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Reviews for Breathless

By : Animefangirl81
  • From ANON - the cridics on December 18, 2005
    continue withyour storie
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  • From Mmoirai on December 18, 2005
    Well, I really like this. So far you are developing your characters very well. I can't wait to see where you're going with this. One little mistake I thought I'd mention though,...after the guys were finished practicing their composition, Miroku set down his "violin." I thought he played the cello?
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on December 18, 2005
    Moving along nicely! Damn, Miro is
    so cold...but something tells me that
    Kikyou deserves it. Looking fwd to
    the next update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2005
    This is and intersting story. I think I saw it on a different sight, but it was with Inuyasha as a PIANO student, not violin. I'm not saying you stole the story or anything (I don't even know who wrote the other one, if it was you or someone else entirely) but I wanted to point out the difference.

    Inuyasha just doesn't seem the type to have the sort of patience to play ANY sort of instrument, let alone one with strings.

    I also wanted to know-- is Inuyasha supposed to be human or half-demon in this? Cause you said he has silver hair and walks around bare-foot, but you never mention if he was half-demon or not.
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  • From SultryRayn on November 28, 2005
    I really like your story! Im curious as to what happened between Inuyasha and Kikyo, I hope that you will update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Egyptian Kiss (not logged in) on November 26, 2005
    Hey that was a great chapter. I liked the added mystery factor. Keep up the good work. Update soon. EK!
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  • From ANON - inuyashasmate on November 24, 2005
    OMG i love it so far. really cute at the end when inuyasha scrared really cut e how they meet.lol. well update A.S.A.P.
    thanks,
    Inuyashas Mate
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  • From ANON - Aleke on November 24, 2005
    THIS STORY IS FREAKING AMAZING! Oh and a very happy turkey day to you as well! Anywho, please continue with this story, I absolutly adore it and I'm only two chapters in....PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - chanda on November 24, 2005
    Yeah you updated, what a great start keep up the great writing...
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  • From ANON - Egyptian Kiss(not logged in) on November 24, 2005
    Hey that was really good. I would have loved it to be longer, going into the date and everything, but it is Thanksgiving. Well I hope that you update soon. You did a great job. Inuyasha being nice, now that was a bit of a twist. I personally like it when he is all arrogant and rude, then Kagome changes him. It's fun to see those kinds of fics evolve. Again you did a good job. I hope that you update soon. Have a happy turkey day. EK!
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  • From ANON - lithium88 on November 24, 2005
    Great first chapter!! I don't think i've read a storyline such as this one before, but I'm glad your story will be the first! ^_^ Not sure here you're gonna take this story or how you'll develop the characters, but that's the beauty of it! I'll keep reading if you keep Updating!! Until your next chappy, take care!
    lith*
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  • From ANON - angelevie - not signed in on November 24, 2005
    I like the consept, and the begining is really well done. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Egyptian Kiss (not logged in) on November 24, 2005
    Hey not a bad start. Not much to go on, but I suppose it's an okay start. The emotions were real enough, I like it. I hope that you update soon. The description promises for a good read. EK!
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  • From ANON - chanda on November 24, 2005
    Uggg that was short, oh please update soon maybe after turkey day.. that would be great..LOl Oh and dont forget your disclaimer.


    Happy Holidays
    Chanda
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