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By : Avarwen
  • From ANON - Kaorustalker30 on December 25, 2005
    Well, it's time to get off my lazy ass and actually review again (bah, I'm real bad with commitment). And since this is going to be long, I'm splitting up my reviews. There are going to be 4 LONG ones.

    Chapter 8. *dumbfounded* That chapter will be forever etched into my psyche. Lil' ole innocent me (*roaring laughter from best friend who is sitting right next to me*) had just been happily reading that delightfully intriguing chapter and *WHAM* sex with words! Now, to put that sensefully: I was reading and then that whole scene with Inuyasha begging Sesshomaru happened and even though I had been fully aware that, yes, they were doing an awful lot of panting and moaning - the idea never really hit me until I read: ‘Do you feel that? Do you feel me?’. I think I got a nosebleed at that precise moment because the image of Sesshomaru pressed up against Inuyasha and SAYING THAT (even though I have heard much more naughty things) totally blew my mind. I thought of that scene throughout my entire Final that day. Fucking HIGHLY DISTRACTING. Oh, and for your glossary: onegai shimasu is more 'I beg of you!' and onegai is please... *Imagines Inuyasha panting THAT and spasms* (Don't ask me why, but whenever someone says 'Onegai shimasu!' to me, they always sound out of breath - and naturally I link that to sex. *sigh* I am such a pervert.)

    Chapter 9. Flushing, confused, tender Sesshomaru... *giggle* I so loved that. Assertive Inuyasha (holy shit at the reverse of roles there!) Note: does Leiko mean arrogant? When Inuyasha called Sesshomaru 'arrogant', I thought of the word Leiko (this is more of a girls name than an actual word in Japanese) and I've heard that it meant arrogant, but I have no idea. *I* know of no Japanese 'L' words (considering how L is hard to pronounce), but maybe I missed one? Er, was just wondering if you knew (totally went off topic there).
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  • From ANON - Weathered on December 24, 2005
    Hehe, I loved the story! I hope you update soon, because this fanfic amuses me beyond belief!! I don't know why, it just does. And your rants are interesting.

    Yes, I read every word of your rants.

    >.>


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  • From ANON - Deity on December 24, 2005
    Wow. That was absolutely amazing. I just read through all twelve chapters of your story today and I am thrilled that I decided to take a peak into this story. ^_^ I am more than a little impressed by your writing skills, it makes me wish I could write like that.....but then again, I wouldn't expect to have anywhere near such quality as you have built up into your story. I look foreward to the thirteenth chapter and until then, I suppose this is Good Bye. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 24, 2005
    go rin go!
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  • From ANON - Chibi-Porunga on December 23, 2005
    Ooo, I think this chapter was your best written yet ^.^ Yeah, I agree...damn people trying to rewrite your stuff; bah! *shakes a fistin fury then gets distracted by a penny* Ooo..shiny! Once again, excellent chapter and I looked forward to the next ^.^
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  • From ANON - uzamaki liliana on December 23, 2005

    .3+++++++++++333333333333333333333333333


    LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT AND THAX SOOO MUCH FOR UPDATING SO FAST AND MARRY CHRISTMAS ( or whatever you celebrate)
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  • From ANON - Kiara on December 23, 2005
    Nice! I like Rin and totally loved the fight! Go Inuyasha!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome job there. Please, update soon and Merry Christmas!
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  • From ANON - Lill on December 23, 2005
    You know I love it! Heh...Who wouldn't?

    Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
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  • From ANON - inufangirl007 on December 23, 2005
    nice chapter! i hope sessy makes it in time, and that inu and sess make-up! Mabye they need marrige councling, lol!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on December 23, 2005
    More of a comment than review..
    ********
    Yeah, it was a compliment. Sorry if it didn't come out clear, I do have a tendency to ramble. :-)

    Plus, sorry if what I said came out harsh, I also have a tendency to be TOO blunt & out-spoken, so it sounds either harsh or rude. One of the things I DON'T like about being on-line because it's hard for me to let folks know I'm just giving a straight forward answer, especially when you're talking to folks for the first time, no harm intended.

    ..and yeah, I wasn't trying to put down 'first-time' writers, I'm just saying in GENERAL. Because, in all fairness, I've seen first-timers put out good storylines & plots and then you have first-time writers who get it by the 3rd or 4th story. So, I wanna be clear I was not putting any First-time writers down, if they happen to read these reviews.

    ..and these folks are not necessarily on AFF.net, I'm talking other fanfiction sites.

    Hey I've been around longer than you ...7 years. :-) Have you done anything I may have seen, possibly on FF.net?

    bye for now...


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  • From ANON - Chibi-Porunga on December 22, 2005
    Ooo! Very interesting things going on! O.O!! Poor Inuyasha...always getting himself in Death's way. Yeah, I know what ya mean - I get lazy and decide to not go back and fix mine either ^.~
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  • From ANON - uzamaki liliana on December 22, 2005
    what an interesting chapter I was wondering if you are going to pair rin and kaugra up?? I thpught this becouse of that coment rin made about not wanting naraku to hurt kaugra?? well thax for updating and I'm looking forward to the next chapie

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  • From PolkaDot on December 22, 2005
    Very nice, the plot thickens, you see Naraku is fun.
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  • From ANON - Lill on December 22, 2005
    There's no need to tell you how much I love it!
    IT'S HEAVENLY INCREDIBLE!!!!!! WOW!!!

    Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Rawben on December 22, 2005
    wow! great chapter! i hope sess keeps a close eye on yasha!!
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