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Reviews for Catch Me When I'm Falling

By : michelle5137

From ANON - Honakett on November 15, 2005
Another great chapter. You were right it was too short. I like both Kurama and Yoko and I quess it depends on how it is written which I like best. I love the fics where Yoko is playful one minute and ready to rip someones throat out the next. As for Kurama I like his patients, but I have never read a fic where he was cold blooded. It may be interesting to read. Is Kurama going to have any moments in your fic where he is that cold?
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From ANON - azurephoenix on November 15, 2005
Hi, I loved your update, in regards to your question I like Kurama better. I can't wait for your next chapter, you are doing a great job with the imagery in your story.
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From ANON - Diane on November 15, 2005
I'm really enjoying reading this & am looking forward to the next chapter. I did notice a bit of a goof at the beginning of chapter 4 though, you mention a room several times when in the other chapters they're on a street corner. You said that Yusuke looked around the room at his friends & a bit down from there they're on the street corner again. I hope this helps.
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From ANON - UKK on November 15, 2005
WAI AN UPDATE!!!!! HURRY HURRY HURRY.. wait dont!!!!! lol. I want you to continue at the best of your ability, 'cuz rushed fics seem so...blah. urgh. phasduofyaskjn. lol. I am enjoying this...but tell me is Kags coming in soon? Will korei lead him to her, or is korei Kags? Will Kurama and Kuronue and Yusuke not fight over her? OOOH I need to find out! hurry and update ...o great, I talke din circles. >.
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From ANON - kougalover123 on November 15, 2005
i love how yusuke is very calm about his feelings about keiko. i never liked keiko very much i think she is a controling bitch. yusuke deserves so much better and he is finally realizing it. i have nothing against male/male fluff. in well written cases i quite enjoy it. please update again soon.
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From ANON - Bree on November 15, 2005
I just realized I hadn't reviewed since your first chapter and wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed the interaction between Kurama/Yusuke/Kuronue. Like the two older demons are teaching Yusuke to be a demon. The breakup was well done. I like how you made the characters as they were portrayed at the end of the series. Yusuke more mature and responsible. Keiko was almost the same at the end of the series as the beginning. I can see why she'd be the insecure one in the relationship. I'm looking forward to seeing her side of the breakup in the next chapter. I have questions about the character Ko-rei but expect that you'll be giving me my answers in upcoming chapters.

As far as your question--I prefer Kurama. He was much more multifaceted, sweet and innocent or cruel and mercifless. He could be just about anything.

Looking forward to your update.
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From ANON - Media on November 15, 2005
1. Hiei. He may be small but he's very strong, quiet, lonely, intelligent. All in all he's personality is unique. 2. I dont have. In YYH there are no acceptable females and I dont like male pairings. 3. Hiei/Kagome of course. Who else?
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From ANON - Anon on November 14, 2005
I totally agree with you on the cahracter things- I'm looking for stories that give them bgetter (read more true) personalities...one thing that confused me though is ko-rei, cuz at first I thoght shewas Kagome but then I don't think Kagome would ever be that ...erm...nicely cruel? That doesn't work. BUt I hope you update! And thanks for writing this!
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From ANON - kougalover123 on November 14, 2005
this is good so far. please update again soon.
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From ANON - lilly on November 13, 2005
This was a great start. I love the story already. Please continue and update soon. I can not wait to read more. As for my fav char or yyh ??? I think it is Yusuke I like Yusuke because at the beginning he is tough but he is also kind. He was a good guy even before he knew it. I dont think he ever started a fight the fight always seemed to find him. I have no fav couple on YYH. However my Favorite crossover pairing is Kagome/Kurama/Hiei or any threesome that includes Kagome and any of the hotties from YYH. I have many favs of crossovers from YYH and IY.
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From ANON - sendosha on November 13, 2005
Great start and thanks for including Kuronue to the story. To the questions:

1) Definitely Hiei. No one has suffered as much as him and survived (Mukuro bringing him back doesn�t count because he had no reason to live anymore). That alone is a reason why I love him so much, how sad it must be to have no reason to live for. He is unpredictable and still there are moments when he shows that he cares, for Yukina or Kurama.

2) To be honest no pairing. The girls are highly annoying and I don�t like to pair the guys with each other. The friendship they have is too precious that�s why I love crossovers with Inuyasha. You can pair Kagome with Hiei, Yusuke or Kurama. It doesn�t matter if it�s a triangle or a foursome, she would be perfect for each of them. The only girl I like in YYH is Shizuru and Kuwabara is nice. I can�t understand why so many authors make him look like the greatest idiot alive. He might be not as smart as Kurama but he is not dump and he caused many funny situations and is loyal till the end.

3) Kagome and Hiei. It�s like Ying and Yang. She can give him what no one ever did or just to a degree, unconditionally love and acceptance.
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From ANON - Kage Otome (not logged in) on November 13, 2005
Hey Kura-kuns-lovr! My favorite character from YYH would have to be...Hm...I really have no idea, in fact it's so hard to choose. I um..forgot the other questions...Tired...But I really liked this! Keiko is such a *----* I think it'd be safer if I didn't say, of course, I probably wouldn't be able to comment on what she is in just one word, it would probably take me 10 or an entire paragraph. *grins* I don't mind the light Shounen-ai, it's the heavy stuff i get a tad uneasy about, but it's your story! Have fun!
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From ANON - Leslie on November 13, 2005
Great story. I agree about Keiko. I wish just once someone would smack her down. I can't wait to see how the story continues. I agree with you also about Yusuke not being what other authors have written him to be. He can be funny and a smartass, but he is also strong, couragous, trustworthy, and a gentleman( note that he has not smacked Keiko yet). So to answer #1 my favorite character is Yusuke. #2 Faovrite YYH pair has to be Yusuke and Kurama/Yoko. #3 Favorite pair in a crossover Yusuke and Kagome and it is always fine with me if you want to put Kurama into the mix. PS Put the Lemons with Yusuke and Kurama/Yoko. PLEASE.
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From ANON - Himitsu on November 12, 2005
1) My fav YYH character is Kurama, Youko and Kuronue!! Not because they are hot (though they are) it's more of their personality, finding thrill in dangerous heist, those characteristic always attracted me, I simply LOVE dangerous guys!! I like Hiei too, but well, he's not really my type -grin-

2) I don't really like YYH pairing, they have no girls that I think is suitable, but I love Youko/Kuronue or Youko/Kurama/Yusuke

3) I read everything that has Kagome paired up with Sesshoumaru, Youko, Kurama, Kuronue and Yusuke My fav is Kur/Kag with Youko involved though, preferably threesome or foursome -grin-

Oh I simply can't wait for you to update this story!! I simply love story that wrote not so good things about Keiko (I POSITIVELY hate her!! She's not suitable for Yusuke!! He deserved Kagome!!) Although it's your choice, but please update soon!! -grin- I will be waiting!!!
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From ANON - Bree on November 12, 2005
I really enjoyed your story. I liked that you made Yusuke more grown up, strong and with a fairly decent life. He has a job, his friends have stuck by him, Koenma is still loyal to him and Genkai still likes her Dimwit. Keiko appears to be the same as she was at the beginning of the series, a bitchy 14 year old which is exactly how she acted at the end of the series. I think Yusuke would have been better off dumping her as a girlfriend and just kept her as a friend.

As for your poll, my favorite characters have always been Yusuke and Hiei. It goes back to the scene and conversation where they are standing together watching Yukina return to the ice world. That scene showed that there was more complexity to the characters than we'd seen so far. Hiei's fighting techniques were awesome, and although he didn't speak much when he did he showed a lot of intelligence and his humor was very funny, mostly because you didn't expect it. Yusuke was an immature smart ass to begin with but gradually what he went through forced him to grow up, accept his responsibility and become a better person.

Favorite pairing yyh only--Kurama and Hiei (as long as they are in character).

Favorite x-over pairing--Yusuke/Kagome

This has been fun and I look forward to your next update.
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