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Reviews for Broken Promises, Shattered Dreams

By : MistyRain
  • From ANON - mhall on December 07, 2005
    GREAT CHAPTER
    UPDATE SOON
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  • From ANON - silence1111 on December 07, 2005
    you have a good story no one should be saying anything bad about it. It's your stroy so you write it the way you want to write
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  • From ANON - MysticAngel77 on December 07, 2005
    Personally, I believe we humans define our happiness through the lack of pain and misery - so how the hell can we believe that fanfiction would be any different? Life is painful, end of story. People that dont believe that are naive to the point of idiocy and should be shot on sight, or at least stoned for annoying the rest of us realists. I, and obviously many others, believe your stories are right on the mark and spectacularly beautiful as you take characters on BELIEVABLE life journeys. The cherry and whip cream on the top of this mile high dessert is the part of your stories where all the pain turns out as a good thing - makes them stronger, more bonded, and the LOVE is easier to believe besides "Inuyasha slept with Kikyo, you saved me therefore I love you " type crap that we see out there all the time. Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for writing. And PLEASE continue to do so. Ignore the die hard optimists out there that dont realize that they are just inexperienced. Good job ladies, we love you!
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  • From ANON - TINA on December 07, 2005
    I THINK YOUR STORY IS COMING ALONG GREAT , BUT I WISH KOGAME HAD MORE OF A BACKBONE .
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  • From ANON - sendosha on December 07, 2005
    Ryukotsusei, your AN was just hilarious "Kagome sees Inu with Kikyou and runs into a male and sleeps with him". Mostly with Sesshoumaru. You´re absolutely right, there are so many fics with this plot it´s unbelievable. And I don´t understand why. YuYu Hakusho and Inuyasha are partly dark series, more so YYH. How many people died in the sengoku jidai (samurai´s who lost their heads, the slaughtered taijiya´s or the wolf tribe).
    Hiei dosen´t have a reason to be a "happy" person and here I´m referring to the episodes 98-100. As I first saw them Hiei became my favourite character and if someone would made him less hostile, dark or aggressive it wouldn´t seem right. You and BrokenSouledPoetess described his and Yusukes real charakter really good and I thank you both for this great fic.

    I´m curious what Mukuro had planned to Kagome, but I think Hiei won´t like it.
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  • From ANON - midnighttimberwolf on December 07, 2005
    Damn that was an excellent chapter though evil at the end..... I can imagine what she wants to do, only if Kagome agrees to it of course. If not I'm sure there would be one hell of a cat fight. Anyways update soon....
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  • From ANON - Takhisiss on December 07, 2005
    I suppose it was with some feelings of disquiet and disgust that I read that last review posted by Ogen. You don't like the story, that's fine. Don't read it then. I did a search for your work and couldn't find any. What gives? I'd love the opportunity to find out what your version of quality work is. After I read some of your work, then I will consider whether your opinion is one I should give a tinkers damn about or not. Until I see your work tho, I fail to see where you have the right to be so negative about others work. Go find some of the others work that paints happy faces. And let those of us who enjoy Ryus and brokens work continue to do so. I guess I am what you called one of their dubious audience but I am proud of it.
    Ryu, no problem with the story interruption. This needed to be addressed. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Saveyoursoul on December 07, 2005
    Your plot line is different. And what Og up there is preaching shows how stupid they are. Us readers do want to be shocked and left on the edge of our seats. I'm sure he/she prolly likes to read the fics with the same ol' used out plotline where the gang is in highschool. Come on how many times hasn't THAT been used. There is so many of them and most have the same plot where Inuyasha is the badboy and Kagome is the little preppy girl. This story is original and different, your flame was a waste of space. I think with all the reviews it has you'd have stopped before opening your mouth. It is an interesting story, that hasn't been done before. Go back to your other fics, I'm sure the school bell is about to ring.

    For the author keep up the good work, can't wait for another chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Ogen on December 07, 2005
    This is as far as I can make it with what you obvious think is interesting material. I really don't know where this trend started, but your plot is weak at best and relies entirely on "shock-factor" material and over-dramatic, ineffective "tragedy" moments that are completely unbelievable. The characterization doesn't read as an echo of the characters in another situation but what you think will garner to most gasps and cries from your dubious audience. I was particularly unimpressed with the spontaneous addition of supposed friends slipping date-rape drugs into drinks because they thought your Kagome was in a bad relationship. I realize you plan to use it as a major plot point, but that doesn't change that it was in both poor taste and poor execution. These are tired and painful machinations for moving a story forward, and if you have to use them to make your work interesting, it doesn't say much for you as a writer.
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  • From ANON - kougalover123 on December 07, 2005
    great chapters I wonder what she is going to do to Kagome. please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - MysticAngel77 on December 07, 2005
    Cant wait to see what you've got up your sleeve with the two ladies! Keep it comin'!
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  • From ANON - Diane on December 07, 2005
    I really like this fic & can't wait to see what happens next & if this will be an eventual threesome, which I would love. Update soon, please.
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  • From ANON - Cyntinell on December 06, 2005
    Still love the story even if aff tried to erase proof of it. look forward to the next chapter please update quickly
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  • From ANON - Sayuri-chan on December 06, 2005
    ...Mukuro's going to do something that Hiei's NOT going to appreciate, I can just feel it, but I wonder how Kagome will take talking to her? I'm sure she will still show her true self to the demon onna, and hopefully, both will get some good insight on the other. Well, update soon!
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  • From ANON - badkitty on December 06, 2005
    Good chappie, now that Hiei and Kagome are in Makai thingss are going to get even more interesting. I can't wait for this talk Murkuro has in store for Kagome. I hope she's a bitch like usual and Kagome purifies her ass, I can hope right? It sucks that all your chapters were deleted, I expected something bad had happend when I had to read yesterday's chapter on MM. Anyway the whole story is awesome, you two are the best inu yuyu crossover writers around. Keep up the good work! >^..^
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