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Reviews for Day and Night

By : Nahaujaret

From ANON - HawkAngel on January 08, 2006
jajajajaa this fic is really coool!!.. please update soon!

HawkAngel
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From ANON - sessygoddess01 on January 06, 2006
please please update asap please please
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From ANON - lyical Beauty on January 04, 2006
ha ha ha your story is off the hinges (smile) favorit things to do is dance and sing so I am really feeling your story. (smile)
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From ANON - kagome2004 on December 29, 2005
please please please update this
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From ANON - Akasha on December 25, 2005
Should I give up on you updating this?
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From ANON - Junko Adachi on December 23, 2005
Hello random person! I like your story alot! I'd also like to say that I personally don't give a fuck whether you decide to put supposedly 'racial' shit in your story. I mean, if you are writing a story about hiphop and people from the ghetto they should talk the right way. If not how would that make you look? It make you out to be an uneducated poser who doesn't know shit about what theyre gettin into. Don't apologize for writing your story the way you want to write it. To hell if it offends people! If they're offended that's there problem. And while we're at it, who gives a shit if they think 'nigga' is racial? I happen to be white (gag me) and I have felt like shooting people for they're racist comments. I have friends who are from the ghetto, (cool people) in fact, my ex was the leader of a mafia. I call my friends 'nigga' all the time. Like you said, it depends on how you use it. Your crew is your family and depending on how you use the word is how its taken. (I know from experience... *shudders at memory*) Well, I gotta be leaving now! See ya! Please update soon! --Junko
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From ANON - Hannah on December 18, 2005
I REALLY like this story!!! I love how you put a different culture mix with it!!! Please update soon!
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From ANON - diego on December 13, 2005
hehe! i love your storie and i hope to read the next chapeters soon ...( before krismas)....well it good, am curious of what will happen next
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From ANON - Kari-chan on December 12, 2005
Yo I love this story and I hope you update it soon. And please, you're a great writer so don't even worry about what those punk-ass flames say. I like the fact that you ain't scared to use the "N" word in your stories. As for yall out there who do have a problem with it, let me remind you of something. Calling each other by the "N" word (and I know it because I'm black) is part of black culture. It might not be the best element of our culture but its part of it all the same. And as for yall saying shit like she makes black people look bad, we blacks aren't the only ones saying the "N" word and yall know it. Where I grew up, it didn't matter if you were black, white, asian, hispanic, arab, or anything. Whenever you said hi to someone, you said, "Wudd up niggah." Obviously, the author knows it too considering she writes about Rin saying the "N" word. So quit all your bitching about it. She already said she ain't gonna stop putting it in her stories. So god damn, if you have a problem with it, read another story. Last I checked, she wasn't holding a gun to your head, making you read her fic. And yall who have a problem with her saying the thing about Japanese people hating to be mistaken for Chinese people, give it a fucking rest. She was just pointing out a fact, not trying to give a sermon. Yall who had a problem with the fact that she didn't say the vice-versa, I thought this story was about JAPANESE people. Not Chinese, not Korean, Japanese people. In my opinion yall people who keep flaming her for that are just using up space on this site with your useless attempts to try and put a good writer down. So you know the solution: If you don't like what she writes then don't read it. Personally, after the obsessive bitching, I think that you reading this story is an insult to the author's talent.

Once again, I hope you update soon. I'm out.
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From ANON - katie on November 17, 2005
that was gteat keep goimgI OLVE THE HOOD AND THE SWEAR WORDS U ROCK KEPP GOING OR I"LL KICK UR ASS ok thank yah byes

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From ANON - Ren on November 17, 2005
Tee hee hee..great chapter keep it up!! ^_^
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From ANON - RED-INU on November 17, 2005
NICE chap. keep working on it n.n
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From ANON - WestFullMoon on November 15, 2005
Arrrgh...I made a mistake. Well, several, but this once leaped out at me.

"....bad idea, but it does come that easily..."

It's supposed to be "...bad idea, but it DOESN'T come that easily...."

I'm sure you could tell...but just incase....
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From ANON - WestFullMoon on November 15, 2005
I love your story plot, it really does have POTENTIAL to go far! This is not a flame, since I am addressing issues I've noticed in other people's reviews:

1) moonbabe1989

I agree!

2) Storyline/plot/ etc.: Very good! Nothing to complain about, really. You warned about the language and such, and I think it's kind of you to do so. Once again, this story will go FAR beyond your imagination! Unless you have one heck of an imagination... ^_^

3) BrownWolf.....Interesting person

Yes, it is a fictional story. But like I said before, words do have power when used correctly. Ever heard of a persuasive essay? But as for you other views, I whole-heartedly agree. I just hope you don't view me as one of the...erm...B-people, to use a better term for it ^_^;;

4) sesscat

One of the many reviewers who said they had no problem with you using the "N" word. I'm proud, since I do not have a problem either! I'm a cousin twice removed to a *black female* but am her best friend :) In a way, she's kind of like my sister, if you can call it that.

5) Swiftsword...ah, where to begin? Took me a long time to read it, well, not really, but I did mull it over for a while.

"You may not have been purposely "trying to promote hate," but you seem incredibly unaware that by writing of it, you inevitably utilize, and therefore give the appearance of accepting and tolerating it. That is the message some readers will get. Don't you understand the power writers have to influence others? Good writers know to use their power well, or not use it at all. Bad writers seem to continually ignore the fact, or are simply too stupid to realize it. And we all know what happens when stupid people are installed in a position of power: the results can be compared to George W.Bush as President. "

Okay, that I agree. The power of words is a powerful force. Think Hitler... I mean, he wasn't born all commanding and well-respected. He used the power of WORDS to influence people. If you ever get the chance, visit the Museum of Tolerance; more information there. Or just go on a search engine. However, the "George W. Bush" statement is going WAY over the line. But, since, this is a about Day and Night, I shall not go into politics...for now.

"This isn't just about "my people." This is about your writing having cast BOTH JAPANESE AND CHINESE people in negative lights. You have cast the Chinese as an inferior race that causes people to say, and I quote from your writing, "Yuck!" when mistaken for being Chinese. You have made the Japanese seem like arrogant racists. Since you claim to know Japanese who aren't offended by it, I'm amazed that you still went ahead and used it, perpetuating the stereotype that Japanese dislike Chinese....Such arrogance. "

I wouldn't exactly call it arrogance, but it was tactless of you to include that. I'm a Japanese-Chinese-American (and much more, but that's not important in this arguement) and I am NOT offended when people call me one or the other. It's okay, I know it's hard to tell. However, the fact that you still put it there realy does concern me. You say that as if EVERYBODY Japanese or everybody Chinese believes like each other. I know you meant well, but reword your statement, please?

"Yes, I'm calling you a hypocrite. By telling people to "get over it," you're not using what numerous civil liberties leaders fought for, you're destroying it. They didn't "get over it," they fought it. You can't show others the capabilities of your race while simultaneously calling racism something to "get over". That is a demonstration of one of the highest degrees of ignorance and hypocrisy that I have ever seen."

Again, I know you mean well. But telling people to "get over it" really is displaying "one of the highest degress of ignorance and hypocrisy" I have ever known. So, did all the people in the past who fought for freedom, equal rights, etc. need to be forgotten? Now, I'm not saying that putting the past behind us is a bad idea, but it does come that easily. People just don't wake up one day and say, "I know they (any group you wish to use) made me suffer, but since now I have equal rights too let's hold hands and dance under a tree!" ...T_T If you honestly believe that, I've lost hope in you. Assuming you do not believe that (and I'm positive you don't) you might want to, once again, rethink how you word ideas.

6) It's late...I'm tired. I'll be waiting for the next chapter, okay? Continue with the superb work!
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From ANON - BrownWolf on November 14, 2005
Yo, i just read the reviews from your story and every1 who gotz a problem wit it is straight trippin. I mean its a DAMN FICTIONAL story. keyword FICTIONAL, the reasons why to it dont have to match up wit the damn history. Oh and by the way some japanese people do hate being mistaken for chinese down here in va AND ITS NOT the reason u said it 2 be swihtblade or wateva it was. Also i agree wit moonbabe, why da hell r u still readin dis story if gots such a problem wit. Go read sum1 esle's since this is 2 black 4ya. The word Nigga is diff form nigger. you use nigger and u'll get shot, use nigga wit sum1 u down wit and u's cool. so she right. Us black ppl made it a POSITIVE THANG just 4 ur 411. So in closing i says: Gurl you keep doing ur thang and all u haters need to bounce to another more whiter or wateva da fuck story, BITCHES!!

Im out ~1~

P.S. yo dont 4get to update SOON!!
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