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Reviews for Under the Cover of Snow

By : MopsyLemon
  • From ANON - Vena on October 01, 2006
    Come on, out with the juicy details. All the stories you've started seem to be paused on the brink of naughtiness. Pleeeeeeease continue.

    Vena
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  • From ANON - Sayvorie on September 05, 2006
    Oh my.... Now the scene when Inuyasha wakes up is one I'd /really/ like to read
    ;D
    I'm so addicted to naked Inuyasha.... But really now, who isn't?
    ;)
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  • From ANON - chi chi717 on September 04, 2006
    wow loved it =D i hope there is a lemon this is going somewhere soon i hope kagome is so sweet to inuyasha i love this story XD ^^
    plz plz plz up date soon i will be waiting ^^ kisskiss

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  • From ANON - Kagome on September 04, 2006
    OMG No INUYASHA!!!!!! i hope he's alright i hope he will make it, an i hope there is a lemon betwen them i hope you update soon i cant wait to see wut you come up with next, i hope inuyasha will be ok I love him too much to see him die. but graet story thou i loved it, plz up date soon.
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  • From ANON - Sam on September 04, 2006
    Kagome .. you dirty dirty girl :)
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  • From ANON - Sam on August 18, 2006
    Why is Inuyasha so damaged??? Where are they in their relationship??
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 17, 2006
    When Kagome's purifying arrows hit a demon, the demon turns to ash. If it is a really strong demon, like Naraku, then at least part of it turns to ash, but some of it may be left.

    Why is the demon Kagome just shot still walking around? If she hit it with two arrows (in the back and in the shoulder), he'd at least be missing an entire arm and part of his middle. Sango cut off one of the arms too, so the demon should be almost dead by now.

    I know he has a jewel shard, which would allow him to regenerate part of himself, but it takes a while to regenerate. Mistress Centipede had the whole jewel and it was taking her pretty long to regenerate, like at least 30 minutes. They had time to find the jewel before she could pull herself back together.

    The demon still walking around in your story -- after being hit with two purifying arrows and by Sango's weapon -- doesn't make sense.


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  • From ANON - XxSangoxX *not signed in* on August 17, 2006
    wow, intense.. you have a few spelling errors.. but this is turning up to be a pretty good start..

    you should however make your chappies a little longer and such... i was just starting to get into it and then POOF lol

    continue soon kay?
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  • From ANON - rin.dee on January 30, 2006
    oo please please PLEASE continue!
    but if you could do all of us [readers] a favor and break down your story into paragraphs.
    it would help with the reading immensely! ^_^
    thanks! and great job!
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  • From ANON - InuyashaDreamGirl on November 29, 2005
    Hey this is good dont let INuyasha die please... i'll keep reading if you'll keep updateing

    so update,
    InuyashaDreamGirl
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  • From ANON - chanda on November 29, 2005
    Great start, evil cliffy update soon.
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  • From ANON - pat on November 29, 2005
    cool very cool plz contine i am really interested in this very realistic and the plot line is great plz cont
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