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Reviews for Aftershocks & Indemnify

By : inufan625
  • From ANON - Bree on November 18, 2005
    I'm glad to see you're posting the sequel. I liked the concept of other youkai punishing Inuyasha for leaving his mate and was glad you had Kaede, Miroku and Sango dishing out their punishment in more human ways. It will be interesting to see if Sesshoumaru stops at beating Inuyasha up or if he rescinds his edicts against him. I look forward to your updates.
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  • From angelstars on November 15, 2005
    That was beautifully written! This plot is the way I hope to see the InuYasha series end; with the defeat of Naraku and putting Kikyou to rest by Inuyasha... I would love to think Takahashi-san herself would have a similar way of ending the series, because really we all know that Kikyou is tricking Inuyasha into going to hell with her, she after all has been reincarnated in Kagome and so he would in theory be going to hell by himself to suffer alone. So this really does make a whole lotta sense. As InuGrrrl pointed out this is like Goodbyes, but different in so many other ways in fact this plot works better as a more direct approach to what all us IY fans want to see in the end.

    I loved the angst; it was just like the canon's storyline it brought me to tears. I also understood why you wrote Inuyasha's coldness toward Kikyou, whereas he is submissive and polite around her usually, under these circumstances I don’t blame the volatile attitude; for instance the fact his heart is divided, his pride and honor vs. his heart and soul or the way Kikyou was tormenting him by stalling the inevitable. Though when it came to freeing Kikyou, I thought he may have held her one last time before he released her as a way of goodbye, after all he did at one time feel something toward her. Other than that, I loved this piece, and think it’s one of your best yet.

    Thank you for sharing it with us and I am looking forward to reading the sequel.

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  • From ANON - TAJE on November 11, 2005
    Ch. 3) Yay! Bravo! Very Good. Love It! Beautiful Just Beautiful. Great Storytelling, full of emotions, and of course a happy ending! Great! Peace
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  • From ANON - TAJE on November 11, 2005
    Ch. 2) Oh Boo-Hoo! Suffer, suffer, suffer. Oh poor Kagome. I only hope she'll manage. I'll read on!
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  • From ANON - TAJE on November 11, 2005
    Ch. 1) Once again, you mananged to capture my heart with this pairing. Keep up the good work. I am going to continue
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  • From ANON - smurfsicle on November 10, 2005
    you are truly evil... noone has ever made me cry that much so quickly!!! BRAVO!! that story was amazing and I am definately loking forward to the sequel... please post it soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - lithium88 on November 10, 2005
    Aww! this was really a great short story. Right now i can't say much except WoW! haha, it's amazing wat a writer like you can fit into a 3 chapter story. Romance, Angst, Sorrow, Anger.. etc, you truly are talented! i can't wait for the sequel and of course for the updates on ur other story. so til then, take care!!!
    lith*
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  • From ANON - SoutasSister on November 09, 2005
    Very good. Heart-wrenching but a wonderful ending. I look forward to the sequel.
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  • From ANON - penpaninu on November 09, 2005
    VERY WELL WRITTEN. KUdos, I can't wait to read the rest later
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  • From ANON - Bree on November 09, 2005
    I love good Inu/Kag stories and you and Sueric are my favorite authors of them. It is amazing how much angst you wrote into just three chapters and I liked how you resolved the situation. I look forward to the sequel. I want to know if and how you reconcile Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on November 09, 2005
    Quite enjoyable! I read something similar
    called Goodbyes (I think) that too, was very
    good but ofcourse yours is different in many
    areas. Anyhoo...I liked it a lot. It was
    well written.
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