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By : doggieearlover

From inufan625 on February 01, 2006
Another excellent chapter. I thought it was particularly nice and in character for InuYasha to collect wood and meat for the villagers, and I liked how you had Miroku and Sango both acknowledge him for it. I also liked the bit about the photographers and the part with Eri. (it seems we think a lot alike if you check out my latest chapter concerning her...lol) Anyway I look forward to your next chapter.
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From ANON - kim on February 01, 2006
sorry i haven't reviewed in a while but i have to say that this story is one of the best I have ever read please keep me updated.
Kim
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From ANON - PJ on February 01, 2006
Nice chappie!!! I knew Inuyasha would help when they went back. It was kind of cute the way Miroku tried to find out if Inuyasha lost his temper or whatever. Or figured that Inuyasha didn't help with diaper changing. So Inuyasha built that hut... what did he do to make it so it would stay warm? And will it stay cool in the summer? I bet he kind of "insolated" it or something in Kagome's time and figured out how to do something close to it in the past. Inuyasha is not stupid he spent all that time alone raising himself if he was stupid he wouldn't have made it. Keep writing you are doing great... congrats on the nomination!!!!
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From ANON - alix on February 01, 2006
nice update. Somehow I figured Inuyasha would help out as much as he could when they went back to visit. I wouldn't be surprised if he makes another trip just to check on everyone and help some more. Or maybe Sessy will come by and help or that other Lord of the North? So I guess Eri wouldn't have gotten any pictures anyway with that stuff keeping pictures from being taken around/in the building? Or the recording either I suppose. Do Inuyasha & Kagome know about that stuff installed in the building that prevents pictures. It is too bad they have to put up with people trying to get pictures and stuff. Anyway done asking questions. Keep writing this is a great story thx for posting.
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From ANON - Inu Hanyou Nikkie on February 01, 2006
Wow!! What a chapter that one was!! Another brillant chapter from the Literary Goddess!! Right on!! Poor Kagome. How awful for her to go through ( hell how awful it is for ANY mother to go through )and knowing Kagome after this incident she will be having doubts about her abilities. I hope Inuyasha will be able to rest her fears. Thankfully that Sesshoumaru and Kichou were so in tune with Kagome and Inuyasha. I am so happy they set aside their pleasure to help out. ROCK on Sess and Kichou!!! You have certainly painted at wonderful family here!! I love how they all interact with each other!! I love the hug Mai gave Inu about the extra cash!! It just speaks about the type of honourable man- errr-- hanyou he is!!! I hope that next quarter moon will be easier on Kagome. When will Inu be able to touch Kagome again? Will it cause some stress on the relationship? (cranky Inu) Thank you for touching upon Mai's mother and the sickness. It was touching. I really am quite enjoying this story!! I can only wait to see what will happen next!! I have fingers crossed that Miroku will discover little Inu pup teething and that they really like Miroku as the chew toy!!! Please keep up the most excellent work!!! And thank you for the honour of letting us read your story!!! Thank You!!! ( wanted to third the nomination but I was beaten to the punch- grrrrrr- ) I have my Fingers crossed that you will get your awards!! ROCK ON!!!!
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From ANON - linx678@yahoo.com on January 31, 2006
once again you're story is downright amazing! i ove the fact that both the twins look like Inuyasha...it was certainly something i wasn't expecting!

congrats on be nominated for the next round....i seriously hope you make it to first place (or however they rate it)

shippo
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From ANON - kj on January 31, 2006
another great chapter, poor pups, they musta been so frightened

I can't wait til inu and kags take em back and young shippo gets to see them!
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From ANON - taro_gurl on January 31, 2006
Aw what a cute chapter poor twins though. I really feel for Kagome though that has to be the worst for any mother! You know as an aside I think it would cool to let Inuyasha, Shippo, and Sesshomaru hang out. I mean he's been so busy with Kagome I think he needs so time along to hang out with the other great guys in this fic. Plus it would cool to see what the three would do for fun. Meanwhile Kagome could get to know Mai more or something like that.

Well whatever you decided to write it probably will be great as always. I'll be sure to review a lot more. Oh and yeah I sign up to vote too!
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From ANON - inu hanyou nikkie on January 30, 2006
That was a great and most awesome chapter!!!! Goddess you have done it again!!! Another prefectly delicious chapter from a Litereary Goddess!!!! Thank you!!!! I did get to join the Fan Guild and I think that I got it right.. . . technical stuff kind of makes my eyes go all anime style swirling. . . . LOL!! I hope that you win your awards!!! I have my fingers crossed for you!! I loved that Sess took his lesiurely time sketching Inu's Butt!! POOR INU!!! He had two guys looking at his butt... At least it wasn't Jyakotsu who was eyeing his behind!! And I loved the incident with Kagome catching Inu about to drop the bomb over the side!! LOL!! He is such a good boy!! You totally rock on!! I am sorry though that I didn't get to the guild in time to second your story with the category Sesshoumaru.. Gomen nasi.. I loved that Kichou is thinking of more pups. And what a delicious touch you had added with the Butt mark being a "family" tradition!! Love that Inu-papa had it on his behind too. LOL!!!! Love that Shippou made Honoo a crispy, chewy flambe- Hmmmm.. BBQ anyone? I wonder what the smell of burnt dog hair smells like?? evil grins.. I love the pups!! and what wonderful names you gave them!! They are perfect!!! I can't wait for the pups to discover their ears... and Inu's..... Will the pups be speaking in the Inu language before they start saying the human language? I can't wait for them to start getting mobile!! I can't wait for more to come!!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!!!! YOU TOTALLY ROCK ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for the honour of reading your story.
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From ANON - alix on January 29, 2006
Great chappie!!! I am wondering something.... now that Kagome has had the pups why doesn't she go see Mai's mother to see if she could help somewhat. Maybe not completely heal her but maybe ease her illness somehow. I know you don't want to fall into the trap of Kagome tries to heal everybody because unfortunatly she couldn't save everybody and it wouldn't be a good idea to try.... people need to pass on but Kagome being a who she is .... always looking to help people wouldn't she at least visit Mai's mother. I know Mai is just their housekeeper but I would hope they are friends too. And what kind of hanyou is Mai's husband? Just some questions I have and stuff. Still reading this and look forward to the next update.

Thanks for posting this wonderful story for all of us to read.
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From RoSharla on January 28, 2006
hi, i love your story, i hope u dont end it. i had read a story on 'fanfiction.net' on a crossover that goku of dragonball z had a daughter, and it was 'serena' from sailormoon, and that author went to over 150 + pages, and it was good. also in this website, someone had one of sesshomaru's daughter, end up mating with one of inuyasha's son. since demons dont have 'taboos' do u think u would be disguted if that happens? where dog demon cusions (cant spell it right) mated?

Also one of the sons of inuyasha would be 150% dog demon, 50% human, and sesshomaru who mated with rin in that story had 4 kids, 50% dog demon, 50% human. Inuyasha's son looked human, but with the claws, fangs, and amber eyes. The daughter and sons of sesshy, looked almost like Inuyasha (the cute doggy ears) but with between sesshy and rin's features. How i got the 150% is because that Inuyasha mated with Kagome when he was in his human state and since dog demon blood is stronger that is how. (Inuyasha= 50% dog demon, 50% human. Kagome 100% human) 100+50=150.

Keep up the good work. I love this story. and also "Emergence" (i know u didnt type that story, right?)

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From ANON - adea neri on January 28, 2006
so far i ve laugh cry and laugh again. i cant believe how great this fic is. keep up the good writing. cause i know that you will place. dont get discouraged cause your fans (the rabid, red eyed fans, if you stop writing will tear our hai r out) are counting on you.
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From ANON - alix on January 28, 2006
This is a great story. I hope they don't have to worry about anybody coming after the pups to hurt them. Or worry about that Eri girl trying to get pictures or something. thx for the update I got a kick out of where some of them have their marks.
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From ANON - Gina on January 28, 2006
This story is so good I could not stop reading it I can't wait for more..
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From ANON - p on January 28, 2006
This is a great story. I suppose Kagome will have to get a "spell" to make her kids look human before she leaves the hospital or at least in the near future. Update again soon
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