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Reviews for Lost

By : BiNeko
  • From ANON - sesshy lover on December 10, 2005
    i love this story!
    i read it some time ago but can't stop
    u must keep writing
    please!!!
    (puppy dog eyes)
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 15, 2005
    wow that was great!!! keep up the good work. the chapter was a bit long but it was really good. a few weak points though.
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  • From silverlips on November 12, 2005
    You have a pretty good beginning. I can picture most everything in my mind and your descriptors though weak in some areas were, for the most part, effective. I'd suggest working a little more on character development and setting the scene. You have a good grasp on the theme and it was a very well-written chapter. Hoping you update soon. EK!
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