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Reviews for A Feudal Fairytale

By : TwistedImmortal
  • From pcpalomo on October 25, 2008
    were u planning on continuing the story?. please do consider it. let me know if u do decide to cilla_0198@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 22, 2005
    That's fuck and you know it i cant wait for thar long are you crazy i love this story and you make me
    wait fuck this see you in Feb. if i don't for get about this so call FAIRYTALE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    SORRY I NEEDED TO GET THAT OUT LOVE THE STORY MAKE IT VERY BAD AND SEXY
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  • From ANON - Hellsfire Alchemist on December 19, 2005
    I really luved ur story!!!!!! it's really good, although um, i have one question, why is it when the charrecters r speaking there's no quotation marks. Not to complain or anything, it just makes it kind of hard to fallow. I really don't mean to pile up any work or anything... i really luv your story and all, and the grammer mistakes, don't worry about them... i make them all the time in my stories, they can just complain, u really don't have to change them...anyways looking forward to ur update! Thanx 4 reading this review!


    Hellsfire Alchemist
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 16, 2005
    What ever happened to grammar? Don't you even proofread this?
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  • From ANON - Bunny on December 15, 2005
    I really feel that you have a good story line but the writing and grammer is horrible on this. Did u read over it beofre you posted it? quotation marks around speech would be really nice can't tell whos talking. slow down no need to move that fast. u have a good plot but it gives me a headache trying to read it.
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  • From ANON - Killer Black Rose on December 15, 2005
    So fucken cool i love it so fucken much up date soon cuz i love it soooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhh. UP DATE UP DATE SOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN.
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  • From ANON - mari on December 15, 2005
    love it
    more more more!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Tsuki on December 14, 2005
    pump pump pump puummmmmp Sesshoumaru has arrived!! nya, update soon, and just an opinion you should had have writing the song in italics because it was to read where the song ended and where the story continued
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 25, 2005
    the story was great so far keep on writing...ummm, i dont know what else to write so bye


    love always
    your neice!
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  • From ANON - Subaru on November 20, 2005
    Cool, update soon!
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  • From ANON - labelle on November 14, 2005
    its really comming along keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - sheana on November 14, 2005
    Hi i like the story so far. Looks like its going to be a good story. Up date soon

    Sheana
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  • From ANON - mari on November 09, 2005
    more more more more!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - labelle on November 08, 2005
    interesting keep it up
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  • From ANON - labelle on November 08, 2005
    this is such a good story
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