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By : Avarwen
  • From ANON - Kiara on December 11, 2005
    Really great! I love Inuyasha's inner conflict. I really hope dispite his father's warning Inuyasha tries to run! It would be so much fun! Anyway, I can hardly wait for the next chapters. Please, update soon! Bye!
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  • From ANON - Silver Rose Fox on December 11, 2005
    So far so good.
    Are you going to make it a story that has time frame?
    like Inu's dad said in one year you will bond?
    and they don't see each other for a year or so. maybe more?
    It has nothing to do with the serier?
    WHOOOOOOOOOh this is going to be good.
    good luck on the brain thing though.
    update soon please.
    Silver Rose Fox
    A.K.A
    Foxxy.^_*
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  • From ANON - Chibi-Porunga on December 11, 2005
    Ooo! Another great chapter. ^.^ Poor Inuyasha always being pestered by Myouga.
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  • From ANON - Kaorustalker30 on December 10, 2005
    I've been reading this fanfic ever since the first chapter was posted (about 2 weeks ago?) and I am just getting around to reviewing it now. (I am chronically lazy by nature *nod*).
    Alright (this is gonna be long!) - I really like this idea so from the beginning I was partial to this story, but the way you write Inuyasha; I think that's the real pull to this (for me at least) - it's rare to see him written this way. I mean sure, I've seen him curse, rant and rave, act like an idiot, act like an asshole, fight Sesshomaru over ANYTHING (and then after all that shit, bend over for Sessha like a bitch in heat); but I've never seen him have a rational (non-chaotic) side without being completely bi-polar. And I've never seen him have the audacity to talk back to his own FATHER either (for the record, I winced when I read that - I was entirely of the belief that Inuyasha was going to become Inutaisho's [or Inu no Taisho's] personal scratch post. But then I realized, scratch posts are for cats, aren't they? Inuyasha's more likely to become his otousan's chew toy lol). Normally, Inuyasha's always too emotional, too angry, too stupid, too talkative, or in other words - too girly (no offense to anyone) - but, you've managed to level him out a bit, I greatly appreciate that (and hopefully, he doesn't turn into a headcase after he gets mated *begs of you*).

    Other Comments (Suggestions): There were a bit of things that puzzled me and some grammatical errors, but they didn't really detract from the reading. With the Glossary words - I'm not sure (because I am not native Japanese) but, I thought yukata was the Japanese equivalent of a house robe or a bath robe? (If I can remember correctly, it literally means 'bath clothing' - but since it is a casual style of dress, it can be worn as a summer kimono.) I don't really have a problem with it, but it threw me for a loop when I didn't see, "haori, inner haori, and hakama" lol (Personally, I call it inner haori, but I'll have to find the actual term one day.) For Hakama, I'm not sure if that was a typo or not but, Japanese words can be singular/plural - so unlike 'pants' (S being used for plurality) the word would be 'hakama' without an S (to mean both 'pant' and 'pants'). Again, I'm not sure if it was a typo, but I saw it twice (both in your fic and in your glossary) so I just wanted to point that out to help you find any typos and what not. As for taiyoukai/daiyoukai - I've seen it either way. (And I laugh everytime I see "Inu no Taisho means lord of the dogs"; I can't stop thinking, "Inu no Taisho - LORD OF THE DANCE!" irish accent and all lmao, I'm insane.) Anyway, I'll be looking for your next chapter! Sorry for the long review!
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  • From ANON - Ann on December 10, 2005
    Updade! pleaz? I lurv it so far. Youre good!
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  • From ANON - I love to review! on December 10, 2005
    GREAT! I just luv the way you manage to keep Sesshomaru and Inuyasha in character!
    Sesshomaru kick ass! That hottie is too hot, too sexy, too pretty for Inuyasha!
    Even ,though, Inuyasha is actualy very pretty too!
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  • From ANON - Fluffyluver on December 10, 2005
    O.O! UPDATE! I agree with Lemon crazy: Add the damn lemon!
    I wanna see Fluffy...Umm...I mean...Sesshoumaru make love to Inuyasha!
    No, actually I want to see Sesshoumaru FUCK Inuyasha! MWAHAHAHAHAHAH!

    Go go Fluffy! XD Umm...I mean...Sesshoumaru! Go go Sesshoumaru! ^_^;
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  • From ANON - Your mommy! Just kidding! on December 10, 2005
    Great!
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  • From ANON - Lemon crazy on December 10, 2005
    "A couple of more chapters" !?
    I CAN'T WAIT THAT LONG!
    ARGH! PLEASE HURRY UP WITH THE LEMON!

    Anyway: I like it so far...ADD THE LEMON!!
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  • From ANON - Taicrazy on December 10, 2005
    how can it be that your story is so...so...wonderful!....?
    It's incredible! i doubt you would be able to write a bad story.
    remember to update! :)
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  • From ANON - Tyranee Lilliana on December 10, 2005
    ^_^ I stil love it alot!

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anonymos on December 10, 2005
    O,O I like it!

    It is great! Plz add more chapters soon!
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  • From ANON - Lill on December 10, 2005
    To the above reviewer: For the seventh time: YOU'R NOT MY BOYFRIEND!!!!!!


    Ahem...Anyway: Please update! I love this story sooooo much!

    Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Jonatan (Lill's little boyfiend) on December 10, 2005
    Ummm...Nice I think...I'm just not into yaoi, since I'm a guy, but if my Lill likes it, then I like it! I hope...
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  • From ANON - Amalie (A friend of Lill) on December 10, 2005
    Hmmmm...Lill is right! This story is good!
    Update!

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