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By : Avarwen

From ANON - ArchNemesis on May 18, 2006
That was classic! as I read down I was cracking up at Inuyasha. He didn't care what the healers were saying, he was going to have that baby no matter what! Call it what you like but when my water broke I thought I sprung a leak. Luckily, I was at home when it happened. I can't wait for the pups to be born.

Oh, I wounder how Sesshoumaru is going to react to being a daddy. Inu no Taisho and Izayoi must not know yet - this should be interesting. And mention of them, I must admit that when it got hot and heavy with them I was thinking (hm, Inuyasha or Sesshoumaru should hear them going at it) and low and behold it's there. I nearly fell out of my chair for that one. Poor Sesshoumaru, he just might have images of his parents now every time he sees them or for the most part blush from the thought.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon, I hope to see Rin and Shippou in action again, maybe get Kouga back on track ^_~

Nemesis ^_~
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From ANON - ArchNemesis on May 16, 2006
ch46...Well, at least someone is talking to Inuyasha about another mean of birthing his pups. I was in the hospital for a day and a half before they came up with that decision.

I love the chapter. Inuyasha is Inuyasha. I'm surprised that Sesshoumaru didn't get shouted at as well seeing as he was the one who put Inuyasha in the sitiuation in the first place, but seeing that the healers made the suggestion...

I'm sure the Sesshoumaru will talk Inuyasha into having the surgery if he knew that would be the *only* way for him to have the pups safely.

Excellent work! I'm off to the next chapter.

Nemesis ^_~
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From ANON - ArchNemesis on May 16, 2006
ch45...That was too funny. I love Shippou he's a cutie pie.

Rin is turning into my favorite for this. She's going to make sure that her sister gets hooked up with someone no matter what. I'm rather shocked that Kouga joined in the mate hunter, so to speak, but I guess that's because he wanted to be near Rin...whatever turns him on, right?

Excellent work! Can't wait to get to the next chapter.

Nemesis ^_~
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From ANON - ArchNemesis on May 15, 2006
Ah, the joys of pregnancy...I remember those days and can totally relate to Inuyasha. Poor Sesshoumaru. Just how many pups will they have or is that a surprise? Well, it will all be over soon, but what's this, something is stirring in the air and Inuyasha can sense it. And Kaugra is being an out right bitch. I do Rin someone for her because it seems she needs to get laid.

Shippou was a nice touch. I hope to see more of him ^_~ and Sounga was being its nasty little self, nothing new there.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~
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From ANON - ethere on May 03, 2006
hi, i'm a new reader and shall be eagerly anticipating new updates. quite a good story you have here. also, i'm sure that someone has already explained this, but the "ko" at the end of names marks it as a female's. it is the character meaning "child."
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From ANON - ladygizarme on February 11, 2006
yay, finally had time to catch up on the latest chapters! wowwww you got alot done :p Rin and Kouga gonna get together, eh? that'll be cute... wonder what's next on the agenda for Kagura and Naraku.. and wow, Inuyasha's human night and changing in Sesshoumaru's arms, and Sess' reaction to it--very endearing.. (lol makes me want to watch some human-Inuyasha eps..) can't wait to read the continuation to that last scene ^___^ (whenever AFF re-enables the edit options..)

~ lg
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From ANON - Greedluvr321 on February 10, 2006
Lol! Sorry about the names! I totally forgotten about InuPapa's Advisor dude! Lol! Such a grrrrrrrrrrrreat fanfiction! I absolutly looooooooove it!!!! Inu was funny in this one! Were the hell is INUPAPA!!? I love that guy, he's such an idiot lol! Sess and Inu fluff LOOOOOOOVE IT!! Keep writing, it's a great fanfiction!! L8RZ! (^ O ^)/~
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From ANON - SP777 on February 10, 2006
I'm gone 1 1/2 weeks and see what I miss? This is what happens when you start working over night and come home in the morning like a partial zombie. That is until you sit down on your couch...and SUDDENLY have the energy to watch TV, eat McDonald's pancakes AND look at a DVD. :-)

You know I WAS going to mention, Kanna IS the oldest incarnation born from Naraku. Don't ask why..that's just Naraku's twisted mind, but what does that say about the Creator of the story??? O_o

Anyway, it's your story so do what ya' want. Besides everything else is changed storywise anyhow...and THAT is what makes fanfiction. Making an existing story your OWN.

By the way, votes for GINA & Arekusu...it's gotta be something different, you see those other names almost ALL the time in fanfictions & animes.

A father was reading Bible stories to his young son. He read, "The man named Lot was warned to take his wife and flee out of the city, but his wife looked back and was turned to salt." His son asked, "What happened to the flea?"

Too bad you can't use that when one of the pups are born since I don't think many Japanese were familiar with the Bible stories associated in North America back in that Era. Unless you change the wording around.
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From KitenKaiba on February 08, 2006
I love your story I've been reading it since you posted the 8 chapter but never reviewed before but i am now and my i suggest that you have Inuyasha bear Naraku�s and Inuyasha�s pups that could prove very interesting in both short and long runs for one the difference between the time a half demon and 3 quarter demon takes to develop could curse early birth for Sesshoumaru�s pups and later the pup's growing up with the constant disapproval from others and maybe even the rejection of there siblings

I vote for Blade

But I think Hikari is a good name too it means light

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From ArchNemesis on February 07, 2006
ch33-36 Whoa! That was a lot to take in. What's up w/ Rin? One minute she's looking for her sister and then the next she gets side track by Kouga. Is he fallen for her? The would be interesting to see how that little romance turn out. Gosh, poor InuYasha just can't catch a break. He was so worried about Sesshoumaru throwing him out and never seeing him again because of his transformation that he never stopped to consider the other possibility. Sesshoumaru is quite the character. He likes what he sees with the 'human' side of InuYasha but is not so keen of the 'human-weakness' side.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Although, with things going how they're going I'm not sure when that will be. Please update as soon as the system is working again. I want to know if Rin ever remembers what she was hunting Kaguara down for, and if InuYasha gives Sesshoumaru consent to continue on that intimate journey that he (InuYasha) started.

Nemesis ^_~
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From ANON - Noir Black on February 06, 2006
So far this has been a good read, the characters seem to be real and their dialog flows very nicely.

Though when you explain things about the culture of the dog demons it has a feel of a text book. You might want to try different ways of explaining to the reader instead of just telling them. Like having characters telling eachother what is going on or what something means. *the best novels are always delt like this ^__~*

As for the baby names . . . I'm not going to pick one but I'll give you a nice peace of info on how parents choose names. They mostly choose names not by the means really but by their favorite Kanji. Or at least this is what I've been told myself. Also Kanji and the names themselves can have different meanings then just from the sound or Romanji of the name. For example Cloud and Spider sound the same but the kanji is totaly different.

Also Inuyasha means Dog Demon . . . I know this for sure.

I can wait for the next chapter. *sorry if I have spelling mistakes and what not; I'm running on almost no sleep*
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From ANON - wendeyghost on February 05, 2006
hey! i love this story it took three days to read cause i had to stop and go to work but it was well worth the wait.
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From Sunsinger on February 04, 2006
Do not take this the wrong way, but I've just finished reading chapter 14 and one thing really sticks in my craw. On 14, you spent half the damn pages on thanks and replying to reviews. Why? These people review that's good, in fact that's great. However, why do you think me or any other average reader would want to know what you discuss with your reviewers. Since most of us want the fic, we don't. In fact it's like listening to half a conversation because I have no idea what your reviewers said in the first place. I do not nor do I know of others who read other people's reviews on a fic.

So when you spend half a chapter with 'thank you's and replies it get tedious. And no matter how good a fic may be to me, I will not scroll through four pages of thank yous to get to it. As an author when someone obligingly gives me a review, I reply to them. I do. I email each and every one of them with thanks and a personalized reply. Sometimes I can't sit at a comp and do all of them at once, so i copy the revies, take them home, come up with replies and copy/paste them when I do have time.

Now, the fact that these reviews are taking up more and more space and I'm getting less and less fic, means I'll probably just say "forget it" and go read something else.

Oh, and before you take this as a flame or my being mean, try to take this as constructive criticism. Since I probably would enjoy this story more, if I didn't have to scroll through pages on non-fic related garbage.
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From ANON - angeluswilliam on February 04, 2006
I don't leave reviews all the time I just wanted to let you know that I am enjoying you story and am a faithful reader of yours.
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From ANON - ice demon allysandra on February 04, 2006
hey, that was fast. cool. poor inuyasha. it was so touching when sesshomaru said that. please continue.
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