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Reviews for Dreams in the Mist

By : Tigerness
  • From ANON - Anon on November 23, 2005
    You have serious grammar and spelling issues. You don't know when to make a new paragraph. Two people should never talk in the same paragraph. You make yours way too long to be easy to read. Look at a paperback novel by your favorite writer and see how the paragraphs are broken up. They are usually short.

    Fix your problems and maybe I will read your story, even though you seem to be underage.
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  • From ANON - fan of kagome on November 20, 2005
    love it! love it! love it!
    srry i didn't review the first chap i was at Washington D.C.
    and my laptop didn't work at all :(

    TTFN;
    megan
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  • From ANON - peacemaker on November 18, 2005
    Good start so far and I hope that you continue with it. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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  • From ANON - inugirl2003 on November 17, 2005
    Ok, I'm intregued keep going :)
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