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Reviews for The Moment I Saw You Cry

By : SayuriNakamura
  • From loretta537 on September 19, 2008
    this was good but i would have liked it better if you had said what type of youkai kagome turns into and inuyasha's reaction to her mating hiei
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 05, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Pyrokage on July 15, 2007
    This was really good. I don't think that you need to worry about staying away from one-shots. This has the potential to turn into a full story.
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  • From Mirikachan on May 31, 2007
    you should try writing more one-shots this was great I don't if my opinion matters that much but i think this is one of the best oneshots I've ever read Kagome*Hiei Forever =D
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  • From Bouken on March 23, 2007
    Moooou T^T Just toooo good to be true.... really liked it... normally Hiei/Kag parrings isn't the ones I cherrish the most... but this was really good made... well done ^_____^

    Thumbs up for ya! Don't think it can be done better.... please continue with the one-shots... you're pretty good at it... special I loved the ending... it told ya had a red line trough the whole story... and you remembered to add it so it matched the tittle perfectly... I'm looking forward to more from you... specially one-shots... Hiei is a good tema... and If it's you Kagome may be his mate^____~

    Love and admiration from Bouken~
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  • From on February 24, 2007
    ...(crys) that was sooo sweet! Inuyasha doesn't have very good likings in ffs...evryone makes him the bad guy...I think its funny! HeHe
    Kira
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  • From Luciana on February 16, 2007
    You have to turn this into a fic, it's too good not to! PLEASE do so I love the story and I'ld like to see how the spirit detectives react to Heiei mating with Kagome.
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  • From madmiko on February 14, 2007
    I am enjoying your current story so much, I just had to come back and re-read this. It's one of my favorite one-shots! I'll be re-reading your other great stories, too. They're fantastic and so satisfying. The only other thing I could have wished for in this one would have been Inuyasha's reaction to her re-marking. Heh heh! Maybe someday you can do a one-shot sequel?
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  • From dragongirlcv on January 26, 2007
    This was a good crossover, with a very beliveable sequence of events. The ONLY thing I have to comment on is that you rushed it. The time span in which things were taking place was very blured. However Like I said it was very good. My opinon (if you don't mind) Is that you should've made it into a longer story set in chapters, instead of trying to make it all fit into a very long rushed one-shot; but like I said the sequence of events that took place were VERY likely to have happened if the two worlds ever became aware of each other.
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  • From ANON - Dee Dee on December 19, 2006
    I definitly think that you should continue to write this story, and add a lot more chapters! Hope you update soon!!

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  • From ANON - fae princess of the veil on December 11, 2006
    i think u should make this into a full fledged story!!! its starting off great, but u could add so much more!!!!! PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE???!!!!!!!!^^..=)
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  • From ANON - madmiko on October 26, 2006
    Terrific one-shot! I like the length -- you worked in some good story. Of course, you could do a sequel with Inu's reaction to his mark being over-ridden. (I only mention it because I'm selfish, and I'm such a big fan of your writing. And I love Hiei/Kagome pairings, and there aren't enough good ones out there.) Keep writing!!
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  • From ANON - whitetigressdemon on October 17, 2006
    Ok i already reviewed but i kinda went back and read the story again kus it was soooo good! But i had another idea if ur goin 2 continue this story it would be cute 2 have kags get pregnant with hieis kid XD and one thing im diein 2 know is what type of demon did she turn into?! the suspence is killin me!
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  • From ANON - whitetigressdemon on October 17, 2006
    omg...that has to be one of my all time favorite kaghiei one shots ever! It was perfict XD but when kags threw her head back when hiei bit her i thought what if there heads colided right then that would totaly ruin the moment lmao u should make a story where kags is a blond and hiei finds out that he has 2 take her as a mate but have it where she drives him insane by teasing him with her body without her knowing it lol i would kill 2 read that anyway i loved your story and i hope u take my idea into consideration! ~tigress~
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  • From ANON - angel on September 07, 2006
    that. was. so. SWEET!!!! i never knew he could care that much. the other stories i've read were either really rude or really sappy.
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