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By : Avarwen

From ANON - Sekre on September 09, 2006
At first I was skeptical about reading this, thinking: "Sixty-five chapters??? Fuck that!" And I sort of left this story alone, and after a few updates later combined with the mixture of nothing else to read, I clicked on your story and I'm so GLAD I did. I was hooked immediately and was cursing myself for not reading this the first time I saw it. I probably spent the last few days reading this, since I have classes and stuff, but wow - Great story. Some authors put thought into their story, but you can tell that they aren't putting a hundred-percent into it. But with you, I can tell that your looking for all the possible loopholes/problems that might occur with your fic and you know where you're headed. I love it!

I really don't know what to expect from this fic - a happy ending, sad ending, bittersweet ending ...I can see it ending in soo many ways and that makes it all suspensefull.

I would go more in depth here but I just spent the last three-ish hours reading, so I'm feeling rather laaaazy. Just know you're doing a great job!
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From ANON - LQ on September 05, 2006
You're good at cliffhangers. Very good. *deep breath* Whoo! I made it through all 65 chapters and boy am I glad! I initially passed over this fic, partly because of the number of chapters, but mostly because I'm wary of AU fics like this. Most of the ones I have read have had the characters be painfully out of character. You however, have managed to avoid that rather well. Especially with Sesshomaru. Inuyasha can be OOC sometimes, but Sesh, even when being emotional, is still Sesh, at least to me.

I adore the healer...whose name i will never remember to spell. When she bitch-slapped Sesh, I literally burst out howling with laughter. Priceless scene, priceless. The way you are writing Rin is very interesting too. I've not seen much of the series and I really only have the 2nd and 3rd movies to go off of on her character, but still, I'm liking her in this fic. Hopefully there will be more interactin between her and Kouga.

This fic helped me pass a sinus infection and I am greatly looking forward to more chapters, no matter how long they take. =) In the meantime, good luck with school and life in general. *hugs and offers gift of fresh ramen* ((it rocks living a mile from a ramen restaurant that stays open till 2am))
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From ANON - colonolhavoc on September 03, 2006
UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE GODS LET SESSHOMARU TEAR THAT LOWLY, DISGUSTING, DISMAL EXCUSE FOR A HALF-DEMON'S BALLS OFF AND SHOVE THEM DOWN HIS THROAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok I'm better now. just needed to get that off my chest. ^.^ Hey what did Naraku do wit Tsukiko(sp?) You may have told us but since technically I'm banned from the computer I'm kind of skimming my fav fics so I don get caught. Love the story though. My favorite Inuyasha one!
luv, havoc
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From ANON - Sir Magus on September 03, 2006
Inuyasha is insane? hmm that could explain alot. anyways at least now he has some hope for the future-wat with Inutaisho an Sess coming to save him so thats good. great chpater pls update soon k?
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From ANON - nette on September 03, 2006
i'm glad to see you have updated and that the story is really getting interesting now. naraku that bastard i wonder what he has planned and how inu will be part of it. i hope sesshy and inutaisho get there in time to save inu and tsukiko. i wonder where she is anyway? i cant wait to read more so i hope you update soon. as always good writing
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From ANON - Incessant_Darkness on September 02, 2006
wow that was wonderful. though I just now realize that I've missed chapter 64. But that's fine cause that meant I got a double dose this time through. Great chapters. Both of them. I can't see things are finally coming together. And Sesshomaru was less depressing and more the demon we all know and love in chapter 64. Anyways I love how this fic is turning out though I'm a bit worried now about the collar and the lasting effects it may have along with how the hell Sesshomaru is going to get it out cause the process promises to be down right painful.

Anyways I'm also quite anxious to see how Sesshomaru is ever going to be able to have a regular love life with Inuyasha after all this although I'm sure you have a way. Can't wait to see how all this pulls together in the end. But however things go I'm sure it'll be wonderful.

- Incessant_Darkness
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From ANON - SP777 on September 01, 2006
As a matter of fact I've seen it but maybe I need to re-watch it and
see what it is that have folks ticked off....other than the fact
Sesshomaru didn't have much of a part in it, maybe?

Other than that, it was alright. Not spectacular, but at this point I
think the producers of the movies & series were about ready to
'give it a rest' anyway. Until Ms. Takahashi FINISHES the darn
story.

Oh, speaking of the Inuyasha story, it has a BIG major plot twist
in it towards the end that involves Sesshomaru's mother...and something happens
to Rin that is a major blow to Sesshomaru. If you didn't know...

But I won't say...don't want to spoil it. :-)

Hmm, some of those signs of Dehydration, I happen to be suffering except for clammy skin, dizziness, chills, hallucinations [Thank God!] and swollen tongue.
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From ANON - riddlestar on September 01, 2006
very well writen (as usual), im glad u updated within a reasonable time span, hehe. neway im looking fwd to the next chapter..im off to study for my terms!
ciao~
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From ANON - *blue_raine* on September 01, 2006
*screams* that last chapter was so good
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From ANON - Minea on August 31, 2006
I felt bad for Inuyasha I thought his hallucination of Sesshomaru was sad. I hope Naraku didn't do anything to Tsukiko I really liked her after she tried to save Inuyasha. I was glad Inuyasha knew they were coming for him. I bought the fourth movie thinking its going to be just as good as the others but it wasn't. You're right it was rushed and I didn't even realize that Inuyasha got off the island and he had that mark. And if the kids were scared why didn't they try to escape before the mark was placed on them. It was just them so they could have just escaped. The girl who threw her self in fire thing (i forgot what its called) was annoying. Kikyou only said Inuyasha's name once and the kids act like he was there longer. And Sesshomaru scene was confusing. Argh, sorry back to your story. Can't wait for your next chapter. Hopefully Inuyasha sees Sesshomaru soon.
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From ANON - Katbites on August 30, 2006
Ignore my last review. I should've realised someone would already have mentioned it ^_^;
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From ANON - Katbites on August 30, 2006
I like this a lot. I've got a bit of a soft spot for Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha fics, and for m-preg ones too. You've got an original idea going here. I will finish reading it after some breakfast, I promise. But anyway.

I apologise ahead of time for being a Japanese!nazi. You mentioned that you wanted corrections for the glossary bit, and I know that being picky about language is one thing that annoys a lot of people, so I'm sorry if that's the case. Sorry too if someone already mentioned this earlier, but here we go.

I think your glossary is very good. Though quite a few of the words are typically from the show, you've got the vast majority down pat. Just a few minor mistakes, but I used to make the same ones all the time.

On the subject of 'daiyoukai', I think the 'dai' is something to do with first. Don't ask me how to translate it though, probably your translation was right, but just thought I'd point it out, 'cause I'm full of useless information like that. ^_^

Japanese words have no plurals. I think there are maybe two or three exceptions, but I don't know what they are. It's wrong to say 'hakamas'. 'Hakama' is the word for the pant things. It's when you say things like 'two bakas' that makes it confusing. It should be 'those two baka', but even to me that just sounds wrong. I think that if you have a number in front it makes it more natural, for an English speaker anyway, to say 'two bakas' rather than 'two baka'. But then it sounds normal to me, to say 'two pairs of hakama' rather than 'two hakamas'. Am I actually making any sense here? 0_0; It's just that to me, this is where the grammar gets a little foggy when you put Japanese words into English sentences. Ack! I'm rambling again.

I think 'youkai' is more monster than demon, but that might just be me being picky. It does mean demon, but in a very general sort of way. I think I've been watching Tactics too much; there seems to be more differentiation between types of demon in Tactics than in Inuyasha. In Inuyasha, it sounds as if every demon is a youkai.

Think that's about it. Nothing big, just thought you might like to know. ^_^ Keep up the cool plot, and I hope this helps a bit. I'll let you know if I find any more, if you haven't died of boredom and confusion after this review. ^_^;
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From ANON - *blue_raine* on August 27, 2006
awwww im sorry you're in a bad mood. i just wanted ta tell you that your writing gets better with every chapter et you updated so quickly this time im so happy reading your fic is better than watching the show :0)
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From afromice on August 26, 2006
ACK! GET BACK HERE AND WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER. I love your story. I'm working on one of my own. Your story gave me the idea. So um yeah hurry up. PLEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEE?????????

Mouse-Chan
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From ANON - Minea on August 22, 2006
I really like this story. Before I was never interested in Sesshomaru/Inuyasha parings I couldn't see them together. But your story made me a fan of that pairing now.:) You write really good each chapter pulls the reader in it makes you anticipate how the story is going to end. I like how you describe the feelings and emotions of Inuyasha and Sesshomaru. I thought it was so sweet that Sesshomaru accepted Tsukiko as his child. I feel so bad for Inuyasha I hope Sesshomaru finds him fast and saves him. Can't wait for the next chapter I hope Naraku suffers a horrible horrible death. I recently saw the fourth movie too. I didn't really like it. It kinda disappointed me.
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