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Reviews for Broken Sword

By : AlterAlchemist
  • From ANON - monkeygirl on November 21, 2005
    mmmm... Sesshoumaru is so wimpy cool.
    can't wait til the next chapter
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  • From on November 19, 2005
    Hmm, I think it's going way to fast. You should slow down and do more disctiptions. Sounds kinda like someone just telling me this in shorter terms. I think you should try to discribe what happened and everything... but other wise it could get a lil better. I like it, but I feel as though it could be better.
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  • From ANON - Kiara on November 18, 2005
    Ok, I just read chapter 3 and 4 and loved them. The second part of chapter 4 was really funny! Chapter 3 was really sad but Inuyasha's reaction aften the discovery was sweet, I loved how you described his blood thirty reaction. However, could you please make the chapters longer, they are so short but the plot is great nonetheless. And please update soon and often. I am dieing to read the next chapters!
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  • From ANON - (^_^) on November 16, 2005
    I AB-SO-LU-TE-LY LOVE your fic!!! PLZ update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 16, 2005
    lol! ..."Oh."... haha, great chapter! yey for yaoi!
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  • From ANON - PrincessSesshyMaru on November 16, 2005
    OMG! This is so kewl. I mean aside from Sesshomaru being raped *sniff*. Actually I like it and its dramtic. Update soon PLEASE!?!
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  • From ANON - Psycho Demon-Witch on November 14, 2005
    aww, its so sad! Irs good though. please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Polka Dot on November 13, 2005
    Well I have a lot of questions, I hope you do more on teh back story.
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  • From ANON - Princess Sin on November 13, 2005
    that was a great story. i hope you have more on the way
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  • From ANON - Kiara on November 13, 2005
    Interesting beginning but you need to give more background as to how they ended up in the position they are in now, like what happened to cause Sesshpumaru's down fall. I found the idea of Inuyasha being a successful business man appealing, I bet you have interesting and unique ideas. So, please continue and update often!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 12, 2005
    *squeals* I've been looking for a fanfic like this! (Poor Sesshy sama tho ;.;) Please update soon!
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