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Reviews for The Inutaisho Legacy

By : penpaninu

From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2005
wow, that was fast, cool, i check every day but still wasnt expecting the new chap to be up, just out of curiosity, how long are u planning on makin this story?, anyway, sorry to hear about the whole stress enduced vision loss, but glad to kno that things are looking better (with both eyes :P), ok, on with the review:

wass sessh SERIOUSLY contemplating KIDNAPPING lil inu!!, does he really think he can get away with that shit!?!?!, yash yearly killed him once, and he sure as hell would do it again, not even rin could stop him from killin sessh this time. plus,i dont think rin would let him do that, sure she loves lil inu but im sure shed much rather have her own baby and wouldnt do that to her friends.

i cant belive it, i got pissed off at inuyasha! he acted like a complete jackass,man, what a frikkin buttplug! i cant belive hes feeling jelous towards sessh, then to make kagome feel bad, then, after he rescued her, he should have comforted her IMMEDIETLY and not care if she was still mad, if she didnt want him, she would have pushed him away, but i mean, she called for him and he still made her hold her arms out to him!! COME ON MAN!!, shes ur mate for cheese's sake! ok ok, deep breath, hes just protective and on edge about being at sesshs place, but come on, shes already told him that shes only there to help rin. ok, ill jus step off of my lil soapbox now.

ok, good chapter, it had some drama, a lil action (in more ways than one ::wiggles eyebrows::) and even a lil bit of heart touching family moments.

sAL
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From ANON - inuyoukiskye on December 20, 2005
hey INU,

awsome chapter yet again . Lol i see yash has got battle lust ne? cool nice lemon as always . I dont blame him for being a tad ticked off . Anyone would be around Fifi after what he did , although its time they make up. The inu Family needs to be one again now the two swords need to be brought together by the new one (Taro). Happy Soltice (lots of inu hugs)
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From SapphireBlade on December 20, 2005
Yes I am alvie!! Sorry, you know how it is, finals, friends graduating, life, work, all that good stuff that keeps you from doing what you like. Anyways, as always, great chapter!! I'm happy everyone seems to be getting some ^_^ (except me). Yay that poor Miroku and Sango finally got it on!! For a while there I thought Miroku's thing would fall off from lack of use. O_o Well, I guess that's all for now, I can't wait to read more and Happy Holidays to all!!

Ja ne!!!
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From ANON - Shadowhawk on December 19, 2005
I love your story. I really enjoy reading through the angonizng and emotional conflicts of the chacaters; the understanding and suport between the couple. That's how love should be. You really bring them to life. I would really love it if the two brothers could patch-up and be a family. I beleive that Rin has soften and open up "Fifi"... love the nickname :) ...just like Kagome did to Yash. I'm everyever hopeful that Sesshimaru could find happiness and contentment just like Yash. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for such a woderful work.
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From ANON - InuGrrrl on December 18, 2005
Penny!!!!!!!!!!

I came as soon as I could *Pant! Cough!* ^.^

Oh I luuuurved the first part (yep, reading
& reviewing as I go along. The part with
Inu & Kaede. OMG, That was sooo cutesy!
You got her looking like a california raisin
one minute & blushing all virginal the next!
(Let's say it together)

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

Btw, Kaede,
Until you get some *real* ideas for Rin,
Shaddap. Raising hopes n' shit. Got a lil' bit
of shriveled dick & don't know how to act!
And speaking of...

When is jiji gonna stop trying to use the poor
quarter youkai to drum up business?! Ain't
there child labor laws n' shit over there?!

Breast feeding. SO not my thing. It's like,
how you got Inu sucking all over them, then
passing them to the baby? Or worse, what
if he wants a middle of the night feeding
AFTER you already fucked? C'mon, we know
they don't be getting in the shower after they
go at it at night (Who you trying to fool Kags?).
So does she offer InuTaro a tit that smells like
breath?

Seriously, think about it.

Or even worse than that...can you imagine Inu
getting his suckle on and gets a mouthful of milk?
I don't give a shit if I do love your ass...that's
going too damn far! *Raises brow*

So Miroku sent the hunters to get laid, eh? I'd watch
that Hida guy. He looks like a fucking problem and
I'm sorry but, Shippo can be of no help! Hell, he only
reaches his fiance's shoulder. *Smacks self in the
forehead* And I see she got over the pain real damn
fast, inventing headaches n' whatnot. That hussy! :P

Um...InuYasha, we gotta talk. At no point have I seen
you wash your hands, yet you always have them in the
baby's mouth. Let me ask you something guy...

Where have your fingers been?

Holding your dick when you pee? Scratching your ass?
In someone else's ass? In your nose? In dirt? Where?
That is beyond unsanitary dude.

Ok, that was a tender I/K moment. Just lovely. But I
see through you Inu! You want to see her head against
the toilet again... Baby spittle. Gotta love it.

Damn Daisuke was so not playing. see Shippo, you needed
to hang with him more often. BUT that Hida guy...I don't
know if the punanny is worth it. O.O

And Miro is a skallywag. He 'unleashed' them?! He must
want two less exterminators. Damn dude, you finally
got some ass...albeit grass n' weed ass, but ass nonetheless.
Now just maybe he can stop whining about it! Though I still
say Inu & Kags oughta pull their damn weight!

Sesshy-sama...beggars can't be choosers. You can't come
out the side of your neck when your head is in the lion's
mouth. What if InuYasha decides that he's had enough?
How you gonna explain that to Rin?! Slow your roll...or
I'll make Inutaro drool on you.

Lastly, I'm proud of you sesshmo (a combo of sess &
satchmo, lol). You apologized to "Kagome Woman", how
I love that!! I think things will be okay between all of
you one day... That is if you don't try to gut Kagome
Woman if Rin doesn't "Prepare for your seed". O.O

Penny-Pen! Lovely chap my dahhhhhling! as always, it
was very well written and you have captured the characters
well. You keep the laughs coming girl :-D
See ya on our next go 'round!

InuGrrrl
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From ANON - chanda on December 18, 2005
Omg I love it just as much as the first story. I do love your A/N they are too funny and have enjoyed them immensely. However, I hunger for your story, I look forward till the next chapter only to fill my appetite. LOL

Happy Holidays,
Chanda

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From ANON - Inuyoukiskye on December 17, 2005
Oi Inuneechan,

I'm here to give you your drug!!!! Excellent work with Taro, I can also see Yash being attentive like that to his son and of corse Kags. LOL miroku finally got him some booty ne? Poor Hoshi probably thought it wouldnt work anymore!!! All I gotta say is GO SHIPPO!!!!! If I were him I'd have some chronic headaches! As always you hit Sess's caracter on the nose... are u sure he doesn't stay in your closet or something, cuz u gotta a kanck at verbalizing his thoughts. Anyway, you know i love it and thanks for the shout out on my story.
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From ANON - Syko on December 17, 2005
I loved it! Very touching and sweet!

Inu-Love,
Syko
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From ANON - sAL on December 17, 2005
YAY!!, another chapter, ive been gettin stressed at work, so this was a perfect way to unwind. your storys lemony goodness was just what the doctor ordered :P. i gave a great sigh of relief when i saw that ch9 was up. and as for u hoping sessh isnt ooc, i think that if it werent for rin, he would be, but she has changed him, for the better, so no, i dont think hes ooc. though, i do have a newfound respect for him now that he has not only apologized to yash, but to kags as well, and hes even acknowleged that hes apologized. and as for miro and sango well..., lets jus say...... ITSABOUTGODDAMNTIME!!! lol but damn, outside and everything, shit! talk about pent up aggression! hehe. and sorry to hear about the crap goin on in the good ol' real world, but do not dispair, for you are not alone, ive got new, heavy and huge responsibilities [sp?] at work that im hoping i can live up to, my dads gettin deployed soon, and a cousin on her way (hopefully) to rehab, so yea issues there. jus remember, in your stories, you have the control. sorry, didnt mean to go all wierd on ya or whatever, but, yea, ur not alone on the issues issue. ok, good chap to an absofukinlutly awsome story, keep it up and update soon!
sAL
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From HaleyBrooke on December 16, 2005
THIS IS REALLY GREAT. PLEASE UPDATE THIS SOON.
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From akanehimura on December 14, 2005
Its good. Please please please please write more soon okay!
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From ANON - Syko on December 12, 2005
To bad you lost some reviews, that sucks! Great chapter, Fifi was honorable in this chapter, for saying sorry. Cant wait to read what happens next!

Inu Love~
Syko
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From ANON - InuGrrrl on December 10, 2005
Hey Penny!!

Just wanted to drop my lil' note ^_^

Starting with Sesshy-sama. I feel so bad for him!
I know he's a butt munch & all, but do they have
to treat him like a leper? I know he's missing an
arm & all, but dayum! O.O

When he comes around mofos grab their swords
n' shit. InuYasha should catch some hell over that
shit about Rin. I don't know...right now he's on
the shit list. And to be honest, he should have
been bitch slapped for that little $2 threat.

Hunters? Chile please....
Sesshomaru would pick their meat from between
his teeth with their bones! I know they're uneasy
because of Kags & it would be unrealistic for
them to behave in any other way, but seriously yall...
He don't want Kagome & her tired ass bun! LOL

I love & adore InuYasha, I really do. He is ofcourse,
the main character in almost all of my fics. BUT
I am really not liking him in this chap. You're
good Penny, it tales ALOT to make me dislike Inu.
I just wanna beat him into the floor. *snort*

Shippo & Miroku are a trip! Our lil' Kitsune is
all grown up and plotting pussy! You sure
Miro isn't is Otou instead of InuYasha? One
more thing kit. Have some class! Don't be bangin'
her in a damn field! That's like spitting on my
cupcake and calling it frosting! *raises brow*

Aaaah, Inu & Kags had a little bathroom love
huh? Do you think her head was by the toilet?
^_^

Good Lord! Shippo's not a virgin anymore!
I knew that was coming...Poor Kyoko, it
wasn't even good for her. Do you think
short guy means short dick? lol Nah. I've
heard from people that date shorties that
they be packin'. Makes ya wanna get a
lil' strawberry shortcake, ne?

Awesome chappie Penny. You actually got
me pissed at my hanyou, over Sesshy no less!
That NEVER happens, EVER. So, congrats!!
Make sure to e-mail me when the new chaps
comes out so I can spread some InuGrrrl love
all over it! ^_^

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From ANON - nina on December 10, 2005
i hate it !! lOlz .. jOkez :p oh man im tiRed .. uR stOry mOtivaTez mE tO cOme baCk lOlz :) u knO wat u should dO ? write the next chapter whiLe uR drunk ! i wna C wah happenz lmaO! hehe .. nah im Only jOking :p

ja ne !! (iv finaLLy fiGureD out wah "ja ne" meanz!) haha

-nina chan
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From ANON - KAGOMEXYX on December 10, 2005
Hi There,
I just wanted to say that your first story was a hit, and that I love your second story,plus the tittle is super....
Bye
KAGOMEXYX
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