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Reviews for A Question Of Honor

By : KogasAngel

From ANON - anon on November 26, 2005
this is a great story you are doing a wonderful job writing the whole recovery and stuff. I do have a question... what about the jewel? did Kagome have part of it and did Naraku take it or did the ones that betrayed her take it? Does Kouga still have his shards if he does and I was Kagome I would demand that he hand them over. Anyway update soon please.
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From ANON - UKK on November 26, 2005
Ooooh, I jsut got a visual of Griffin and Conner getting intoa fight and Kagome accidently seeing the violence...yeah. Scary in my opinion. I love the fact that you are keepng Kags in character with what hapened to her, and love the visuals you give me. Ummm, I would love for you to update this...but do you think you could do a side one shot with the scotsmen and Kags? I think that would be sweet *blushes*.
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From ANON - risa on November 24, 2005
I've read your story first at A Single spark but as every one welll knows the site has been dowm and it is on read mode only-anyway I digress, this is an exceellent story and I must say that you are one of my favorite writers. I can't wait until the next update. Thank you so much for your talent and sharing it with us.
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From ANON - alix on November 24, 2005
This is a great story. I think Sango is only thinking about the "rape" that happened to Kagome.... she is not thinking about the whole picture and the fact that they betrayed her. She is only thinking about how they didn't mean it to happen (the rape) she is not thinking about the betrayal..... I remember a saying it says "The deepest circles of hell are reserved for betrayers and mutineers"

Keep writing this is a great story
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From ANON - midnighttimberwolf on November 24, 2005
This is one hell of a story.... I just adore it, no that's not right I love it.... Yeah, oh I liked the way you added the Scottish lyrics to the story... That is a hard feat to acomplish I love your characters especially Connor and Balthazar..... I can't wait to see Kagome doing more than slapping hands away or using a bit of miko power.

I would like to see her come out fighting like never before. Just from reading this story I found anther way that would make the ending grand the original plot with Sesshoumaru and the second having the Scottish Inu Connor wait five hundred years to see her again but again that's my insight so far. I would love to know where you learned the scot's terminology for old style writing I love writings done in different languages. Until next time peace.
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From ANON - PJ on November 24, 2005
This is a great story please continue soon. I cannot believe those guys wanting forgivness so soon after everything that happened. They even tied her up for goodness sakes she couldn't even fight back. It would have been better if they would have just sent her home. I can not believe Inuyasha withdrew his protection and believed that undead b*tch. Kikyou is the one that "killed" him and he still believes her... they all did what idiots. He has kept his promise to Kikyou time and time again even after she had betrayed him but what has Kagome done to deserve that. If you have seen any of the movies... in movie two Kagome takes and arrow in the back protecting Inuyasha when he couldn't dodge it. And she keeps him from becoming that mindless youki in the movie and in the series as well. She has always protected him and stood up to youki much stronger then herself to help them. She protected him when he has been human. Heck he wouldn't even have his sword it it wasn't for her. I think I know why Sessy sword wouldn't work for him... because he did not help her and was not honor able so the sword or "his father's spirit" would not aid him in "erasing" the harm her caused. I think it would serve Inuyasha right if his sword didn't work for him since he withdrew his protection from Kagome. Sure it is supposed to help him protect humans but I think his father would be very disappointed and so the sword shouldn't work for a while. He should have to earn back the ability to use the sword... maybe Sessy too. Kagome also saved them all from Naraku when Sango had betrayed them trying to save her brother. It was Kagome's arrow that stopped Naraku. Also about Kagome still having her powers... well Kikyo was trained in her powers so I suppose that is why she is still able to use them... but Kikyo is only alive because she has part of Kagome's soul which would give her part of Kagome's powers? I think Kagome's powers don't depend on a pure "body" but a pure heart/spirit. And the only reason Kikyo doesn't taint the jewel could be because she has part of Kagome's soul.

I also like how you have having it that Kagome didn't recover like overnite like many stories do this is very realistic. I love the Scottish youki they are wonderful. Connor better be careful I think he is going to set himself up for some heartache.

Anyway please keep writing this is a great story.
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From ANON - jes on November 23, 2005
Its such a great story and it only keeps gettin better. I cant even wait to see what will happen next, I might die from anticipation first. LOL There just so much going on that holds my interest. I know everuone says this but I love the way they all talk. well I hope theres more scenes with just Kagome/Sessh coming up!! Peace
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From ANON - inuyoukai8 on November 22, 2005
OMG!!!! PLEASE FOR THE LOVE ALL THAT'S HOLY... UPDATE!!! WAHHHH!!!
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From ANON - Dawn on November 22, 2005
Yes!!!

I am so glad that you continue to write this story. I first read it at another site and had not bee able to find it again. Anyway, excellent job in writing this story, I am looking forward to reading more about all of the demons from Scotland. I have a question though...Is Kagome going to end up with Seshomaru?
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From ANON - Dark Druidess on November 22, 2005
I just wished to say I have enjoyed reading your story and was wondering how often you update your story,
because I am looking forward to reading more.
I cheered when Kagome used her miko gift on Inu (is that wrong of me? Grins I am a fan of Sess and not Inu)
I am hoping you however go a little more into the character of Balthazar (why does that name sound so familure to me�)
Anyway� I am looking forward to reading more ..
DD

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From ANON - ParalyticDawnfire (not logged in) on November 21, 2005
I am seriously enjoying your fanfic. And you're good at keeping your characters' accent in line. Most authors eventually forget about it, and everyhting goes downhill from there. But not yours! Of all your Scottish inu's I like your cranky killer best.

It's wierd that they call themselves 'inu', though. Scotland would have no idea what a 'youkai' or an 'inu' would be. However, because I can use my imagination, and because Karin said they her family knew many languages, I've decided to ignore it. But, doesn't inu just mean dog? Oh, and wouldn't 'bitch' then be a compliment amongst them? But I supose humans wouldn't know that. And everything is insulting if it comes after the word stupid.

Oh, geeze. I was babbling! Suffice to say I love your fanfic and will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
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From ANON - angelfighter on November 21, 2005
Hi!
How are you? I am so happy you are back with your so nice stories. You wrote that we review and so I am doing what you requested. This story is very beautiful so as are the other ones. The last chapter to If you�re not the one was so great. I can not stop reading and some of them I read more then once. A Question of honor was one of them. Until I was waiting fot new chapters I read the others. Abd I have to admit, that the story is thinked ower very well (as are the other ones)
Please continue with your so great stiries.
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From ANON - swasdiva on November 20, 2005
And I have to through in a random note to agree with several other reviewers: Yeah, Balthazar has got to be the hottest one. Dunno what it is, he's just...yeah. I'm also starting to adore his interaction with Kagome, and I wouldn't mind to see the big, tough, hot brute to fall for her...hard. That, my dear, is a testament to how well you've developed these OCs if we reviewers are already campaigning for 'alternate pairings' among new characters!!!!! Holy crap-sticks, that takes skill on your part or rabid fanfic addiction on our part. I'm thinking a little bit of both.
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From ANON - swasdiva on November 20, 2005
Wow...I'm beginning to wonder why I've never bothered to read this fic before. It's got to be one of the more original Sess/Kag stories. I ADORE these OCs. I'm also an insanely huge fan of highlander romances, so I can see each 'lad' and Karin with vivid clarity. I also adore the Sess/Kag pairing, but I tell you, the more I read about him I'm starting to root for Connor. I know that feasibly Sesshoumaru can't do anything soon to make a move on Kagome, if he is even conscious of having feelings for her yet, but hellfire, Connor is a face unassociated with Kagome's trauma and she already feels comfortable enough with him to fall asleep in his arms. And, he's hot! Still, I know his love with eventually be unrequited *sniff!*. If he's lonely from the rejection, I humbly offer myself to ease his pain *cough*. So yeah, this fic is fabulous and I can't wait to read more!
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From ANON - Mimi on November 20, 2005
Glad you updated. Kags did the right thing to the traitors. Conner needs to step down. COTNINUE!
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