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By : chanda
  • From ANON - Colleen on November 29, 2005
    really good i was a bit dissapointed when it stopped i wanted to no the rest, so when is the next chapter cant waite. YAY ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kagss on November 28, 2005
    Hey this ones it's very interesting and original... Kagome's character is so anoying and at the same time funny... and inuyasha the mediator one (well sometimes i fell him like it) it's just great... oooh but the greatest was naraku the latin drug deeler jajaja i just love it....

    But there's something i just need to express... when naraku says bonito... he is refering to kagome right... welll bonito (with O) is used for boys and bonita (with A) for girls... so when he calls kagome you must write it like bonita... (not a flame... just a cultural note)

    Well i really enjoyed what i read, so keep updating you are in the best part of the story right now...
    And yes, i'm latin, that's why i know abaout bonito and bonita... and that's posibbly why i write this review with a lot of mistakes jeje...
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  • From fallenangel7583 on November 28, 2005
    WOW!!!! oh my gosh. i knew Naraku was going to try to rape her, i saw it coming but still...oh dear. and poor inu has to hear it. man...he's going to rip Naraku a new asshole, isn't he? damn. GREAT story, as always!!!!
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  • From ANON - Just a Happy Reader on November 28, 2005
    I'm really enjoying your story so far :) I just wanted to let you know, however, that "bonito" referenced to Kagome is incorrect - it should be "bonita," the feminine form of the word for beauty. It's a little quirk of the Spanish language, or just the Romance languages in general :D. Masculine forms usually end in "o," while the feminine case ends in "a" (or sometimes "dad," as in "ciudad," the word for city). If Naraku is a native speaker, he would never use the masculine form in reference to Kagome, especially if she turned him on ;). Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - New Fan on November 28, 2005
    Great story. I hope that you can update this story soon.
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  • From ANON - amhor56 on November 28, 2005
    What!? No you didn't ruin the freaking story. The person who wrote that review was just mad that that what they wanted didn't occur. I think you should just leave it the way it was. I'm sure you were going somewhere. This is your story and your here because you have a good imagination and you wish to share. Don't let a simple reviewer tell you how to write YOUR story! You're the author not him. If he didn't like it, oh well! Guess he'll have to stop reading. Please continue on and don't let him tell you how to write your story. By the way, LOVED the chapter! Your brilliant! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Ellie on November 27, 2005
    i like this story it's very awesome!
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  • From ANON - Shaehl on November 27, 2005
    Agh you just ruined the story. Naraku walks up to Inuyasha and hits him on the head... How lame is that? 1. Inuyasha wouldn't have let him walk up to him. 2. Inuyasha would have reacted fast enough to doge or block the blow, especially if since he was already on guard. 3. Naraku wouldn't have just left Inuyasha there. Hitting him on the head with his gun wouldn't kill him unless Naraku shattered his skull.
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  • From fallenangel7583 on November 25, 2005
    very nice. lots to read.wow. still loving the story, and really loving fluffles. i bow to the great protector. i see the problem already with Naraku brewing, but then again, it's hard not to. he's naraku. Anyway, yeah...great stuff. i think the marriage part between inu and kag was really rushed, but i guess when you know someones the one, you just know. the story is well done though, never the less. can't wait to read more. let's see how 'devious' you plan for naraku to be. i've seen some bad ass naraku's. i'm intrigued.
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  • From HotGimmickFan007 on November 25, 2005
    WOW. That is probably as original as it gets! I like the whole concept, but where's Sango? Other than that *crash* oops hold a sec...

    Other than that, it's a GREAT FIC! I'm proud to say you've made it on my favourites list, which by far is probably a challenge to get on because I take my favourites SERIOUSLY. *bang, clatter* Sorry, obviously my doppelganger is running amok!

    (Awkward Silence....)

    (UPDATE! LEMON! LEMON! LEMON! LEMON! LEMON! LEMON! LEMON! UPDAAATTEEE!!!!!)

    What? Why are you giving me that look? I didn't say anything!
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  • From ANON - bbbeleana on November 25, 2005
    yippie, another chapter. it s great and so exciting. it s funny to read about shippo s old plan. :-)
    hm... how it will end with naraku? bbbeleana
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  • From ANON - inuyashasmate on November 24, 2005
    Hey finally u updated!!! thanks..omg this was good UPDATE A.S.A.P

    Thanks
    Inuyasha Mate
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  • From ANON - Saddened on November 06, 2005
    Hey....I was really looking forward to reading your story but had to stop as I found a couple of things confusing right off the bat. Nothing serious..just wanted to offer up some advice if I could. Take it or leave it its totally up to you. One of the things that borthered me was the use of the word stuipulated in the first sentence. Nit picky maybe, but stipulating is like clarifying...you can't do it without first saying something else. It makes it a difficult read because you enter the story feeling like you missed something. Another kinda *groan* issue I had was how the you emoted the phone as "ring ring" which is annoying at best, but then it goes on to insinuate that that "ring ring" is actually a song by beethoven. There were a few other things that we all suffer from, but these two things were what really turned me off of this story. Again...just thought I'd mention it...
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 06, 2005
    man...kagome's mom is havin some serious problems! poor girl!
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  • From ANON - lithium88 on November 06, 2005
    Another great chapter! Poor souta, and the rest of kagome's family. Unlike Sesshoumaru, they have no idea what has really happened to Kagome. Congradulations on making Kagome one feisty little woman, she really is gonna make the story all the more intriging. Can't wait for your next update, til then!! take care
    lith*
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