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By : sess88
  • From ANON - Ren on November 25, 2005
    hee hee hee....I like the story...but it's sooo short. T.T the cliffy was a killer as well...hope you'll update again sometime soon!! :D Tee hee hee...it's great, continue it soon please!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on November 25, 2005
    Well let's see how you do with the next chapter....I'll write a better review then...
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 25, 2005
    Okay, I didn't pay attention earlier. Anyways, you just have to capitalize your characters' names and maybe go through spell check.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 25, 2005
    Well you have a good start, but you had a couple typos and some grammar errors. Also, you forgot to capitalize Rin's name (I think it was only once though ^^) Other than that, good job!
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