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Reviews for Demon School

By : EndlessSorrow
  • From ANON - Aya on November 15, 2005
    love the story, but there is only 1 problem. your astricks. make shorter lines otherwise the story runs off the sceen and is hard to read.
    try only doing a line of 20-30 instead of the full screen.
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  • From ANON - tasha on November 15, 2005
    Mmm... really love the new chapter. It's really adding to the suspense/drama to the story, and in a way, it seems to be bringing Sesh and Kag close :D Update soon!
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  • From ANON - labelle on November 14, 2005
    oh no what is happening to Kagome, i need to know please update soon
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  • From ANON - Sesshomaru\'s_gurl on November 13, 2005
    YO!! I am glad you had updated! I really like this story and hope that it will last for a a long while and not have so few chapters like some stories do. I really want this story to be long! :o) Anyway, I really like this story so you should update as soon as you can!
    And you are very welcome for the reviews!

    Artemis
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  • From ANON - Addicted on November 13, 2005
    Baka Inuyasha! I can't believe he did that! o_O... Something seems to be happening to Kags... Oh, the suspence!! Write more soon!!

    Your fan,
    ~Addicted
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  • From ANON - Sesshomaru\'s_gurl on November 06, 2005
    Yikes! This is an awesome story! You know, you really should not set such a high rate for reviews. Alot of people may like this story, but they may not have the time or patience to review. Me, I like to read the stories, and then at the very end of them I tell how I feel about it. So far, I really like this story. And if people have a problem with that, SCREW THEM! Write anyway to just tick them off! Hee Hee.. :P That is what I would do. Besides, if you really like this story, and really like writing it, don't wait for people to talk, you'll find that the longer you wait the more you will (maybe) lose interest in writing. That is sad. I really want to see this story to the end! :) I really like it! Well, so long!
    Artemis
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  • From CeruleanBlueLove on November 05, 2005
    Hum... I actually like this one a tad more than the other story, because it's more relatable... Yes... But you need to update soon. Very soon. Maybe it'll inspire me to write something as well [Hint hint]
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  • From ANON - hermonine on November 04, 2005
    Great story. Keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Tasha on October 30, 2005
    i love the fact that they were brought together that way. usually, it starts out with Kagome going to SEsshomaru because of Inuyasha, but I really like how they kind of both have a thing for each other now. Keep up the awesome work ^.^
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  • From ANON - Addicted on October 27, 2005
    luv the new chapter! i'm a little concerned about the camera clicks at the end, but that just adds up to the excitement, right? ;) update soon!
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  • From ANON - labelle on October 25, 2005
    woot things are getting a little bit steamy i think.
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  • From ANON - Subaru on October 25, 2005
    I loved it please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Subaru on October 22, 2005
    I loved it, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Endless Sorrow on October 21, 2005
    ^^;;; I'm sorry about that XD Recently, I've been taking care of my friend's daughter and she watches Cardcaptor Sakura everyday, so the constant happiness/giddiness of Sakura has really gotten to me >.< Anyhow, I will try my best to decrease my usage of exclaimations marks, and hope that you continue to read!
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on October 21, 2005
    This story is very good, I love the plot and the idea of the demon school. There is just one thing that bugs me about this story, and that is the constant use of exclamation when the characters are talking. "They talk like this! And they act so uppety! Ahhhh!!!!!!!!" I hate that....It makes me want to kill Kagome when she talks like that.... >.< *Breaths in a deep breath, and then exhales sending a bit of tension with it.* Ok im fine...Anyways, you keep up the good work, and try to lighten up on the exclamations. Like the part where you put five exclamations by a sentence Like this!!!!! >.> Update soon.
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