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Reviews for Broken Promises, Shattered Dreams

By : MistyRain
  • From ANON - kougalover123 on November 28, 2005
    I wonder if the guys are going to read what Kagome wrote in her diary, and how they will react to it. please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Vivian on November 28, 2005
    I want more, I think you should make it a threesome. Yusuke and Hiei are hot together, very much so. I clicked on the review button so I expect another chapter soon. Don't disappointment me! Loves ya! *hands you Aoshi cookies and a glass of milk*
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  • From ANON - azurephoenix on November 28, 2005
    OHHHHH...that was just evil...another clifee..AHHHHHHH...please update soon.
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  • From ANON - azurephoenix on November 28, 2005
    OHHHHH...that was just evil...another clifee..AHHHHHHH...please update soon.
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  • From ANON - sendosha on November 28, 2005
    Gods, if Hiei doesn�t move he will lose her forever and not because of the pills. I don�t want her to get with Yusuke *pout*
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  • From ANON - Takhisiss on November 28, 2005
    Argh, another cliff hanger. I love it but it also drives me nuts. LOL. Very good chapter, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Diane on November 28, 2005
    You gals seem to be enjoying the cliffies, I'm really enjoying this & can hardly wait for the next chapter, especially since I really want to know what happens next.
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  • From ANON - badkitty on November 28, 2005
    Wow, what a chapter. Well I firgured that it would have been much more physical between Keiko and Yusuke. I thought she would at least smack him around a bit. I knew that they wouldnt stay together, it just didn't feel right from the beginning. I feel bad for kagome, she is so sad. They way you guys write it is so on. The way the she plays tug of war with hewr mind trying to talk herself into suicide. The way that she doesn't eat and when she does she feels sick. The way that all she wants to do is stare or lay around remembering the good times and wanting them back. I feel her depresion, I feel sad. You did a really good job on that last chapter. I hope she's ok. Hiei is such an asshole, he should be by her side. maybe she would be better off with Yusuke or even Kurama. Can't wait for the next round! >^..^
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  • From ANON - bluemoon_175 on November 27, 2005
    Your story is really good keep the updates commin. I say Kagome should live, and get patched things up with Hiei.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 27, 2005
    nooo please please update quick it almost made me cry for it to end in a cliff hanger, but this is one of ya'lls best storys yet.
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  • From ANON - Wind on November 27, 2005
    What is it with the cliffies? Are you both trying to make us rip our hair out? If so you're succeeding in your task! You know the wait is going to kill me right? RIGHT? I hope you plan on updating soon or I shall send my army of sporks after you! Seriously though, good chapter (evil cliffie!) Update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - kougalover123 on November 27, 2005
    great chapter please update again soon i want to know what happens.
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  • From purp1ebabe on November 27, 2005
    oh that was sad kagome trying to kill herself hmm.... i wonder......
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  • From ANON - Vivian (NSI) on November 27, 2005
    Another awesome chapter! Can't believe Hiei is just leaving her alone, thats a man for you. I see you are putting that borrowed blender to great use and I love it. Please update soon. *hands you aoshi cookies* love you girl
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  • From ANON - sendosha on November 27, 2005
    Great chapter and I love dark and angsty fics so please continue. And to be honest both series have many scenes where it�s really dark and angsty. It�s not that they just play "truth and dare" in the sengoku jidai or in Makai, they fight for their lifes, against their enemies and against their own dark sides.
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