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By : SilverPhoenix21
  • From ShouraiChan on January 11, 2009
    AND you're a Final Fantasy X-2 fan?!?!? *SQUEALS!!!!!* You ROCK SO HARD!!!!!! lol, just a little author admiration! Great job!
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  • From ShouraiChan on January 11, 2009
    Omg...where has this story been my entire life?!?!?!? It's amazing and has me hooked form Chapter 1!!!! Keep up the awesome job!!!!
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  • From Akako on July 22, 2007
    This story has really caught my interest and is well written. I like the mysteriousness about what happened to Kagome in the past, and the way Sesshoumaru is so mischevious when it comes to Rin. I've enjoyed what I've read so far, and I hope that there will be more chapters to come!
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  • From darkmind on June 21, 2007
    WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED... PLEASEEEE.. I CANT WAIT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN... !!!
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  • From ANON - christina on January 10, 2007
    Plxz update soon but why are there people after kagome?
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  • From ANON - A on January 03, 2007
    Cant wait for the next chap
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  • From ANON - Ali on December 22, 2006
    Its REALLY good i cant wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 23, 2006
    Wow i can,t wait to read the next chapters. up date soon! love ya! Bye!!
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  • From ANON - Tammy Lashbrooks on October 05, 2006
    This story is very good and very well written!! I am enjoying it very much!! Hmmmmm I wonder what happened in Kagome's past!! I hope the update is soon!!
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  • From ANON - Weyrdkat on September 24, 2006
    Hey Ash,

    I don't know if I reviewed the first time I read your story or not, but I'm reviewing now anyway.

    You have a really good plot line and enough premise to keep it interesting. Your grammar and spelling is decent too, even though a beta reader or a close word check would not be remise. ..they aren't misspelled, some words are just left out and some are the wrong word. It's not enough to turn away a reader looking for good fiction though. I know, I've closed several windows before finishing the first chapter if it wasn't well written.

    Keep up the good work, and I look forward to your next chapter!

    Kat
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  • From ANON - Precious on September 22, 2006
    Well I must say you have a nice story here. There are a few things that I am concerned about though. One is you really do need a beta. I know how dull it is re-reading your story for errors but it is needed. The one that stuck out the most is you seem to really hate the word "their". You constantly use "there" instead. Also Koga's "running mates" are Ginta and Hakaku. You did ask for the correct spelling on them, yes?

    I like the what you are doing with the storyline. How no one knew that they knew each other but were indeed connected because that happens in real life. But I do have a problem with the characters' profiles. All the girls seem to be more or less the same. They are all overly fiesty. Don't get me wrong I love that but ALL of them? What is the thing that makes them different? That makes them special? The guys are not as bad off but maybe you could take a closer look into making them more...real. I will ask why you make Rin say such things about Sesshomaru if you plan to put them together? She doesn't have to be bubbly nice to him but it is strange that she seems to never have anything nice to say about him. The eyebrow thing is funny though...

    Their out look on things is a bit high schoolish. For example, they all think they need to throw their firends together. All of them? A few perhaps thinking it and then suggesting it I could believe but for everyone to just out right think it? And I don't really get the whole "everyone protect Kagome after she stalks off" like she is completely helpless. I understand something bad happened to her that you will explain later, I just hope it is big enough to make her friend's reaction plausible.

    I like the way you have set up Inuyasha and Sesshomaru's dad. He seems to fit his role perfectly. And Kagome complaining to him about his own son is just too much! I can't wait to see how this will turn out. A girl he almost considers a daughter to him about to date his son. What does he do when they get into a fight? Who does he "side" with? Or does he stay neutral? Anyway my only other complaint is how all the characters seem to know what's going on. They are a little to all-knowing. They are able to always correctly guess something.

    For right now none of the things bother me enough to stop me from reading but these things are keeping your story form being a great story rather than just a good one. I know it seems like I'm being a pain but I am honestly just trying to give you a real review so that you can make your story better.

    Precious (I'm a member), babygurl_4th@yahoo
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2006
    Whe is the the next chapter coming out!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - InuGoddess715 on September 14, 2006
    I REALLY like this story. It's funny and sexy, but still has a PLOT. I definitely look forward to reading more of it. Great job.
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  • From Rebeldedm on September 14, 2006
    This story me like lol keep it up so far your doing great though you do need a beta to help you do italics to some words indents to paragraphs you get the point put other than that it is very great in other words your rating for me is kick ass # 5 lol.
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  • From ANON - young kagome on September 12, 2006
    Yes! i really liked dis story! Plz update soon
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