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By : Avarwen
  • From ANON - jem89 on June 30, 2006
    I love this story! It's wonderful and crazy. Please update soon :)
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  • From ANON - Sir Magus on June 30, 2006
    please tell me there will be more? i dnt think it would be fair if there wasnt i have to have more-no i need more this story is amazing it has truly become my favorite fanfic i have to find out wat happens to inuyasha. if u cant tell i luv ur stroy i hope u will continue to add chapters to it.
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  • From ANON - Angel no Yami on June 28, 2006
    Wow! this is written pretty well but for a few minor grammer issues that seem to go through every chapter. You might want to read them once more before you put them up.
    I like it though. You have written this very well, i lke it even though i am not a big AU fan, at all. Not even remotely.
    Keep it up. and if you have a mailing list for updates please put me on it. My e-mail is angelnoyami@hotmail.com
    Angel no Yami
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  • From ANON - Donne on June 27, 2006
    I'm sorry if it's not my place to say this, and I do realize that not only is this fiction but fiction about demons in ancient japan, so plausability is out the window already, but... with the level of emotional trauma and psychological scaring you've already put your main character thru, to be captured and victimized yet again, a psychological break with reality is inevitable, and in most cases even if the victim does eventually return from their catatonic state they are almost never completly functional again. Especially in regards to ever having a healthy emotional or sexual relationship. I only mention it because this fandom seems overly fond of the rapefic and I had applauded you for not overly trivializing how debilitating it can be to the victim, and how long term the consequences are when you had used it earlier in the story and I was just wondering how you were going to resolve the fact that if your main character is rescued it will at the very least be several years before he begins to heal, if ever. many do not, even with years of therapy ever become comfortable with intimacy again, after the level of abuse you've described. You mentioned in one of you Author's Notes that you noticed a lack of 'lemons' and wanted to included more but I can't see how it would be logical to do so unless they are more rapes. Or were you going to focus on the secondary couples? Anyway, I'm sorry if I've offended you or overstepped myself, I'm kinda new to fanfiction and I'm not sure of the proprieties.
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  • From ANON - nette on June 26, 2006
    again luved the chapter and wish that u would kill naraku already but as we know thats not gonna happen as of yet so i wil suffer as inu suffers while that kumo bastard lives. as always can't wait to read more and update soon.
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  • From ANON - nette on June 26, 2006
    again good chapter. i really want to see inu kick naraku's ass for just a moment if possible or hav tsukiko scratch him, something :). and sessh i feel so sorry for him but at least he still has his children and wat will their father do. will he help out in finding inu. update soon and as always luved the chapter.
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  • From ANON - teddybomber on June 26, 2006
    I've got to say you are the most awesome person alive!!!!! I love your stories so much. You have officially gotten me into sesshomaruXinuyasha fanfics! thank you so much for writing this amazing fanfic it's the best I've read. You deserve a hi five and a hug. Also thanks for updating so soon you got me hooked on this story. It's so good I've bookmarked it WOOT! WOOT! Anyways can't wait till the next chapter I mean whats going to happen to Inuyasha! Oh yeah you got me going there on Sess and Inu cuddling I was expecting a lemon. Darn! oh well seems like theres not going to be a lemon for a while seeing as inuyasha has been taken by Naraku. Tear! oh well the story must go on. Love ~Teddy Bomber*` FIFA 2006 (sorry had to add that I love soccer :p sue me) bye bye! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Mari on June 16, 2006
    I like this story. My ONLY real problem is the use of parentheses. It's a little excessive. Because with them, you are calling attention to something important and further explaining it, if you do it too often it becomes awkward for some reason. Also you can use other methods to do this. Maybe by use of dashes or rearranged sentence structures. But overall, I like the story and the ideas.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on June 13, 2006
    I gotta say after reading #54 I ALMOST wanted to do a happy dance when I found out you had named one of the pups Arekusu. That name is definitely a combo of the 2 brothers personalities. Too bad there wasn't a Gina..oh well.

    Anyway we are FINALLY getting to the nitty gritty and Naraku makes his sadistic appearance again, but I'm confident Inuyasha will get his chance of vengeance. Hell I'd like to see him cut loose....
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  • From ANON - SP777 on June 12, 2006
    Just taking the time to review a little bit...
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    Man! What have you been doing updating every dating every 4 days?!? The last time I left before the site was down I was at #36....Good Lord! how did I miss 20 chapters??? I can see 9 or 10, but then again you did have a tendency to add chapters quick.

    In #45, I liked how you explained how mates attract each other [through Kouga of course], even though I've seen it explained by various authors, not every one can make it sound plausible.

    ..and poor Sesshoumaru, an actual VICTIM of uncertainty while dealing with his mate. O_O ... :-)

    anyway once I actually finish reading all of this I'll review again, in the meantime gotta go for now.
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  • From ANON - nette on June 11, 2006
    well i don't want to kill you but i do want to kill naraku damn spider demon. poor sessh :( i wonder wat his father and everyone else will think especially his father. i hope the pups are okay at least. please update soon. oh and don't let naraku do anything to tsukiko.
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  • From ANON - Juukai on June 09, 2006
    Another cliffy! You will be excecicuted violently as Naraku most likely will be! You evil, evil cliffy person, you! Update soon, though, yeah? I keep looking forward to reading new chapters every week. ^w^ Yes, I love your story. My boyfriend even has me explain it to him sime he won't ever read it since it's yaoi.
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  • From ANON - nette on June 06, 2006
    u meanie, but ur a meanie in a good way. damn that naraku. damn him to hell but wat will sesshy do, please hurry and update. this is torture :(
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  • From ANON - moonshinegirl on June 05, 2006
    stop beieng so cruel make him disapear alrady. inuyasha has suffered enought!
    please don't involve that litlle girl in something evil that be just plain cruel
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  • From ANON - Juukai on June 02, 2006
    CURSE YOU AND YOUR CLIFFY! CURSE YOU LIVE WITH NARAKU IN HHHHEEEEEEEEEEEE-(o.o)-CK! Bet ya didn't expect that, now did ya? BUT STILL< I CURSE YOU! And right before I nice sexy, or sex-filled, take your pick of wording, night too....I will kill Naraku myself, god damn it. GGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR....Update soon, pwease? ;-;
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