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Reviews for Hedonism

By : Adelsan
  • From ANON - Meimei on October 31, 2005
    Well I can certainly see why everyone is reviewing your fic because its GOOD. Nice work! Its hard to come across lemons that are this good in this section.
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  • From ANON - Rin on October 31, 2005
    ^^ Teehee, I had so much fun reading.
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  • From ANON - yoyai on October 31, 2005
    Well I'm glad you didn't do a crappy job like most Sesshomaru+Rin lemon writers. I hope you write another and give it a plot. PWP are fine but its also nice to read a lemon with a plot. Just make sure you don't totally fall out of character. Its ok, to get a little out of character but turning Rin into a gangster, slut, or something stupid like that is so annoying to readers... trust me.
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  • From ANON - Kanana on October 31, 2005
    Your lemon is saucy ^^ hehe I like that.
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  • From ANON - October on October 31, 2005
    Oh my gosh, its a Sesshomaru+Rin lemon that's not flowery weak. NICE! You must write another!
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  • From ANON - Raca on October 31, 2005
    You rule! ^_^ I enjoyed reading.
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  • From ANON - May on October 31, 2005
    Me like this! I request you do another!
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  • From ANON - Lemongirl on October 31, 2005
    This fic is awesome. I love it! The song that played through my head was "Waiting For Tonight" by Jennifer Lopez. Keep up the great work and write another Sesshomaru+Rin fic. For the next, get more naughty with it ^^ knowing Sesshomaru... (chuckles) he is an all nighter ^_^ he wouldn't let Rin sleep. He'd bang her good and she'd shed tears of pleasure. ^_^ Everyone in feudal Japan would know Sesshomaru is pleasing his mate because she would be screaming that loud :). I totally see them doing: doggie style, regular position with either on top, foreplay, masturbation duet, oral sex, and sesshomaru effortlessly lifting Rin as he slams her up and down upon his rod - her back is to him and she is in his laps. Yep things would get REAL naughty with them. Have you seen the 3rd movie of InuYasha? Sesshomaru looks like his dad ^_^. But anyway, I love the lemon! Your good.
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  • From ANON - GlitterMAGIC chick on October 31, 2005
    Wow, that was hot. ^^ Hehehe, I love this couple and I love this lemon. It is a great read... now I need to find my boyfriend :). Hey I have a request, since your so good when it comes to lemon scenes, why not write another great lemon like this with a plot? I was curious if you could write a InuYasha fic that was AU with: InuYasha, Sesshomaru, Kagome, Sango, Miroku, Rin, Kouga, Ayame, Shippo, Kikyo (maybe others...) in highschool. I like InuYasha highschool fics and every one that I have read have dissapointed me because either the characters are horribly out of character, the lemon is weak, or the story is just plain crap. But reading this fic of yours, I can tell you'd do an awesome job. So what do you think? My request/challenge is to write an InuYasha AU highschool fic with the InuYasha+Kagome, Miroku+Sango, Sesshomaru+Rin, (maybe others...) couples. They are all teenagers, (I don't like rin being a student and dating a teacher sesshomaru) and: Shippo - Rin- Ayame can be a 9th graders, Kagome - Sango a 10th grader, InuYasha - Miroku - Kikyo can be 11th graders, and Sesshomaru - Kouga can be 12th graders. Kouga being a jock in school is the perfect role for him ^_^. Sesshomaru would be off to himself I guess what you would call a loner, Miroku of course would be popular and a ladies man, InuYasha would probably be a punk since he is considered an outcast on the human and demon side, I can't think about the others right now but I'm sure you'll come up with something. Oh yes, ^^ make InuYasha, Shippo, Kouga, Ayame, and Sesshomaru humans so they can sorta blend in with the school. I guess a black haired human InuYasha would be fine ^_^ as for Sesshomaru, he can keep the lovely silver-white hair but ditch the elf looking ears, the markings on his face, the sharp claws, his big fluffy thing he walks around in, and that lavender moon. Perhaps he can wear his hair in a pony tail like his father so he looks something like this:

    http://groups.msn.com/LordoftheWesternLands/sesshoumaruandrin.msnw?action=ShowPhoto&PhotoID=481

    Just copy and paste the link. I hope you do consider my request/challenge because personally I think if you did a AU high school fic with a plot with those 3 couples I mention and others if you decide to add any, this would get you DOZENS of reviews. Make the chapters interesting and catchy, doesn’t have to be super long but don’t make each chapter too short. Put Romance/Humor/Drama in it and of course lemon and lime which would make it NC-17. I have confidents in your abilities. Also as far as Shippo goes, I can see the teen version of him through this picture:

    http://www.linsdomain.com/otherworld/pictures/shippo3.jpg

    ^_^ Get creative with it and stay in character please!


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  • From ANON - Ocean on October 31, 2005
    I request you write another sexy Sesshomaru+Rin lemon because you certainly know how to do one without leaving readers dissapointed. Your a good writer, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Fan on October 31, 2005
    You are talentive when it comes to hot sex scenes.
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  • From ANON - Destiny245 on October 31, 2005
    Good, its so saucy. I like this ^_^ I wish I was Rin. I hope to see another lemon on these two soon.
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  • From ANON - Naomi on October 31, 2005
    SESSHOMARU+RIN FOREVER BABY! ^_^ that couple and this lemon rules!
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  • From ANON - Saki on October 31, 2005
    Aw... how nice ^^ I love this lemon. Please do another and give it a plot.
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  • From ANON - Moon1234 on October 31, 2005
    You certainly know what you are doing. Nice, I hope you write another.
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