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Reviews for A Sister's Gift

By : Rinseternalsoul
  • From ANON - Bell on August 27, 2015
    i really hope the story change sesshomaru as a slave i dont really like that in my on choice i perfer he stay proude and arrgont just way he is i love all you storys but this one is the last on my list
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  • From ANON - Will on September 20, 2009
    this is by far one of the best stories ive read on this site. keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Siruka on May 09, 2009
    I absolutely loved your story, it was so origional after all the repeats I have read. You did a truley wonderful job with the plot and everything, I give you a big round of applause. I started reading this on sesskag.com but when the sight malfunctioned I had to come find it somewhere else, lol, bless you for back ups the suspense was killing me. Keep writing I would love to read more of your stories, and am gonna watch your future writings. Bye for now and congratulations again on an excellent read, thank you for being out of the ordinary for once.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 09, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 27, 2007
    I really enjoyed this, pretty much read the whole thing in 1 go. I do have a slight correction, you use seen when in most cases it should be saw, seen is the past tense form of saw & in all but maybe 1 case it's not a past tense situation. An example would be 'she saw him an hour ago' as opposed to 'she hadn't seen him for a week', I hope this makes sense & is helpful.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 29, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - TAJE on January 13, 2006
    Ch. 45-52) AAAH! Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful! Creativity at it's finest! Wonderful storytelling and of course a happy ever after. Naraku! What a S-- of a B---, but he is needed for the Spice of a story. I agree with the viewer Mary, Sesshomaru's character maintaining his regal air and yet be a humble slave is amazing. You've done a wonderful job! Keep Writing! Peace!
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  • From ANON - Mary on January 12, 2006
    Wow. I can't believe this only has eight reviews.... because it is simply some of the best writing I have had the pleasure of reading. Somehow, you've managed to show a side to Sesshomaru I have never seen before, yet his personality is dead on with what it should be. Amazing how you were able to make him seem regal and humble at the same time. I love the whole Sesshomaru-as-a-slave thing; its so unexplored yet its just so fasinating. I was slightly daunghted by the fact that it was 52 chapters, but once I started reading it I got so sucked in I ended up staying up all night reading. Can you imagine the next day, I had early classes and I haden't gone to bed at all... but it was worth it. I'm inspired by you Rin. Yours such an excellent writer. Reading the things you publish makes me consider publishing some of the stories I write. Great work.
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  • From ANON - TAJE on January 12, 2006
    Ch. 31-44) Whoa! These chapters are great! Love Rin's appearance with her sweet self! The Arena scenes were Great! I could see every battle you described the miko's had to go through. Knew Naraku couldn't be left out. True to his nature causing chaos. The Lemons of course nicely written. Now I'm on to finishing this story! Loving it all so far! Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - TAJE on January 08, 2006
    Ch. 14-30) Wow! I'm loving this story more and more! You really have a knack for creating scenes of uncomfortable air. I like the fact how you used the moral sense of honesty where Sesshomaru and Kagome were concern in their favor with the high priestess. Inuyasha complicated as ever but adorable. Kykio portrayl is going to take some getting use to being that most stories I've read she's always being bashed. I love the lemons, great and beautifully written. Going on to the next few chapters which I know I will enjoy. Peace!
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  • From ANON - TAJE on January 03, 2006
    Ch. 1-13) I have read the first 13 chapters. Boy, what great reading! Simply beautiful. I love the avenue your story is traveling. The torment that the two will face with their relationship. Your portrayal of Sango is how I love to see her. I also love the way Sesshomaru gets into his role. I know there is more to come. I will continue to travel this avenue of great storytelling you have provided. Peace!
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  • From ANON - WhiteRose-Kurama on December 18, 2005
    This was some story! I really enjoyed how Sango tricked Sess in the beginning and I'm glad that everything worked out and everyone got what they deserved. Keep up the amazing work! :P
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  • From ANON - inu_lover1978 on December 07, 2005
    THIS WAS A MASTERPIECE FROM BEGINNING TO END. YOU ARE A VERY CREATIVE WRITER IN ALL ASPECTS. I WAS TRUELY MOVED BY YOUR STORY AND HOPE TO READ OF THEM BY YOU. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK. YOU ARE TRUELY A GIFTED PERSON WITH A GREAT UNDERSTANDING FOR WRITING.
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  • From docbevculver on December 01, 2005
    Oh wow, that was a wonderful story and I'm glad I came across it! I truly enjoyed reading each and every chapter and I was sad to see it come to an end, but the ending was wonderful!!!

    The humor was excellent and... well overall the story was very well written and I wasn't disappointed at all!

    Excellent work, bravo!
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  • From ANON - Sayuri-chan on October 25, 2005
    I don't know where to begin. I saw this story up on the front page of the Inuyasha fictions, and I was seriously intrigued. Even though it was 52 chapters long (but completed) I was somewhat drawn to read this. From the first chapter, I was drawn in. It took me a good three or four days to get enough time to read it, and each chapter made me glad I could read it all at once, and not have to wait for updates, it was seriously that good.

    Sesshoumaru's predicament has been covered before, him as a slave, but your spin on it was completely surprising, and very, VERY unique, intriguing me further. Kagome as a miko with no family is also a new spin on her charecter that I haven't seen before. It surprised me and also got my attention that Sango would be her demon-slayer self, as well as being able to capture Sesshoumaru as a gift to her 'sister' to protect her.

    As the story progressed, I could feel the tension myself at the trials that Kagome and Sesshoumaru had to over come to realize their love for one another, and the way you introduced Kikyou and Inuyasha was utterly amazing and I loved that part alot. Kikyou and Kagome becoming friends, instead of always being enemies (as in other Inuyasha fictions) was a very nice change, and I enjoyed it immensely. As each charecter came into play, I was more and more entangled in this unique and lovely plot.

    Rin as an orphan and being saved by Sesshoumaru was an awesome way to bring the sweet child into the story, and it was so real in this story, making it really cool. I love everything about this story, and the fact that it's AU just astounds me. It was a really, REALLY awesome story to read, and I enjoyed every moment of it. It was aptly named, as well, and I applaud you on your awesome story. I'm sorry to hear about your father, and I hope you're doing okay.

    Okay, this review was freaking long, but well earned and so deserved. This story rocked so hard, and I loved it. I look forward to anything else you write. Keep up the terrific work, Rinseternalsoul. It's super schway.

    Sayuri-chan~
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