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Reviews for Hedonism

By : Adelsan
  • From ANON - DAZ on October 31, 2005
    Well its nice to read a hot lemon with no yaoi or yuri to it.
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  • From ANON - Naraku121 on October 31, 2005
    Nice... just how I like it. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Xanga on October 31, 2005
    Another! Please?
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  • From ANON - Crane on October 31, 2005
    I must have more!
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  • From ANON - Sesshomaru - Lord Of The Western Lands on October 31, 2005
    Anyone who believes this couple is not canon is brain dead and close-minded. As a child of course Rin is like a daughter to him but when she grows up that will definitely change. Rin as a child likes Sesshomaru a lot but as she grows older those feelings will turn into love and seeing as how Sesshomaru is protective of her, he wouldn't give her up. Eventually Sesshomaru would fall in love with her. Now if some demon girl was to come into the picture and prove her and Sesshomaru are to be together then Rin and Sesshomaru wouldn't be canon but until that happens, Rin will always have a chance with Sesshomaru. Sheesh some people really don't have an imagination or can take a hint. Anyways, I enjoyed this lemon and I hope to see another one. To me, Sesshomaru+Kagome, Sesshomaru+Sango, Sesshomaru+Kikyo, and Sesshomaru+Kagura are all stupid. As for the yaoi, ^^ those are all beyond stupid as well. Seriously, InuYasha a cocky - competitive half demon paired to his older brother who said himself that he despises him and every time they come into contact its either to insult or fight… I’m sorry but some people really need some help. ^_^ If Rumiko Takahashi wanted those two to be together, then I’m sure the owner would of kicked Kikyo and Kagome out of the picture. Funny how yaoi fans will go so far to support their sick fantasies.
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  • From ANON - jes128 on October 31, 2005
    I hope to read another from you on these two.
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  • From ANON - Hans on October 31, 2005
    Your a good author!
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  • From ANON - mANKOKOKO on October 31, 2005
    NICE, I LOVE IT! IT WASN'T WEAK! I definitely see this couple as canon... its just so obvious, I mean in the beginning their relationship is more of father and daughter but when she grows up all of that will change and for those who knows how to take a hint, can see that. I definitely see these two having a daughter ^_^. Kagome and InuYasha would probably have a son or daughter. But anywayz your lemon rocks!
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  • From ANON - Lexus on October 31, 2005
    WRITE MORE!
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  • From ANON - oki on October 31, 2005
    Excellent. This is a great PWP, now if it had a plot it would be even better but I still like this. I'm glad you didn't have Sesshomaru raping her or having sex with her when she is sick or gonna die... I'm sorry but those type of lemons are stupid to me. I would never want to be screwed in my dying hours, I'd be scared of leaving this world instead of getting horny -_-. But anyway your lemon is great. ^_^ Sesshomaru doesn't strike me as the raping or pedophilia type, his personality tells me he wouldn't degrade himself to such things.
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  • From ANON - Grey on October 31, 2005
    Hmm, very good. I don't usually read PWP but I read yours and it was pretty good. If you decide to write another, make sure you: take your time with the lemon, be descriptive, watch what words you use, correct as many mistakes as you can find, and have fun with it. Great work and I hope to read another lemon on this couple since this is my favorite one.
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  • From ANON - Nani on October 31, 2005
    I was too lazy to sign in, but I stumbled across this lemon and read and all I have to say is... DAMN! Your good ^_^ I hope you write more.
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  • From ANON - Chris on October 31, 2005
    Hot lemon, nice. If you take on that Glitter person's challenge, make sure you take your time and sort everything out so it sounds perfect to you.
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  • From ANON - kEIKO on October 31, 2005
    Not bad, ^_^ you did great!
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  • From ANON - KOko on October 31, 2005
    Hmm, I agree with that GlitterMAGIC chick, maybe you should take on her request or challenge. You would do pretty good I bet. But anyway I enjoyed this PWP, its was... H-O-T!
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