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By : MomentieGoddess
  • From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2005
    lovely ^^
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  • From ANON - CallistaSky on November 26, 2005
    Oh, I like the whole sleep spell thing. That's new. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Kiara on November 26, 2005
    I think your story is fairly good. You can make it better by making the plot more complex. The reason you gave as to why Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru are to be together, according to their father, is over used. So, you might want to find an alternative reasoning. Also, if you can adapt more of Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's real characters from the anime and manga into the story, it will make the story more appealing and unique. Very few can actually do it properly and it definitely can enhance the story. I am only trying to give you constructive feedback because you are rewriting your story and want to improve it. So, use the ideas if you like them. I don’t mind if you don’t like them or use them. So, good luck and bye!
    p.s. I also read the first version and made comments on points that were carried from the previous version and still have spaces for improvement.
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  • From ANON - glaze on November 26, 2005
    Come on Isis we need more chap lol but great story non the less .....
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