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Reviews for Battle of Wills (revised)

By : zeeScarlet
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 29, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Rinseternalsoul on November 07, 2005
    Very nice lemon. I just LOVED the 'demon side' of Sesshomaru pressing him on. It was extremely sexy. Nice job.
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  • From ANON - Scarlet on November 07, 2005
    WRITERS BLOCK... *sighs* Whatever wonderful chemical imbalance had occured to make my words flow so freely before, has suddenly stopped. Suddenly I find everything I type superficial and forced, which makes for really crappy story lines. I'm not sure if I'll keep the last chapter I've added here or not, but it may be a little while before I continue with this story. I'll definately be on the boards, but I thought I would let my readers know since I'm now going from writing 2 chapters a day to writing one paragraph, becoming completely disgusted with what I've written and quickly discarding it. I will eventually finish this story I promise, but for now.....time to read and regroup..*nod nod*

    Hug and Kisses! Scarlet
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  • From kcalvello on November 07, 2005
    I like this new version of the story but I do like the other version as well. The only thing I did not like before was the fact that it was left open. The new scenes are awesome but I'm not totally into the Inu/Kag stuff. I can't wait to see where you're going with this. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Scarlet on November 06, 2005
    SHHHHH!...Its a secret..all though I will tell you while I was writing this the ending came to me..along with all the stuff that will happen inbetween :P..we are a good 10 chapters from the end...but...once the ending came to me I was like AWWWWWWWWW...so hopefully you will too :P
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on November 06, 2005
    It will be interesting to see how it all plays out with Sess being invisible to Inuyasha and how Kagome will resolve that conflict. A threesome? Hihi

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on November 06, 2005
    Very hot lime. Too bad it had to end.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From zeeScarlet on November 05, 2005
    I have to admit to something....I hate kagura..*hangs head in shame*..In most of my fics...you wont' even see her mentioned..even if it made sense...she's too..I dunno.....She wants my sesshy dammit!!....My "sesshy formula" if you will is that he's an ubber snuggly teddy bear with a gruff exterior he puts up to keep people out. The whole I love you thing will be interesting later on and you'll see why...but...the actual saying I love is different for different people...My theory was ..he was caught up in the moment...so...will he say it again?...Mebee not...will Kagome remember?...Oooooo I dunno...guess we'll have to wait and see :P
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  • From BrucesGirl on November 05, 2005
    Heya, Girlie!!!

    Well, just a couple of things for today's review!

    One, I'm not sure that Sesshoumaru would admit his love so freely to Kagome, although it would be a nice little facet to his already complex character. You know I was thinking that Sesshoumaru actually broke and became compassionate after the death of Kagura. Maybe this is part of that, ne?


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  • From ANON - Badkitty on November 05, 2005
    Kagome is funny when she's drunk! I'm loving this story, I can't wait to see who ske picks. I personally hope it is Sesshoumaru but we'll have to wait and see. Update soon :)
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  • From ANON - snowfall on November 05, 2005
    That was cute. A drunken Kagome. But shame on Sess. She might not remember what he said. At least he respects her need for space. Nice chapter.

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - Rinseternalsoul on November 04, 2005
    You certainly are quick on the updates. Putting me to shame. This writer's block is killing me, but it obviously isn't effecting you in the least. The last two chapters were great. The Truth or Dare game had me on pins and needles the whole time. It was sexy, but I was continuously wondering if Sesshomaru was going to catch them! ARGH! So now the well isn't working, and she finds herself moved into Sesshomaru's home. I suppose if I had a choice of 'the hot guy with a castle' or 'the hot guy with a really great tree', I would chose the guy with the castle. Mom always told me that love doesn't put food on the table. She was so right. Since Kagome thinks she may love Sesshomaru, she should just give in and accept his handsome body into her bed. Ahhh... Well, that is, unless she can have them both. Now that would be a 'two for the price of one deal' that I couldn't pass up! Enough rambling by me. Til next time~
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  • From BrucesGirl on November 04, 2005
    Yes! Another great update. You know, my favorite episode EVER of Inu Yasha that I've seen so far is Episode 35 when Sesshoumaru saves Rin. His eyes are so soft and gentle that I just wanna melt into a puddle of female hormones right in front of my TV... I love the fact that Sesshoumaru is so unattainable, yet he's so close to Kagome. It's really a great story! Waiting for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Rinseternalsoul on November 03, 2005
    Okay, so I see there has been some major additions and deductions from the story. I like it though. I feel bad for Inuyasha, but I so loved Sesshomaru's torment of Kagome while the hanyou was so near. It will be interesting to see where the story goes from here. Til next time~

    Rinseternalsoul
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  • From ANON - pixie on November 03, 2005
    One word... HOT. Hope this gets updated soon, its amazing! ^___^
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