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Reviews for Affliction

By : ChibiPorunga
  • From kikanyhikaru on September 26, 2011
    sooooooooo when are so going to finish this story??
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 02, 2007
    Great! Glad to see you are going to finish this. ^-^
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on June 29, 2006
    If you need help getting the next chappie going, I make a good sounding board and have helped several authors get over a slump. Email me if you would like my help.

    Snow
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  • From on June 18, 2006
    Well, nice lemon. I believe that you could possibly take into the next chapter.
    You may want to head into the couple gaining each other's trust. How can they
    manage that after everything that they have been through? Is Inuyasha going
    to remain being a teacher? How is Sesshoumaru going to treat him now? What
    are the hurdles that they will need to overcome? Should Inuyasha severe all
    ties with his former friends? They could become a real problem. I don't know
    that Inuyasha was so much addicted to drugs as drowning his sorrows. Those
    friends are trouble waiting to happen. I think that Sesshoumaru should have
    an unpleasant run in with them and Inuyasha should insist that Sesshoumaru
    allow him to deal with it. It would be an opportunity for Inu to show his loyalty
    to Sesshoumaru. However, Sesshoumaru still needs to prove himself to Inu.
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  • From ANON - Lady Aqualyne on January 29, 2006
    Take your time. Don't let it overwhelm you. I often feel that way when I work on a story... god knows my last one Shadow Lover drove me insane when it came to many of the chapters. I was never satisfied... and now its happening again with another story. Take your time is the biggest advice I can give you, the chapter will come to you in time... don't force it or it'll only drive you insane. I'll definately be around whenever you update.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on January 28, 2006
    I guess what we need to see in the next chapter is if Inuyasha is going to continue to be a teacher now that he has been found or if he will be required to live up to his contract obligations and how both he and Sesshoumaru will deal with it. We need to see if the two plan to continue living together or apart while just seeing each other. Will they argue over that point? Would it be a good idea for Inuyasha to give up his independence in favor of pleasing Sesshoumaru? Just how dependent on each other are they willing to be? That could be a bone of contention. Well, that's something to think about.

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on January 10, 2006
    Ooooh, lemony, lemony goodness. Loved the toe sucking!

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on January 07, 2006
    Oh, sorry. Didn't see your post to the review board. Kewlies! Inuyasha resisted! I think. Okies. Back to anxiously awaiting next chappie! I know that I sound like a kid, but I actually have two adult children of my own. So, no worries.

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on January 07, 2006
    WooHoo! That was a close one. Whew! So, he didn't screw up? Or is he lying? I'm confused now. But I'm glad that Sess took him back. So wonderful. Great chapter!

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - Chibi-Porunga on January 05, 2006
    Now, now. I never said whether Inuyasha did or didn't gorge himself on the drugs. You'll just have to wait until the next chapter to find out what happened :p
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on January 05, 2006
    Nooooooooo! Inu! How could you!? OMG! How will Sesshoumaru react? Will he go the route of tough love and break Inuyasha's fragile trust in him, or will he forgive him this once? Questions, questions. I hope Sesshoumaru gives Kouga and Miroku a sound beating. Not that it would help. Oh well.

    Can't wait for the next chappie!


    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on January 02, 2006
    *sniffle* That was so sweet. I'm glad that it wasn't ruined so quickly. Whew! Had me going there for a minute. Again, another excellent chappie.

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - K-ster. on January 01, 2006
    Fun for the whole family... Well, maybe not. I loved it, however. ^.^
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  • From ChibiPorunga on January 01, 2006
    I try to make the chapters longer, but sometimes there just has a stopping point for me and I wouldn't want to ramble...cause when I ramble, I tend to go wayward, LoL. Yeah, there will be another chapter and another and another. I don't see an ending to this anytime soon ^.^
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on January 01, 2006
    I must have been out of it when I read chappie 13. That really was bittersweet. Sesshoumaru on his knees and practically weeping, or at least it seemed that way, was very touching. And what Inuyasha said to him was so appropriate, but so harsh at the same time. Well, done. I would have liked to have seen the parting at the school, whether or not there had been uncertainty at seeing each other again, or when and if, and how they ended up together at the chateau. I would definitely have no problem waiting longer for chapters or the end of the story in order to see more detail. It's as though something is missing because parts are being fast forwarded. I hope you haven't grown bored with the story. I'll definitely be reading it again. It's wonderful. As always, I look forward to the next chappie. Um...there is one, right?

    Snowfall
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