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Reviews for Affliction

By : ChibiPorunga
  • From ANON - Chibi-Porunga on December 30, 2005
    Thanks for the compliment, Snowfall! It's a great feeling knowing that someone is really enjoying this story. Ah, the questions!! I'm not revealing anything...yet. ^.^
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on December 30, 2005
    I read the last three chapters again and...Ach! I am so confused! How can Inuyasha just fall into Sesshoumaru like that? I want to just knock him upside the head. Has he no fear? Sure, Sesshoumaru is humbling himself, sort of. LOL But how long will that last? How long before he sticks his nose in the air and tells Inuyasha to change a decision or leave? Sorry, I guess I'm really worked up about it. Which means...you're a good author!

    Mmm, I bet Sesshoumaru looks like hell after being sick for so long. Are you going to keep Inuyasha in the dark about that?

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on December 30, 2005
    Sesshoumaru getting down on his knees! But then, why should Inuyasha trust Sesshoumaru? He had been rejected because he had wanted to pursue his dream. What other decisions that Inuyasha makes will cause him to be rejected again? Will Sesshoumaru use their love to control Inuyasha? And if that happens, will he be able to stay away from the drugs? Inuyasha must answer the questions of whether or not he wants to be obediant should Sesshoumaru give him ultimatums. How much of his freedom of self is he willing to give up to have the one he loves? It's not so easy. I'm scared for Inuyasha. Can you tell? Can Sesshoumaru accept Inuyasha as he is, or for what he wants to be and do? Is he accepting him now only because Inuyasha has chosen a different career? So many doubts.

    Can't wait til the next chappie!

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - Lady Aqualyne on December 27, 2005
    Man... the ups and downs of those two... and then the cliffy. Its nice to see Inu trying to get better and the new job was definately a shocker. I was surprised to see that Sessy had found him already, but that makes it more interesting. I can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From ANON - Chibi-Porunga on December 26, 2005
    I've been busy with the holidays, so sorry for not updating any sooner; I don't usually begin anything new until I get another piece of the puzzle I can visualize in my head first and it depends what has inspired me that sometimes determines where the plot decides what direction to take - since I was watching the music video for "Wings Of A Butterfly", for some reason the lead singer reminded me of what Inu would look like if he was the lead singer of a punk band...O.o, weird I know, LoL! Thank you to everyone who has review and is anxious to see what perils I toss Inu and Sesshie into next. To put to rest any fears, I do plan on finishing this, so please don't worry about me ever abandoning this piece ^.^

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  • From ANON - Snowfall on December 26, 2005
    So glad that you took the time to update even though you must be very busy. You describe Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's emotions and actions in such detail that it is almost like watching a movie. Sesshoumaru becoming so ill is quite an unexpected development and I wonder what exactly is in the chest? I can't wait to see what you have planned for the two. This is very angsty. I love it.

    And your welcome for the ideas. If you ever have problems and want my help in advancing the plot, email me so that we don't give it away to the readers. It looks like you already have some plans. Can't wait to see what they are.

    Keep up the good work and don't worry about getting out another chapter. It is the holidays after all.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Fox on December 25, 2005
    O.O I pary to the gods that the update will come soon. This fanfiction is just to good not to finish
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  • From ANON - Chibi-Porunga on December 21, 2005
    Thanks Snowfall for the ideas ^.^ It helped me alot! And, Jade, I do plan on continuing it - it's just a bit harder now trying to update it a smuch as I'd like since I work two jobs. But hey...I'm not giving up. I'm actually enjoying writing this one and plan on finishing it ^.^ I know, I know...I have typose and such here and there; I've just gotten too lazy to go back and fix them >.>
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  • From ANON - Jade on December 21, 2005
    I stumbled accross this story and decided to read it for the mere fact that it mentioned one of my favourite bands (The Cruxshadows). And I have to say, I fell in love with it. The chapters are short, and there are a few grammar errors, but the amazing discription more than makes up for it. I just wanted to ask, do you plan to continue this story? It's a wonderful story, and I think it would be a shame if it was abandoned.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on December 17, 2005
    You are doing an excellent job, although there are a couple of words used incorrectly. I typically ignore typos unless there is a massive amount. Yours are far and few between. You are probably just unhappy with the last chapter because you didn't take it further. You're right. Inuyasha needs some alone time to regroup.

    Here is an idea if your running into plot problems. Perhaps he should drop out of sight for awhile. Screw contracts. He should get a wad of cash and lose himself on an island while he figures out what he wants to do, what he wants to be. Obviously, some people are a bad influence and his thoughts of Sesshoumaru only torture him. Maybe he could take on a whole new identity; disguise himself and forget who he was and where he came from. A forced amnesia or delusion. If I were him, I would resent everyone right now and need to be away from them. How to do it is the trick.

    Hope this helped, but if not, oh well.

    I enjoy this story and hope that you continue to write.

    Snowfall


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  • From ANON - I Love Twins! on December 12, 2005
    Oh this, is such an awsome fic! I was a bit sceptical when I read the summary about Inuyasha being a lead singer, but you make it work!

    ^_^^_^! (I Love Twins!)
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  • From ANON - Cresent angel on December 12, 2005
    that was sad poor inu ;_; lovely by the way
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  • From ANON - Polka Dot on December 07, 2005
    Ahh the tension, poor Inu, he's a mess.
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  • From ANON - storyfreak on December 06, 2005
    Another great chapter!!
    Still hope that they can work
    things out.
    please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on November 21, 2005
    Excellent read. I enjoy Sesshoumaru's torture. Finally, an emotional Sesshoumaru.

    Snowfall
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