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Reviews for Stranded

By : chanda
  • From ANON - BastardOmega on October 08, 2006
    Don't u dare kill them off and don't u dare stop now. i need a good finito finale so plezzz update.

    Peace & Love BastardOmega
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 06, 2006
    I love it so far! it's very interesting. Please write more! 1000000000000000000000000/10

    -Amanda-
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  • From ANON - BastardOmega on August 20, 2006
    very good story, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on June 26, 2006
    I really do like the premise of this fiction and believe that it would make a nice fic. However, I was not able to read beyond the first couple of paragraphs in chapter three. You seriously need a beta and I do hope that you get one because I really would like to be able to read it. Too many words are used incorrectly. For instance, you used the word 'divergence' for the way that Inuyasha considered Kagome. I have no idea what you intended there because a divergence is a point where two or more things meet. I could list a whole page of these type of errors. Also, you have many sentences that do not make sense because they are run on sentences or have some other type of problem making me have to read it over in order to understand it. It makes the story not only very difficult to read, but exasperating. I wouldn't even be saying this if I truly didn't want to read this fic because I really would like to. But you need to get a beta. If I had the time, I would do it for you. Please get a beta so that I can read this very interesting and intriguing story.

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - Jenna on January 25, 2006
    I just love this fic!
    Great chapter! Maybe they'll run into the old lady again someday...
    Please continue to update!
    -Jenna-
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  • From ANON - Catt on January 25, 2006
    Hey girly!!! Oh wow this is a quiite interesting story. I read the first chapter and couldn't stop reading it!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From ANON - Riana.J on January 20, 2006
    WOW!!! this stoy was sooooo, ''FUCKING SWEET'' I really luv!!! it and I hope there will be more to come!!
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  • From fallenangel7583 on January 15, 2006
    yay for updates!!! great two chapters and VERY well done lemons. very well done indeed!! the plot thickens with that asshat will being alive, you might want to elaborate onto just how he regrouped...err...himself...that fast, but then again, it IS naraku. a couple spelling errors, only problem i've seen thus far. love it! keep it up!!!
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  • From ANON - inufan625 on January 15, 2006
    I'm still loving it and feel likean A** for not leaving more reviews. A very good chapter and I look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - matt on January 05, 2006
    That was a really good story. I think the plot was very well thought and written
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  • From HotGimmickFan007 on December 29, 2005
    AH!!!! YES!!! YOU HAVE FINALLY LISTENED TO MOI!!! YESS!! You would not believe how happy I am now...!! *laughing manacially while bouncing up and down in glee happiness* BUT NARAKU isn't DEAD?! OH NO!!!! *cries* You were supposed to kill him - so that they could live together happiliy ever after! Fluffy has to find them and then they need to get showered and dressed, which would lead to another lemon... then finally one day they get married, have steamy marriage sex and then lead to a baby... yadadadaaa... ok. I'll shut up now... but like as usual, UPDATE!
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  • From Sandie on December 22, 2005
    This is by far one of the best Inuyasha/Kagome fanfics I've read. Please keep up the good work on writing this. I really look forward to reading more on this!
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  • From ANON - New Fan on December 06, 2005
    They escaped. Now, there real hell going to begin when Naraku finds them and try
    to ruin their lives. Great chapter. Update soon.
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  • From HotGimmickFan007 on November 30, 2005
    Nice! You got some grammar problems but it's totally ok. I really, really, really, rEEEEAaalllyyy want a lemon! Soon pretty please? *bashes eyes*

    So...

    (GIVE ME A GODAMN LEMON ALREADY OR I'LL BASH YOUR HEAD OFF!! LEMON! LEMON!)

    What? Don't give me that look I didn't say anything! *chuckles nervously*
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  • From ANON - lithium88 on November 29, 2005
    Wow! Hello again, well i've managed to catch up on the last chappy. I really liked it! I'm actually left speechless! O_O Great work, as usual! I hope to read more of your story very soon! till your next update, take care!!
    lith*
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