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Reviews for My enemy my what

By : sesshomarunaraku
  • From ANON - dreamfool on November 18, 2005
    hey, i like this. it's getting good. one problem, i'm not seeing any Naraku, but i am seeing inuyasha. when do we get to see the 2 demons (while one full, one half) meet. write more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 16, 2005
    (...) WHAT THE HELL!!!
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  • From ANON - Xena on November 14, 2005
    You need to get a beta reader. You have many spelling and grammar errors in your story.

    Other than that I like it so far. It just needs the spelling fixed.

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  • From ANON - Kags21 on November 13, 2005
    Please update so far it's good
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  • From ANON - CallistaSky on November 12, 2005
    Aw, I think that was pretty good for your first Inuyasha fic. I know I'm hooked. ;] I can't wait to see what Inuyasha will do to poor Sesshomaru. And yum, Naraku and Sess together is one bundle of hotness.

    The only suggestion I would have is that you run your stories through a beta reader or at least a spell check. Don't worry though, I have a ton of mistakes in my story that I only caught after rereading (woops). It happens to us all.

    Anyway, I can't wait for more!
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