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Reviews for Sedirea

By : Valkyrie
  • From ANON - nim on October 26, 2005
    Wow. So far this story is awesome. I would love to see Yutaka's reaction to meeting Kagome. Could you write a lil about that? I also can't wait to see how the first meeting between Sango and Kagome this lifetime goes. Please write more soon. I love this fic. It has the right amount of angst and drama. Cool story!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2005
    I see you edited chapter 4 to say that Kagome is not the reincarnation of Kikyou. Had to fix the plot hole...
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  • From ANON - inus_my_hottie on October 23, 2005
    great story update soon!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mizzy on October 23, 2005
    Hey Anon, the reincarnation issue was explained in Cpt. 4. Try reading a story before you decide to review it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 22, 2005
    Since Kagome is Kikyo's reincarnation, how do you explain Kikyo in your story? How can the soul be reincarnated in two people at the same time?

    That's a big plot hole.
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  • From fallenangel7583 on October 22, 2005
    oh...poor kag. so her and inuyasha finally got over their stuborness back in the past, i take it, and were together (until his death). damn...that's harsh to have to see your dead lover in the arms of someone else knowing full well that now he's back and ain't yours. ouch. good drama!!! very well done. so...maybe i just notice the little things..but what do the names to your chapters mean? very interesting. i notice also that you were whacked by anon. there's a whole bunch of the idiot's running around that like to flame under the anonymous name. big words but nothing to back them up. just brush it off and keep going. the story is REALLY well done!!!
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  • From ANON - lithium88 on October 22, 2005
    hello again! well so far it's going great. i like the whole idea about everyone being reincarnated back in her time.. but not knowing it! ^_^ great work!!! i can't wait to see what happens next, til you next update!!!! keep writing ^_^ bye!
    lith*
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 19, 2005
    Um. Kagome is Kikyou's reincarnation, so how can she have another living in the future?
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  • From ANON - BlackSand on October 18, 2005
    This story really is getting very good. Inu/Kin seems a bit OOC, not his normal anti-social, sulking self but I waiting to see how you further develop his character. He is quite tender and understanding with Kagome and the scene with the ramen was so cute! I can't wait to read how Kagome's meeting with Kikyou's reincarnation? is going to play out. I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 16, 2005
    Hey Review Whore! You did it again. Quit bringing this piece of shit to the top of the list unless you make an update. I'm tired of seeing it.
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  • From Coccio on October 16, 2005
    Anon you bitching whore, if you have nothing good to say then shut up! Valkyrie, sorry about that; gotta get that out of my system. I love the story. Plz update.
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  • From ANON - lithium88 on October 15, 2005
    hello again! well chapter 2 was great. I was a bit confused about the whole transformation of kagome's facial features, but i'm glad you explained it at the bottom. ^_^ Can't wait to see where this goes, it's very good so far!! Til your next chapter, take care. cheers!
    liht*
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 15, 2005
    Hey Review Whore, Why does this story keep showing back up at the top WITH NO UPDATE? Don't do it again unless you add a chapter.
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  • From fallenangel7583 on October 15, 2005
    i'm honored under the title of famous author...it makes me smile (and gawk). LOL. always nice? hehe..i try. but seriously, you have a great story here. i feel so bad for Kagome...having to know that this kid has inu's memories and is his reincarnation and not being able to do anything about it. i can only guess who his girlfreind will be...oh poor kagome!!! i'm also fearing the time when we find out why inu was reincarnated (or better stated; how he died). eep!! anyway, great story!!!
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  • From ANON - hello on October 14, 2005
    you named him kin? there's nothing wrong with it of course but..... *pouts*...... it just doesn't seem like an inu/kag fic ifyou change their names but i still loved it, a little on the short side but hey! i write pretty short ones too. what does the title mean? up date soon!
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