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By : DragonflyMina
  • From lara5170 on June 18, 2014
    This story is just starting to get interesting. I'd love to read more and find out what happens next but I noticed that this story hasn't been updated in since 2006. Unless it's been posted on another site and it's been continued, or even completed, then I guess it's over. I'm going to see if I can find on another site, what have I got to lose??
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  • From Sexy-Holo on March 27, 2013
    this was a very good alternate version. I hope you add more chapters soon since you did in fact leave it hanging quite abruptly.
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  • From litlestamazon on March 12, 2013
    I wish you had finished this :(
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  • From ANON - MidNight on October 13, 2006
    I enjoyed this story very much please continue.
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  • From ANON - Cleo on September 15, 2006
    I am really getting into your story, but i've been wondering since your last chapter does Sesshoumaru know of the shikon no tama that's hidden within her just wondering and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Sankontesou on July 11, 2006
    this story is great!!! update again soon!!!
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  • From Katgome on February 11, 2006
    I absolutely love your fic!!! Very different and fun. Chapter 9 was just as good as the others!!! The story is going slow enough that it makes it tantilizingly fun!!!! I love seeing Sesshoumaru fighting his desires for Kagome, poor guy is just gonna get whooped by her!!! It will be fun to see him fight so hard then finally give in with a roar. Keep up the awesome work!!!
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  • From hellspixie18 on February 10, 2006
    Do you have this story posted anywhere else that way I can read it while aff is down?
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  • From ANON - sassy on February 02, 2006
    great now up date.
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  • From ANON - chubbers on February 01, 2006
    man.... i thought you fell off the face of the earth or something!HOPEFULLY you will update sooner???
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  • From ANON - yasha girl on February 01, 2006
    i like the new update and thanks for coming back with the story^^

    so sesshomaru is making kagome pay off her debts because of the damage to her room.

    so who is dirtying the floor and having kagome clean it every morning?

    sesshomaru is caring about what kagoe thinks of him and what she's thinking about.

    sesshomaru is angry because he even cares about what kagome thinks.

    what will happen now? will kagome escape and find her way home,back to the bone eater's well or will she stay there?

    what of kagome's family they must be worried by now or do they know what's going on already? is kagome going to turn into a demon like an inuyoukai like sesshomaru? kagome's family are they demons?

    onegai update soon onegai

    see ya round

    ja ne
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  • From Katgome on January 27, 2006
    Just finished reading your last chapter, the chapter 8. Very nice & very long! Now I am MORE than looking forward to reading your next chapter which I hope comes up sometime soon! Loved it.
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  • From Katgome on January 27, 2006
    Just finished reading chappie 7 and wow, it was so much longer! We just like your work and can enjoy it even more when it is longer! Now off to read that last chappie you have up.
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  • From Katgome on January 27, 2006
    Doing good! I just want to be selfish & want longer chappies! Great work! You are giving such nice detailed visions for everyone to see by the nice way you are describing the characters. Love it!
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  • From ANON - katgome on January 27, 2006
    I am loving this fic! It definitely has some unique outlooks on it which I like! I just finished reading chapter 4 and it was just as good as the others. The only thing that I feel could make it better would be to slow the pace down a bit more to allow the reader to experience more, in other words, add more stuff! That means your writing is very good, we just want more of it! Also another bonus would be to have the chapters last longer. Again, I love your work! Enjoying very much, I am hooked and will continue to read & critique!
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