show up and call Kagome "his woman". Oh!! The Jealousy wear its ugly head again. Now, that chapter I definitly not going to miss. And, let's not foget our beloved Taiyoukai, Sesshoumaru. I hope his going to show too. This story was so awesome. Can't wait to read your next chapter.

Hope you update soon.
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