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  • From ANON - Rawben on November 21, 2005
    lol! that was great! i liked 5! but #4 was sad :(
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  • From ANON - keesha on November 21, 2005
    lol number 5 is just great! more please!
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  • From ANON - Exxagerated Mee on November 20, 2005
    my favorite song ever by MCR is demoliotn lovers and when I read that story I was like "yeah!"
    I especially love the threesome with Miroku Inuyasha and Kagome
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  • From ANON - karla on November 20, 2005
    your story is pretty cool! i always like just a bunch of one shots crammed together, so much fun!!!
    like a basket of lemons...
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  • From drake220 on November 19, 2005
    that was so sweet!! What a nice way to explore your emotional writing barriers! Just lovely! I have tears in my eyes, it was just a perfect sess/kagura. also, nice touch with him being dead and not her. (though it would be interesting to see her give him an incorporal blowjob or something...hehe.) I really liked it. I thought it was the best written chapter you've done so far.
    on a different note:
    library sex!!!!! YEAH!!!!!
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  • From drake220 on November 17, 2005
    weee!!!!!!!!!!!!! sexyness!!! Truthfully, I was hoping for a little more degredation (::winces:: my fav scene between these two was when miroku was on his hands and knees and Sango sat on his back, brushing her hair adn smacking him with a brush whenever he made a move. Did I mention she was naked and masturating on top of him? jeeeshh....i'm kind of a perv)
    however, this was a lighter but just as sexy version! I did love it, thank you so much! there's too much love on this site, not enough dom/sub! j/k...sort of.
    What else could I suggest.....? I would LOVE for Inu to take a shy and sweet kag up against a wall. perhaps an AU version with a bad boy inu adn good girl kag? Those are always fun and smutty. Oh! maybe a library? Library sex is fun!
    update soon!
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  • From ANON - deep serenity on November 17, 2005
    very good!
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  • From ANON - sendosha on November 17, 2005
    Great chapter, please continue!

    To Goddess of Zelda:

    Actually Kagomes eyes are blue or blue-grey. She might have brown eyes in the Anime but Rumiko Takahashi has created her with blue eyes in the Manga. And the Manga was naturally created before the show. Why that is I havenīt figured it out yet, but I prefer the real Kagome from the Manga with blue eyes. I even think that Takahashi-san has made that intentionally, itīs the greatest difference to Kikyou, īcause she has brown eyes in the Manga. Itīs a pity they have changed it for the Anime.
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  • From ANON - jodibetz on November 17, 2005
    Wow! That was sooo hot. More?
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  • From ANON - drake220 on November 16, 2005
    well, hello mistress of the kinky! Sheesh! Little kag giving head while getting f***ed. Nicely done. Can we have a good ol' Miroku getting dominated by Sango? Or perhaps a kagura and sess?
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 16, 2005
    niiice. kinda bummed that its' just a oneshot!
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  • From ANON - Rawben on November 16, 2005
    lol! i love it! haha! i knew it was kagome, but i didnt know it was sess! niice! ;)
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  • From ANON - sesshys_jaded_samuri on November 16, 2005
    Wow...that was really good....ranks right up there with a few from Rinsteternalsoul and SilentDeath....Keep up the good work, and I hope to see more like this from you in the future.
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