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Reviews for Broken Promises, Shattered Dreams

By : MistyRain
  • From kimisan on December 06, 2005
    What no lemon. You can't tell me Hiei didn't want to throw her on that bed and plug her good. Ever heard of make-up sex, its the best. Please update soon *Hands you Aoshi cookies*
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  • From kimisan on December 06, 2005
    That was so sweet, its a tear jerker! Poor Yusuke is about to get his heart broke. Should have kept his pants zipped. Please update soon. *Hands you Aoshi cookies*
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  • From kimisan on December 06, 2005
    Hiei needs to step on it before Yusuke moves in. While the cat's away the mice will play. I say she dumps em both and grabs Kurama. *Drools* Keep up the good work! *Hands you Aoshi cookies*
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  • From kimisan on December 06, 2005
    Loved chapter 12, that fucker needs his ass kicked seriously. Feel so sorry for Kagome though. *Hands you Aoshi cookies*
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  • From ANON - azurephoenix on December 01, 2005
    OHHHHH!!!Clifee!!!!!!!!!!!Please Please update soon....please.....with sugar on top.
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  • From ANON - VB on November 30, 2005
    Yes!! You didn't forget to take Kanaye down as well. Just don't forget the other bitch Meiko or what ever her name is. In fact do me a favor and let Kurama and Hiei find out what Keiko said to Kagome and then put the Meiko bitch, Kanaye and Keiko in a room with Hiei, Kurama and Yusuke with no survallience from Koenma. The walls, ceiling and floor would be painted with blood.
    Anyway looking forward to Yusuke's interrogation.
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  • From ANON - badkitty on November 30, 2005
    Oh yeah, this confrontation is exactly what I've been waiting for. Kanaye is gonna get his ass handed to him. I feel bad for Keiko and Kagome, but I'm still on Kagomes side.
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  • From ANON - Sayuri-chan on November 30, 2005
    Oh yeah, paybacks are a real biyach, ne? He will pay most dearly for messing with Kagome. Hiei though, I'm not so sure that he'll be so happy that Yusuke is getting the revenge instead of him. Well, another excellent chapter! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - kougalover123 on November 30, 2005
    I hope Yusuke beats the crap out of Kanaye for his part in the drugs. i hope Hiei comes back soon. please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Kagehoshi on November 30, 2005
    I'm all excited for the next chapter, please update soon. I hope Yusuke really gives it to that guy. Do the people who put that drug in Kagome's drink know she was hospitalized because of it? I think some one should let them know, so they can suffer with the guilt.
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  • From ANON - cyntinell on November 30, 2005
    I really enjoy this story. I am almost caught up but you update to quickly for my slow reading lol I love the way it is so realistic like it could really happen. The dialog is perfect can't wait to read more
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  • From ANON - Vivian on November 30, 2005
    Awesome chapter. I think you are doing a wonderful job with Keiko's reaction. You have made her nicer than I would have been to be honest. I wouldn't ask questions, he'd be meeting my tire iron of mercy real quick like. Keep up the wonderful job, I can't wait to see what happens. *hands you Aoshi cookies*
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  • From ANON - midnighttimberwolf on November 30, 2005
    Well done loved the new chapters you both have great stories out there and I hope you update all of them.... I had hoped that Kagome wouldn't lose the baby but all in all it was for the best at least have a fresh start knowing that she was loved in return. Again well done I approve this and other that are posted thee best thus far.
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  • From ANON - sendosha on November 30, 2005
    Yes! There is still hope for Kagome and Hiei! Thank you so much!
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  • From ANON - Mel on November 30, 2005
    All I can say is...Wow! I'm really liking this story. It's very well thought out, and it has a realistic story line.
    Please keep writing...just stop with the cliffhangers! Unless you update really fast!
    Mel
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