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Reviews for To tell a lie.

By : zeeScarlet
  • From xxPuppyEarsxx on January 25, 2006
    funny and orgasmic
    haha!
    good combo
    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sayanna TR on November 18, 2005
    Cute, sweet, and made me giggle ^_^ So keep up the writing!!!!
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  • From BrucesGirl on November 02, 2005
    Yet another great fiction! I'm so impressed. You ought to check out mine on my profile. Listen... I love your writing style. Do you post anything on fanfiction.net? If you do, shoot me an email or PM me on yahoo at bruce_waynes_sweetheart sometime! Great job!
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  • From ANON - inugirl2003 on November 01, 2005
    cute cute cute! I loved it, please keep going.
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  • From ANON - pat on October 31, 2005
    sweet really cool i liked it

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  • From ANON - Rawben on October 31, 2005
    lol, that was funny... hehe.. great fic!
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  • From ANON - inufan625 on October 31, 2005
    Really, really good. I hope there is more...
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2005
    I have met guys like Sukki... you describe how it makes you feel when people act like that very well. Thank God people like him aren't the norm. :-D

    This is a good story. I really do enjoy it. I hope you mean to write more...it feels like you left us all hanging there a bit.
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  • From ANON - inufan625 on October 30, 2005
    Very cute and funny. I can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 30, 2005
    Your formatting is all messed up. It looks like it is double-space or something but the sentences are cut in weird places. Good story but it's annoying to read it when the spacing is all funny.
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  • From ANON - Twilight on October 30, 2005
    Damn that was good please write more I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jessica on October 30, 2005
    Wow. That was pretty original, and very cute. Nice job. My only suggestion is to separate the paragraphs more. It would make it more easy to read. Other than that, great job.
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  • From ANON - Scarlet on October 30, 2005
    I'm sorry about the formatting..I had been up for quite awhile and decided to just post the damn thing..and yes I intend to write more...I decided to end the chapter there as it was getting long.
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  • From ANON - pat on October 30, 2005
    sweet plz add another chapter plz!!!!

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  • From ANON - BlackSand on October 30, 2005
    That was a great first chapter. The sexual attraction between Inu and Kag during the camp scene was sizzling! Is it a one-shot or are you going to continue? I hope you do. My only criticism was that the formating made it harder to read. Try spacing things out and making more paragraphs. It just makes it easier for ppl to read.
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