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From ANON - Chibi-Porunga on December 27, 2005
Oh the angst! *pounces around* Nothing seems to be easy for these two and poor little Rin. Another great chapter ^.^ I actually have a firned who will read over some of the things I write and give me his opinion if I ask for it. I feel safer that way, I suppose. Hope ya had a great holiday ^.^
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From ANON - uzamaki liliana on December 27, 2005
GAH YOU HORIBLE HORIBLE PERSON HOW HOW HOW COUD YOU END IT LIKE THAT GAH WRITE SOON THAT WAS EVIL GAH HOW DARE Y OU FINISH IT THERE I SWAE IF YOU DO NOT UPDATE I WILL CRY AND LOCK YOU IN A DUNGON WITH SESHOMARU
bye the way I relly liked this chapter
thax alot for writing it

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From ANON - Taicrazy on December 27, 2005
As wonderful as always!
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From ANON - Crazy Fangirl 0098 Sesshy on December 27, 2005
I adore it!
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From ANON - Lill on December 27, 2005
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!! DUH! That's just so obvious!

ILOVEIT!

Heh...MELIKE! ^_^

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From ArchNemesis on December 26, 2005
I've got to know: Where you at Fanfiction.Net? If so what happened? I was looking for this fic there and couldn't find it.

Nemesis

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From ANON - Deity on December 26, 2005
You really know how to keep us on the edge of our seats, don't you? I was......angry that it ended like that.....not because it was bad or anything, I just wanted to see what was going to happen next. Anyway, keep up the excellent work and I'll see you/review again in chapter....fourteen if I remember correctly......Well, until then, bye. ^_^
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From ANON - uzamaki liliana on December 26, 2005
GAH SESHOMARU GET THERE GET THERE FAST OMG POOR YASH update for all that is same in this world please don't lat that pig (naraku) rape yasha please please
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From ANON - Chibi-Porunga on December 25, 2005
Nooo! Poor Inuyasha!! >.> Eventhough Naraku is kinda hot....but, what about Sesshie!?!?
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From ANON - Snowfall on December 25, 2005
Oh, man! The suspense! Will Sesshoumaru be able to save him? Will he be too late? And if he is, will he hate Inuyasha? Aaaach! You can't leave us hanging like this! I'm sure that you so enjoy doing that though, leaving us hanging by our fingernails. Devious little author.

Well written. Can't wait for the next installment!

Merry Christmas!

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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From ANON - Lill on December 25, 2005
I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! But...Why did you have to stop before the 'fun' part?
*Sigh* Well...It was as heavenly as always!

Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
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From ANON - Naraku's mistress who ties him to the bed and rides him till he bleeds... on December 25, 2005
WHY DID YOU STOP THERE?! I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!
I WANNA SEE NARAKU FUCK THE HELL OUTTA INUYASHA!!!

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From ANON - Kaorustalker30 on December 25, 2005
Chapter 12. You know, I've just realized that I have no sure way of ever figuring out how to pronounce 'yaoi'. I mean, sticking to Japanese regular pronounciations: yaoi would be ya-o-i (ya Oh E); but it could possibly be a Chinese/Japanese blur of pronounciation: yao-i (yow E). No matter how many people I ask (and you're right - people don't exactly look at you nicely when you ask them that question, but I think it's more because they have no idea what the hell I am talking about rather than what I am actually saying), no one's ever been able to answer me. I just say, 'ya-oi' (sounds more like 'yow Oh E' though when I do it lol), I am totally going on the assumption that it's like 'Kaori' (Cow ri) though. *blinks* I've JUST realized that I have way too much fucking time on my hands.

Again, to the actual review ('Sidetracked' is my middle name! Haw-chaw!): Is it bad that I knew exactly when Kouga and Inuyasha started talking right from the anime? lol As soon as I saw "mutt-face" I backtracked, blinked, then laughed (in that order). It makes me nostalgic whenever I see Inuyasha and Kouga arguing, I love their "We hate each other's guts, but we don't really want each other dead" (except for that one time) attitude. In fact, some of the best scenes are those where Kouga and Inuyasha bicker (and whenever Sesshomaru speaks in his 'affronted' manner. You know the one, "You dare think you are worthy of this Sesshomaru? How laughable!" Ah, especially when Sesshomaru was going after Totousai, now that was a scene to remember). But, ah, less talk of the anime, more talk of the story: WTF?! I couldn't help reading that chapter's ending and thinking - WTF?! It's like, what happened to the love? Inuyasha is moody (scare~ee) and Sesshomaru is bossing him around (as usual), but this time Inuyasha completely loses it. Again, where is the LOVE?! And why exactly IS Inuyasha so pissed? I connected with him on some points, but all his frustration totally lost me on others, is he that upset with how quickly things have changed between himself and Sesshomaru; or is it more like their mating has posed a link between their minds and some of Inuyasha's frustration is really Sesshomaru's (because undoubtedly he's frustrated as well)? Amazingly, I am starting to dislike Naraku in this fic (and me being an "I LOVE THE BAD GUYS!" type of person, this is very new for me) and hope that something stops him from killing Inuyasha (or Someone.) All in all, I am becoming more than addicted to this story - you are a chapter machine! lol Merry Christmas (It is now 12:45 AM, December 25th, so yeah Merry Christmas!)
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From ANON - Kaorustalker30 on December 25, 2005
Chapter 11. Naraku means hell? Wow, the perfect name for him I guess (I love Naki-sama {and I love to butcher his name also lmao}). I know Kagura means something akin to 'music' and Kanna means 'godless', (Rin [depending on the kanji] can mean anything from fish scales to zero, or to be specific: it can mean diamonds, companion, cold, forest, ring, bell, etc.); but I've never thought to look for Naraku's meaning - I always figured it was a synonym for Onigumo (meaning spider demon - or literally, demon spider). Something I found amusing: kumo can also mean cloud, so if someone didn't like nigori, Naraku would easily become 'Hell made from a/the cloud demon' or 'Cloud Demon's Hell'... So. Weird. I'm not even going to get started on the chaos that comes with Sesshomaru's name... but, if you ever figure out the real meaning, I'd love to know it lol Oh, and I remember you posed a question a while back: Izayoi means the 16th moon, lit. 'the moon climbs pausing', I believe that's the moon where its mostly full, but is missing a sliver off the side (when its waning, obviously)... Speaking of moons, are there going to be any new moons in the story? *wink, wink, nudge*
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From ANON - Kaorustalker30 on December 25, 2005
Chapter 10. Your rants are always amusing (and very true). I personally believe that Christmas has absolutely nothing to do with Christ anymore (despite the name's origin) and should therefore not be offensive to anyone. In all honesty, why the hell can't I say "Merry Christmas"? And if anyone feels that Christmas is still about religion, then please tell me - how is me receiving a Xbox360 and Kingdom Hearts 2 (I HOPE!) a celebration of Christ's birth? Face it: most people from age 1 to age 25 think of Christmas as a time to get stuff, *I* have never seen a 6 year old say "Mommy! Christ was born today right?! I want to pray to him!" or a 26 year old say "Ah, yes, Christ was born today" as opposed to "AWESOME! I GOT A NEW GAME!" or "Oh... more clothes... again... Thanks ma..." *Looks at what was written, blinks* But, THAT is not why I'm writing (typing) this review lmao (totally sidetracked again)

To the actual review: Now, that was sex that I can honestly say, I didn't cringe while reading. The whole time I just sat there trying my damndest not to have a heartattack (I'm pretty sure my pulse skyrocketed during that scene) and also trying to not have a meltdown in the process. I almost failed. My God was that hot. Sesshomaru sucking- durrrr *brain short-circuits* Bah, most of the time (for some particular reason) written bj scenes never actually capture my attention (I mostly just skim over 'em, to be honest), but holy fuck! I never thought Inuyasha (or Sesshomaru) could be so HOT doing that. I LOVE DEBAUCHED INUYASHA! *beams ecstatically* And the way you had Inuyasha ready to kick ass when Sesshomaru bit him - you are amazing. I will most likely forever love your writing from just how you manage to keep Inuyasha in character, even in moments like those. Awesome job!
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