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Reviews for Is Naraku’s Last Curse a Blessing?

By : deathsdarkangel
  • From MsSpaceey on August 12, 2017

    All in all, I'm going to score you as good. I'm not an author for good reason. (I'm good at tweaking, terrible at creating from scratch. This is why I'm a cosmetologist, I'm great at expanding what's already there, but give me a blank sheet of paper, and nothing.) I unfortunately do have to agree with you about your lemon, it was clinical. You had what was happening, but nothing about how anyone felt about it. 

    Basically, your whole story has real potential. Simply being more emotional as well as more descriptive and visceral would help a lot. My favorite main stream published author, Diana Gaboldon( Outlander),  made a wonderful book titled 'I Give You My Body' that I think would help you immensely. It's literally an entire book about writing lemons. 

    Please give this story about pass and give it the credit that it truly deserves. 


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  • From TheMikoShivae on October 14, 2007
    good ending.. but that last picture was never reveiled.. :(
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  • From ANON - maria on July 08, 2006
    so.... what was on the last page of the journal? it was never actually said.... and what happend with Kagomes and Inuyashas kids? When is it that Miroku and Sango died and finally what really happend with Rin and Seshomaru? I think that your fic was really good at the beginng but the last couple of chapters were a bit lacking but that's normally what happens when someone finishes a fic... it's hard to do it's it? anyways, if you wanna drop me an email or IM you can contact me at inuyasha_1234@hotmail.com or nekoyoukaihanyou for aim.... i really enjoyed your fic even though the first of my comments may not seem like it, you should keep writting and who knows where it will take you!
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  • From ANON - rebel1128 on February 13, 2006
    that was freaking awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - joy on February 06, 2006
    wait... did inu and kag kill themselves?
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  • From ANON - Ferral on February 04, 2006
    wut was the last page of the journal? did they ever see it?
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  • From ANON - Cody Stout on January 11, 2006
    This was good so pleaze finish it.

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  • From ANON - josh on December 23, 2005
    that kicked assssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you gotta atleast make one more!!! Daaammmnnnnniiiiiittttt, mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmoooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - InyshChck on December 11, 2005
    That was asume! I loved what you did, i think that is how it should and might end in the show. Anyway, i hope that u make another chapter soon. Email me when u do. Lata!
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  • From ANON - sqeeky1990me on November 30, 2005
    WOW!! NOW I REALLY I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED
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  • From ANON - a lost soul on November 29, 2005
    I really like it so far. I can't wait until your next chapter, Kami please let it be soon^_^
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  • From ANON - mary on November 22, 2005
    PLEASE COMTINUE WITH THE STORY. PPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I REALLY LIKED THIS STORY.
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  • From ANON - Deaths_daughter on November 20, 2005
    I love that story you have to make more to it!
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  • From ANON - Twilight on November 15, 2005
    OH MY FUCKING BUDDA this is so good please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - kunkra on November 14, 2005
    damned cliffies!! I love the story but the last chapter just wasnt long enough...
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